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bortwein
   bortwein on Oct 22 '10
It is a simple concept. The circle is Imperfect but as you move further away, it becomes more visually correct.rnrnSimple as that.
Mrcoffeebean
Mrcoffeebean on Oct 22 '10
Hahahha, yeah! Simple as its look!
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halo bing
halo bing on Oct 22 '10
Nice concept. I would try thicker lines though, if it doesn't ruin the illusion.

Check mine
bortwein
   bortwein on Oct 22 '10
the thicker the line the less the illusion works. I had the same idea about making the line width thicker but found there was only so thick I could go before it didn't work anymore.

Maybe I need to add some texture or Space theme elements to the design Outside of the circle... or would that ruin the idea?
Colinin
Colinin on Oct 22 '10
ha simple but I like it!
bortwein
   bortwein on Oct 22 '10
hey, thanks, but would you buy and wear it?
bortwein
   bortwein on Oct 22 '10
hmmm.
bortwein
   bortwein on Oct 22 '10
more feedback?
eliz2498
eliz2498 on Oct 22 '10
I really like it. It's simple, but then more complex than it first appears to be.

If you have a minute and wouldn't mind giving me feedback on my design, I'd really appreciate it!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/78928/Go_Green
bortwein
   bortwein on Oct 22 '10
thanks, but would you buy and wear it?
Disgruntled_Pacifist
Disgruntled_Pacifist on Oct 22 '10
It is interesting but not visually interesting enough. In the end it's just a circle and no one would really notice it was imperfect but the wearer and they likely wouldn't care after a short period of time.

Sorry
bortwein
   bortwein on Oct 22 '10
thank you for the honest feedback.
eliz2498
eliz2498 on Oct 22 '10
Oh sorry, yeah I would buy it and wear it.

Please critique mine...?

Thanks http://www.threadless.com/critique/78928/Go_Green
bortwein
   bortwein on Oct 22 '10
eliz2498: Critiqued. ;-)
bortwein
   bortwein on Oct 22 '10
more?
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