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Well there are already a lot of octopuses on Threadless but I like how you drew this one. Something doesn't really fit with all that black though. The image of the ink shooting out of his bum – although factual – is a bit off putting.
I suggest the octopus should be holding the pen with one tentacle, with a big ink cloud shooting from the pen ... right now it looks like he's getting stabbed in the head or something. |
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Why not ?
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I agree with J-Ray. The octopus looks like stabbed dead, especially with these eyes without pupils. You should change that someway...
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465 days later
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make the nib of the pen more clear :)
it's awesome though |
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change the eyes and Submit :D
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This is my 1st official Threadless submission.
It's something I thought up while daydreaming in Sociology 101.
Looks like our octopod friend has just overcome his writer's block... with startling conesquences.
Oh octopi, novelists of the deep... and our best friends.
Thank you for your consideration!