Lol,cannibrolism...

Just saying, I like the text, but most people on Threadless hate text in a design. Love how they're high-fiving! Maybe have him turning the "brotisserie" with the other hand?

Well, I figure a lot of designs without text get printed but that doesn't necissarily mean the people on Threadless hate anything with typography. It's worth a shot!

Thanks for the comment and the suggestion is great! I just updated it to have his other hand turning the crank.

Improved with hand turning the crank, nicer eyes, larger design,e tc

Looks really good. I think it looks like it might be ready

Added outlining, smoke and highlights

LOL so much word play going on here!

funny stuff, love good puns. Though I'm not sure of the tie in from the skittles tag to "brotisserie"

My suggetsion technicality wise is that the guy getting baked has too long of a torso! the rope should end at his waist line but you've continued his body onward.

I make little mistakes all the time!

I'd suggest highlights on the guy turning the crank, and stronger highlights on the guy getting cranked as well. have some fun with that lightsource! its strong so set some contrast in there!

I'd add some more smoke underneath of him as well. Its correct being over top of him but aesthetically it would help having it under him as well.

all in all, very funny stuff!

And if you get a second check out my design as well!
The Break of DayIf you dig it, kick it with a vote! and if you double dig it lemme know what you think with a comment!

keep it up!

Thank you for the kind words and advice!

I think "Taste the rainbro" might throw people off a little bit, yes. I'm kind of hard pressed to think of anything better though... maybe something to replace just "rainbro" because that's the only part that's confusing, unless of course you take it as a hint at them being gay for each other. The "Taste the..." part works just fine because obviously food is involved so maybe... something like "Taste the magic".

Increasing the highlights on the tied up guy looks good, not so sure about highlights on the cranker. I'm going to try halftoning some highlights on him to make it more diffuse. More smoke also looks great!

Thanks again! 8)

line method half-toning for the highlights, what do you think?

Crazy fraternity ya got there bro. Great wordplay!

Definitely ready to submit.