Any suggestions? i was thinking use the staris and all, but this seemed funnier.

I think the ladders should be a little bit wider. remember it's on a shirt and it has to read from a bit of a distance.



it's a pretty sweet idea though :-)

its a rope not a ladder

Is that supposed to be the bride at the bottom?

yes

Is ther any way you could fix her cause to me it doesn't really look like a bride.

yes. i might use a ladder instead of the ropes now! I"M GOING CRAZY!

I agree, the bride & her flowers need more detail. Are those ladders or chains? If ladders, then they need to be wider...if chains make them less straight.

Overall this is a great design & unique. Just needs a few tweaks...I think it will do well here:)

any better?

maybe no shadow on the bottom?

i left something out in the last one

Much better.

I think that looks better than the previous. The bride looks better

i can't tell she's a bride...

I know it would be hard since you're working with such a small space but maybe adding a little face to the guy

i might, i just tried to be as less detailed as possible

no dont do that. submit

I was just thinking that if the black bg means it can be on a black shirt, i wouldnt do that cuz the groom blends in too much with it

u get a perfect view of him. all u need is the white and the shading of him on the cake. i think .

bump b4 it goes in the running