the cave border will go all the way around outside( i shrank it down because of file size)

thoughts, ideas for improvement?

thank you in advance!

I think it would look better if it werent in a cave maybe. I know it will make it less original in terms of setting but it might be more pleasing to the eye. Also some smoke from the ballrel of the gun maybe?

bear propped up against a tree?

it's a cork gun btw :-)

hello...

is anybody out there?

ahh cork gun! v. cool! somehow make that more obvious. cant help on how.

ahem
*clears throat

this crit thing takes patience

shall I continue in this direction?

Methinks yes. The border will be a bit tricky, though.

yoohoo? potato?

I liked the cave better and I think its cute.

geez louise, any more input?

So did he hunt the teddy bear?

I'd like to see the bear colored in. If you use a different color for the background, the bear will stand out more.

But I'm unclear if they are friends or foe... or what. Cute kid, nice style on him.

they are buddies. he is "play" hunting his teddybear with a cork gun.

any color ideas?

i prefer the first one.

v3 bump

bump before bed

someone respond in the next 8 hrs, k?

looks great, submit it.

What a difference! This one looks great. :)

hey that's a lot better