Spent a lot of time on this one so I want it to be as perfect as Aphrodite's cute butt. Thanks for any feedback.

lol, I like the octopus weapon :) and the faces. maybe work on the right hand of Zeus?

if you have a second:

http://www.threadless.com/submission/311024/Dream

http://www.threadless.com/submission/311022/GEOCOSMOS

I think this is amazing! the illustration is awesome. perhaps the text could be more harmonizing with the rest of the colors, but i think this is goode enough to submit for sure. consider the text. love it!

if you don't mind scoring mine, i'd appreciate it! thanks :)

amazing... epic even! submit this!!

please score my design: http://threadless.com/submission/311080/Mushroom_Soup

Thanks for feedback. Is Zeus' right hand bothering anyone else beside Waldemar?

no.. it's ace. love the detail

nice work and details are great !
;-)

you're welcome to comment on mine ;-) thanks !

Awesome! :)
Maybe it would look even cooler if all the bottom of the tee would be water? That looks kinda weird like this. Otherwise it's super well done. I think the hand looks great as is.

Please score and comment on my design!
Bamboo dealer :)

hahaha Poseidon plays dirty! submit

you're welcome to rate and comment my design

Thanks for feedback. I'm keeping hand as is but I did extend the water out a bit and I broke the clouds/waves up using cross-hatching. Plus a flashier presentation... Any thoughts, including on presentation, are more than welcome.

Thanks, and may the gods be with you.

Pretty much same as V2 but I played with the eyes a bit and tripped over myself to make it clear that the second slide offers info (like the fish Poseidon is throwing, etc.)

HAhah! That's awesome! Really good stuff man (or woman?)
I feel like there should be an electric eel somewhere in this, since it kind of is in between Poseidon's and Zeus' elements :D

Please, if you have time to, could someone give me some feedback on my design?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/80729/I_drowned_a_long_time_ago

Thanks!

Good work :) I like poseidon ejejee!! I think you can put more splash of water, thats it

can you check my critique please

I don't think the P's are necessary on Poseidon's breast plate.

also, the shadowy background shapes sort of dirty up the image. maybe they could be reworked or eliminated.

lastly, I think the water at the bottom should be better integrated into the shirt.

also maybe incorporate some white sea foam to give more life to the waves

This is so cool!!!!yeah I agree you don`t need the p,s on Poseidon.


Plz check mine

Oh man, thanks for all the great feedback! I ditched the P nipples, and I lost the background shapes entirely. I needed them initially to unify the two gods, but the spacing of the lightning bolts/ trident o that for me. I tried some white foam, but it didn't mesh with the way I already rendered the waves.

I think the white foam might work still, but only on the part where the waves fade out. It is really great though!

I like this one a lot! But I really enjoy the first version

Always love your style of artwork.

They are all really good

If you have time
rainmen

It needs more to integrate it. I probably like the 1st version best for that reason. Consider putting it on a silver shirt and mixing the wave and cloud colors in with the background to tie it all together.

whoah, great artwork again!!!
Personally I would prefer a little fun aspect in it - a small fish or octopus or other sea-stuff hung in Thor´s hair?

If you could spare some time, I would appreciate some critique on my thunderBird .

OK, I played with background a bit more but made the texture less obtrusive. I also sent a bottle of sparkling apple juice to your house. Did you get it?

I feel like adding other gods would make this design much better.

awesome, looks good, i wouldnt add more gods, it would be too much going on
but why is poseidon throwing sea creatures at zeus? why doesnt he just command a tsunami or something rad like that?
submit

please critique when you get a chance
and here too

i like it a lot,
i think is perfect like that
submit it :-)
if you have the chance can you critique mine?

mmmh not sure how to make the link to my work.....

Just got the apple juice thanks, great illustration and placement. I think its ready to submit


Mine is up for scoring. Votes Welcome:
The Briefing

This is kind of cool and epic, lolling at the shocked look on the octopus face :D

Any positive scoring or comments on my design would be much appreciated!
http://www.threadless.com/submission/311284/TooManyLines

this is awesome, i love the illustration and the idea, i think u could add a few more clouds around zeus to balance him out, also starfish as throwing stars could be cool. I like what your doing with the set back shadow shapes to tie it together, i think more of this type of thing would help unite the design. If you have a moment, please comment on my design. I would love some feedback.
Old soldiers never die

This is awesome. Everything looks good to me except the cloud style is not my favorite style. It is already submittable but would rework the style of the clouds to make it awesome as possible. Everything else looks great.

it's so awesome
i have no idea what you could add to make it better
just tell me where to vote :)
also
if you have some time I would be grateful if you scored my design octo shirt

Oops! I had 9 colors. Here it is with 8. It will be subbed in the a.m. Thanks for all the great feedback. May the gods be with you.

Submission time is quite close, I can smell it!
Does the sting ray (or manta ray?) need a tail tho?

my design.

I donno why only the final part of the text has benn wrote...

BTW
....AMAZING!! If it'll be printed i'll buy it for sure!!!

If you have a minute score and comment my design

for me is perfect,
the only concern is about the free hand of Zeus, it looks a strange position to me, but other than this is ready to be submited and i would like to have one of this t-shirt

critique mine if you have time http://www.threadless.com/critique/80900/surprisingly_life

This looks perfect to me. I would love to see it printed.

critique me

awesome!

This is beautiful! Definitely submit it!
If you get the chance, please help me out with mine:
A Well Pecked House