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IMWinter on Nov 11 '10
Trying to combine a retro boom box with a sound wave colored with a cool rainbow effect. I really like it! Please suggest ways to improve!
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grafita on Nov 11 '10
pretty nice graphic, why don't you try bringing the boom box in front the sound wave, add some white to the sound wave to creat the illusion of light may be just a little white, add some glow or shadow to the boom box and may be some texture on the background.
buen trabajo sigue así |
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IMWinter on Nov 11 '10
Thanks! I will try all of those suggestions!
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LanzaFuerte on Nov 12 '10
i like this but i agree with grafita
the boom box is well done, the wave is a bit overpowering of it |
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please stop posting links to this on peoples designs that are actually in the running for vote
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IMWinter on Nov 12 '10
okay thanks lanza! this is just a first draft so i'll take all your ideas!
@Resistance don't click it then :) |
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IMWinter on Nov 12 '10
would adding sound waves on the speakers over complicate it?
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Yeah It would.
Hey if you have some time check out my new designs leave a comment score them Origins of Color Starless Night Thanks. |
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IMWinter on Nov 13 '10
http://www.flickr.com/photos/33255805@N03/5173377168/
ADDED: Moved boombox sound effect background texture |
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justinlovespastry on Nov 13 '10
no, too flashy for threadless. And btw ur reallly good at drawing boomboxes!
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justinlovespastry on Nov 13 '10
THE SHIRT LOOKS DIRTY
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IMWinter on Nov 13 '10
what do you mean too flashy?
and dirty? well i think one of the problems with threadless is that the people that score critiques are other artists, aka not the people who would buy the shirt. |
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this is actually really awesome.
I think it has a GOOD chance here because people dig these kind of looks when the guy said "dirty" hes referring to your texture background that you have for the black part of the shirt. Which reminds ME loosely of a universe, outerspace - that kind of deal. Maybe instead of having it be a full body cover, maybe work some subtle stars in there to really frame up your boombox without covering the whole shirt. just ideas.. I love the work you've done here, the detail and crispness of the hi rez is astounding. also consider checking out "threadless tee templates" on FLICKR.COM for more templates to work with. great stuff, buddy. oh! and if you get a sec, check out my sub as well! This Little Light of Mine just hit it with a vote, and if you like it - lemme know! keep up the good work! |
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icelandR on Nov 14 '10
hipster... but then again so many things could be so you're chill. too harsh of a difference between rough paint splatter all over and smooth texture of the ghettoblaster but do what you want
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Tasku on Nov 14 '10
I like this very much, your idea is amazing : D the design is kinda hypnotic in a good way! I think it would look good on a t-shirt.
Please tell your opinion about mine too, if you have some time. Thank you and good luck! :) http://www.threadless.com/critique/78102/Butterflies_Of_the_Doomed |
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IMWinter on Nov 14 '10
@electric method
thank you very much! i checked yours out it was really good i gave it a 5! @tasku thanks! also, you can use html to post a clickable link like electric did! |
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future_designer on Nov 15 '10
looks good but I think it would be better if the colours didn't touch the edge of the shirt.
check mine out if you can: here |
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IMWinter on Nov 15 '10
http://www.flickr.com/photos/33255805@N03/5179856833/
Detail! |
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Ricki Jane on Nov 15 '10
Whoa, the image looks like it's moving! Crazy. Anyway, cool, but maybe a slightly higher placement and shrink it a tiny bit. What does it look like on white?
If you have the time, please vote and comment on Peter Panda. Thanks! |
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noelhathorn on Nov 16 '10
Much better on the cleaned up t-shirt., placement is the only thing I'd suggest playing with... but then you may have done that already and decided this looks best?
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sony_lfm on Nov 16 '10
great colour and details. what does it look like on colour shirt?
If you have the time, please vote and comment on say cheese. Thanks! |
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IMWinter on Nov 16 '10
@noelhathorn
i kinda just randomly picked a spot! where do you think it would be best? @sony lfm what color shirt would you suggest? |
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IMWinter on Nov 16 '10
Well?
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beebej on Nov 16 '10
The edges are too hard. Maybe make the edges pixelated or grungy so the transition isn't so abrupt. Sorry that my comment is kind of unclear.
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IMWinter on Nov 16 '10
i know what you mean, it's really obvious on the non black shirts especially!
thanks! check out my other critiques too if you can :) |
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K-Sept on Nov 16 '10
so far, its working only on the black shirt..
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Frothymintz on Nov 16 '10
yeah, as the others said definitely fix the edges. It looks like you should have left the background color on a different layer. Other than that, I would also make the design a little smaller on the shirt templates and more centered. Looks good otherwise!
If you get a moment, please score my design! http://www.threadless.com/submission/309985/The_Source_of_the_Leaves |


