this is a collaboration between me and ryanbeam from emptees. He came up with a design using a feather and had some color forms at the bottom and had some supporting text next to the design. I saw the design and envisioned something with more details and without the text. After asking to collab on the idea this is where I was able to take the design.

any feedback is welcome.

I really love this design ! the colors are very beautiful and doing good with grey t-shirt.

If you have time please come give me you opinion on my critique

yeah, I think I'm at 7 colors right now so I could add either a highlight (light green) or a shadow color (Dark Green) to it.

i agree add another colour to the green, looks to flat yo!
other then that looks good

please critique

thanks, I'll do that.

is everything else working on this?

Nice! Original Position, too. In the middle it would look like a tie, which could add some fun to it.

If you have a moment, please let me know what you think of "Instant Summer".

Soo nicee!! what about doing it whit softer colours?
please, if you can take a look of my design and give me your opinion

have not found time to update this yet.