I was working on this when at some point I end up altering it drastically to just have one vertical zipper. Unfortunately, it didn`t scored well, so I decided to come back to my original idea!!! rnrnThanks for your comments!!!

I wish I'd thought of that... Looks good!

haha - reminds me of something Michael Jackson would have worn... and obviously that scene from Austin Powers, with Dr. Evil and his son. Maybe you could incorporate Dr. Evil's signature move in the design... A hand with the pinky extended, touching a set of lips.

I'd appreciate if you would critique my first design on threadless. Cheers
http://www.threadless.com/critique/80509/Caution_Dance_Floor

Cool idea~
very nice……

thanks guys, I was wondering which one do you like the first version with uniform zipper or the second with mixed and open one!!!

I like the closed zips better just looks more visually appealing to me... great idea!! :)

If you have time, check mine out?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/80511/Say_no_to_murder

Not bad. Good work!

If you get the chance can you take a look at mine.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/80095/Politically_Correct

HA!! I love it. Its simple but strong. Just what you want in a good design. I would totally submit it. Great work!
Thanks for your feed back on mine too :-)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/80544/Wanna_Swing

Thanks :)
Fun idea..
but i will prefer it more if the zip size iis abit smaller

Nice Idea. Looks like avantgarde.

very cool! maybe the black stripes are a little bit too large.. maybe

I added the color version of the D.

Thank you!

Personally I'd like 1 zip to be open maybe half way. The design reminds me of the punk era.



I'd welcome any comments/help...

Talking about punk... maybe u could try using some punk colors for the zips. Really bright color. At least in one of them so it gets all the atention.

Anyway, I really like your design :)

I completely agree with the punk idea, and the idea of leaving one half open. the half open one could possibly reveal something punk style, just an idea though. I would play around with the colors and see what happens. Good luck with your design. =)

If you're going with the punk thing, maybe add more elements that identify it as such. Like safety pins.
As for the coloured version, i think you shouldn't put black in as one of the colours. It stands out too much, try a green in a similar value and saturation.

I like the colored version best. I get the black; it's got a CMYK thing going on.

I wouldn't mind seeing one of them open either.

Kinky! I actually think it's good enough to wear the way it is.
Yeah, maybe half-zipped would be cool, as suggested...

zync on Nov 24 '10
I wouldn't mind seeing one of them open either.

me too. ; )

How about adding seams or stitches at the sides?

the zippers could be a bit smaller i think. Or perhaps with a thinner black part? They seem a bit too big in my opinion. Good luck with it! :)

Please score and comment on my design!
Bamboo dealer

Agree with above, zips smaller and its there.

Would love some feedback on Emo Kids if anyone minds.

yea maybe make the zips a little bit smaller and also turn them on angles? i think it would cool if they weren't so straight horizontally.
thanks for the crit btw

As suggested I have one zipper open.

Thanks!

bump!!!

I like... but don't make it the top zip make it one of the middle ones...

I like em better horizontal than diagonal really. And indeed, noelhathorn has a point, the open one would work better as second of third one. Other than that, I really like this, so almost ready to submit I'd say!

Hope you want to give me some feedback as well, appreciate it!
Oblivious Invasion

I moved the open zipper down!!!

Thanks!!

It's a little off balance... the 3rd zipper draws the attention... I think you should either balance the design or make zipper 3 a monster! If you would make the black strips on that one pink it would be super funny!

If you have a moment, please let me know what you think of "Instant Summer".

WOOW cool design!! i'd submit this!

please, if you can take a look of my design and give me your opinion

bump!!!

I definitely like the placement a bit more. I'm wondering whether mixing it up would be helpful. Some longer and shorter zips, some vertical some horizontal maybe some at an angle?

New V up!!!

i like the idea a lot and it has made a lot of progress. Not sure if I'm feeling the red..i liked the open ended one in your previous design.

Yeah, I liked the one that looked like it was going to bite you. Added personality to the design. I'd be interested to see how it looks with more color.

I like, but i feel it needs something more. I can't really put my finger on it. I do think having one of them open woul look cool.

Can you critique my design too
http://www.threadless.com/critique/84155/Thermosphere

do the open one over her bewbs.
jus' sayin'
;]

lTake a look at mine, if you have the time :)

Hey really cool design! i like it!!

I think a smaller placement would be better, but that's just me!


If you can spare a little time, would you give me a quick score on my design? I'd appreciate it!
Score "I believe I can FLY"

Well, I already bothered you to do it before, so nevermind about the scoring haha!! But yeah keep up the great work!

bump!!!

I like this concept, but I agree with the above comment, smaller might look better here

I put back the monster zipper and reduce the whole size. I am not sure which one of the version monster zipper flip right or left?

Thank you!

bump!!

Flipped right! This size is also the best one in my opinion

yeah i agree on the right and the size on this one is great.

Would you please be able to give me some tips on mine at
http://www.threadless.com/critique/84235/Geisha

Ya, I agree with these guys. Looks awesome man. Hey, none of them voted!

I did some modifications on mine.

Napoleon's Favorite Pocket

Bump!!!

Cool idea!
Perhaps you could give sharp teeth to the monster zip? This would multiply its "ROOAR-Effect", I guess ;-).

I don't get why the first, 3rd and 4th zipped but the second isn't. :(

Tho you could try a few zip that looks like they are struggling :)

If you have the time can you please comment on my Popsicle Love Design :) ?

bump!!!

Oh cool!!!! check mine outs!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/86290/Venn_Diagram

Oh cool!!!! check mine outs!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/86290/Venn_Diagram