I'd love to hear any thoughts on what could be added, subtracted, or rearranged to make this a stronger design. Thanks!

Personally I don't think you have picked the right shade of blue for the greens you have used. Try a darker blue, or cream instead. The design looks just fine.

Yeah go to flickr.com to find blank tees. Good work on the art!

Also can you score and comment on my design?

http://www.threadless.com/submission/312043/It_s_not_easy_eating_greens

Looks good, maybe a different shirt color. It also might be too reminiscent of the 'Boy in the Weeds' tee.

Very clean illustration. I agree with changing the t-shirt color. Visually though it's lacking the kick I'd like. I'd love to see one or two locusts on the grass, and a staticky black cloud of locusts off in the distance, swarming in for the kill.

thank you for critiquing mine - it's much appreciated

sorry but it looks a bit bland, maybe add some glow to the grass or something? make it pop more or just change the shirt colour as Above ^ were saying. nice illustration thou

please critique here

I think it might be lacking substance... maybe make a bit more grass

Looks a little plain. Maybe try adding some clouds or birds?
Critique mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/81242/Kaleidoscope
Thanks!