this is my old work with some revise, i still like with this theme and i would like to resubmit to threadless, critique please. thanks :)

lol, I love it. Maybe make the punks face more like bird?

if you have a second:

http://www.threadless.com/submission/311024/Dream

http://www.threadless.com/submission/311022/GEOCOSMOS

Thanks for input ;)

Woo I really like this, nice style! And the splatters at the bottom are a good idea!

Only thing I'd maybe change is the tshirt colour, but I'm not sure what. Maybe Ivory? Just not plain white.

Hope you want to give me some feedback as well, appreciate it!
Oblivious Invasion

I really love this too, I think you should submit!

Thanks, i'll try with another tee colour :)

Woah!
That's really cool!

The rooster could be placed on the side of the tee, like the punk is. Eventhough i really like the way how the shape of the bird fades out...
And the red hanging thingies under the peak are missing! It looks a lot like a hen.
Otherwise i'd say it's ready for submission! Looks great on a white shirt in my opinion

If you have a spare minute, please score and comment on my design!
Bamboo Dealer :)

Thanks KaMi for your advice :)

haha great. sub !
the chicken has a weird face. try on purple tee maybe.
good luck


Btw my Alice's tea party is being scored ! you're welcome to vote and comment :-)

Good job on the art! Sub!

Can you score and comment on my sub?

http://www.threadless.com/submission/312043/It_s_not_easy_eating_greens

What? Purple oh no hehehe....
but anyway thank you for input :)

Since you're going to have to belt print this anyway, I agree that the rooster should go to the edge. But be aware that belt printing works best on monochrome images, because the colours can't be tightly registered -- see the documentation.

Jiffy Squid wants your opinion!

Sorry, wrong link in my previous post. Please critique Jiffy Squid!

What about making the rooster's body black (keeping the orange head, but feathers under the head black) to mimic the look of the punk a bit more? Very cool though!! What do you use for your linework? Photoshop? Illustrator? Just asking because it looks amazing (and I still haven't gotten the whole inking thing down)!!!

If you have time, would you mind checking out my design and critiquing? http://www.threadless.com/critique/80964/Alien_baby
I'd appreciate it a ton!!

Samantha's suggestion is good. Also, since I don't think this design is suitable for belt printing, keep away from the shirt edges.

Thank u samantha, i think that make sense :)

This is a new version, please critique :)

i like it looks greats on the tee

very good color and design...i prefer in white t shirt...try submit

please score my design
here

LIke it on the gray not the white. Pretty cool design. I think it's ready!

If you get a moment please comment on mine thanks!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/80621/Peace_Clown

i'd like to see more of the rooster or at least have him more on the right side too so it's symmetrical.

if you have time, please comment on my design so i can improve it. thanks!

cool!

The chicken's face is priceless! Good job.

Got time to critique mine?

i agree with chocolatepizza (great name) that the rooster needs more body, maybe with wing patterns matching the anarchy A, or the punk needs less. Also, i'd love to see a more defiant expression on the rooster. Roosters are scary!

Thank you for critique :) i try to revise with the body of rooster..

give more body to the rooster.. it doesnt balance very nicely.
except of that, the colors fits perfect together - i like the dynamism between those two!!
good luck with it!

If you feel like it, it will only take a second..
You can score my submission (I only have 1 day left!)
here:
++ Night Flight Light ++

thanks in advance in case!
have a nice day.

This is really awesome. You have a very printable style. But I'd lower the rooster, or raise him up so his beak is line up with the boy's nose. At the moment there is something a little odd about the way the mouths line up :/

Gay chicken? But yeah it looks pretty good. Mouths do look a little weird.

Critique mine? http://www.threadless.com/critique/81557/Rain_or_Shine

....is the guy trying to kiss the rooster?

The guy just the scare of chicken :)

make out!

yes, thx :)

HAHA
chicken's face is cute
submit this !
if u have time, please score mine!
cradle

WIP 3

that looks pretty sick. The black threads on the left are a darker black though... is that intentional? I would make it the same black more like v2

okey..thanks man :)

Definitely V3!
But put the bottom splashed part of the dude in V2 to V3, in V3 it's pretty weird imo, doesn't fit there.
I really like this design.

If you'll find some time...
SCORE my design please

okey, this is the last revision and i will submit soon..thank you for critique and advice :)

i was push this version into the running and wait for approval :)

HAH! Love it. I can find no legitimate critique to say other than great job and a successful design.

If you get a chance. Please hook a brother up.

http://threadless.com/critique/82116/quot_Your_baby_ain_t_sweet_like_mine_she_got_sauce_quot

Great Job!
if you have any spare time Plz Critique

yeah!
Very well done!
Good luck!

blind heart is up for scoring now!

This is awesome, I would buy it...

Haha this is great!
Critique mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/82202/Think_Pink
Thanks!

Thank you for support, this still pending approval, just wait for scoring, thanks everyone :)

nice.
I feel like the body of the chicken need more time spent on it. illustraton style is different.

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Thanks you guys and now up scoring and vote :) please vote if u like it :)
http://www.threadless.com/submission/316251/Braderhood

Y'know, I'm going to vote the crap out of this, I WANT this, man.

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