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What program are you making this in? Try and smooth out the lines a bit. Why is it called posiedon's revenge? What is he getting revenge on? How is he exacting that revenge?

i dunno. u got any suggestions before i submit?

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it looks like you are hand drawing and live tracing... true? or, heaven forbid... paint?? looks really shaky. the concept needs work.

the face is hand drawn and scanned. the water behind him i just drew in photoshop. no live tracing anywhere

pop the entire thing in illustrator, just the black and white drawing, live trace it and then smooth out your lines. it will look much cleaner. once you're done with that you can reapply the color using live paint, super easy.

Poseidon needs a trident, and an object of wrath, IMO.

Can you have a little boat in the corner with some frightened ancient greeks?

will work on all that!

when u say smooth out the lines, are u only referring to the water behind his head?

a lot different from current version.

not my favorite of your designs, but its not bad

i dunno what to do with the trident thunderboldts. i feel like i need more on top.

I'm not sure I like the shape of the waves. I know they're stylized, but they don't look like water or hair. The static, plain blue contributes to that too.

i like the concept, yet it appears that the boat is floating, unless u want that effect, looks pretty cool. as for the trident boltds i feel that they are too symmetrical. try adding 1 or 3 more. or find a way to unbalance the symmetry.



looks awesome

thanks couch. i will add more bolts

added some more trident bolts

how it looks on the shirt with more thunderbolts is what the design is

Lose the tridents.



or make them look better.

ya i agree with losing the trident and maybe one or two lightning bolts

i would say one or two trident/bolts, but its a bit busy. i think shading/color differention on posedon would help, and detail in the boat? or color? it might be too momcromatic for me, but i like its potential.

Fewer lightning bolts. Otherwise looking good!

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