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v1
Solo concert,
540 days ago, click to expand
v1
Solo concert,
540 days ago, click to hide
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jimmytan
on Dec 02 '10
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jimmytan
on Dec 02 '10
i done 70% i guess till here but colour on web seem abit down and weird do u think so?
evaeva
on Dec 02 '10
your favorite octopus!
BubuSam
on Dec 02 '10
Add some more music note lar~
Snozz
on Dec 02 '10
Looks good! Perhaps change the sparkles on the top to bubbles, and make the mouth a little bit smaller.
Suggestions for mine?
yeohgh
on Dec 02 '10
YAYAYA!!!! do more do more do more
Snozz
on Dec 02 '10
Sorry, that last link was broken.
sborrero
on Dec 02 '10
I think music notes would help alot. my two cents.
Critique mine!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/80981/Rocketeer
v2
Solo concert,
current version ago, click to expand
v2
Solo concert,
current version
Work in progress by:
jimmytan
on Dec 02 '10
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Version 1
- 540 days ago
Version 2
- 540 days ago
jimmytan
on Dec 02 '10
I just make the colour looks more sweet hmmm but still looks weird i don know....
anir
on Dec 03 '10
colors are definitely better , but i would drop the sparkles and add instead some more air bubbles here and there but not too many
also
if you have some time I would be grateful if you scored my design
octo shirt
hilaryleung
on Dec 04 '10
Jimmy! I'm loving the concept and palette!
The only thing I'd suggest is to make everything more consistent. All those wonderful details have slightly different styles.
- give all the fish similar eyes
- change the guitar position (so that he is playing correctly)
- more variety with the squids
- simplify the details on the saxophone
- maybe use the plants more wavy (in tune with the music?)
- perhaps change the bottom two squids to dancing turtles
You're a star Jimmy Tan! I absolutely love your work! These are only suggestions :)
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