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v1 Solo concert, 540 days ago, click to expand
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jimmytan
   jimmytan on Dec 02 '10
I just make the colour looks more sweet hmmm but still looks weird i don know....
anir
anir on Dec 03 '10
colors are definitely better , but i would drop the sparkles and add instead some more air bubbles here and there but not too many
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if you have some time I would be grateful if you scored my design octo shirt
hilaryleung
hilaryleung on Dec 04 '10
Jimmy! I'm loving the concept and palette!

The only thing I'd suggest is to make everything more consistent. All those wonderful details have slightly different styles.

- give all the fish similar eyes

- change the guitar position (so that he is playing correctly)

- more variety with the squids

- simplify the details on the saxophone

- maybe use the plants more wavy (in tune with the music?)

- perhaps change the bottom two squids to dancing turtles

You're a star Jimmy Tan! I absolutely love your work! These are only suggestions :)
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