Elementary

comment wit votes plz

this is great! My daughter neeeeeds this, she sucks at math ;)

I always thought that was a funny analogy...



Heh.. Nice illustration.

ps - green on green looks supa nice!

haha! i like this idea A LOT. i think it could be stronger if it was a little more cartoony to more resemble an actual mathematical expression or whatever. like, accentuate the mouth to be shaped more like a

nice

I don't really wanna give it away that easily. I actually want it to be MORE detailed.. but this is what I can do

there's obviously some compression isssues with the cat tails. should i even keep those?

oh, man. the sub-to-work ratio was 4 to 1

now it's near even

straightened 47

darkened back leg

added placement in case I decide to sub

it looks a tad blurry to me.....is it just me?

i do need glasses....BAD!!

hehe i like the concept although it took a minute for me to get it.

some highlights on the gator would be nice. not sure if you need the cat tails although they don't bug me. ummmm, can't think of much else right now.

yeah doesn't look very blurry to me...

it is a little blurry because I had to shrink it down so much. why then sudden decline in supporters?

maybe dey juss don know son

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part of me says submit this now

part of me has an ounce of intelligence

I like it. For some reason it does look kinda fuzzy.

compression

to sub or not to sub

sub

really?

someone told me the big numbers need straight lines

put it in Flash and sub so we can zoom in!

omg the alligator mouth!!!! BEST MATH LESSON EVER.

I think what it'll come down to is how many people understand it.

Here I go subbing... last chance to critique

fixed the 7 and the color that was bugging me. here I sub

last chance any last comments please

I like it. It's a good concept.



I think the coloring looks a bit flat though. Keep working at it.



I think it should score well if you fix it all up.

ya the crocadile looks a bit rough and on his ight side you can see some white pix on his ridges

Croc is a bit flat too, put some values in there.

i think lose the plantlife, bc they are the same size and color as 21, and 21 needs to stand out compared to them.

I just went through all the comments trying to figure out what this was getting at before I finally saw the 21! Maybe try to make it stand out more? Overall, I think it's cute, edgy, and good for kids.



To make the illustration look more complete, I might add more reeds/grass and not space everything quite so evenly.

for the plant life, maybe just do simple lines implying flora and keep it to a minimum so the eye focuses on 21. and the croc does need some shading, which if you do it will be worth it for the scoring later.

nice... for me to poop on O_O... eh i'd buy it