my first submission. i know this is kinda commercial and kinda cliché, but i like it anyway. tell me what you think.

I'd like to see more color, but that could just be me.

that whole dark tan section at the bottom will be a lot of ink

,maybe just imply the shape with a few lines

i like it.

I think the colors work really well, it makes for a bit of a subtler shirt.

I agree with renfrue - the tan section at the bottom might be too much because it makes the bottom of the shirt look very heavy and it may be difficult for the printers to produce (I work at a print shop and I know that colors that bleed off the edges are difficult to deal with). A solution might be to use some kind of pattern instead of solid grey all over or just to get back to the shirt color before the bottom.

Also think about how to deal with the sides of the shirt where the print ends - does it just stop when it hits the seam?

I think it would also help to get the record/player closer to the bottom of the shirt.

like it. but agree v. black/dominating record could be more of an outline

no way... i like it just the way it is.. its pretty tight.

i reworked the colors. the shirt is now chocolate brown. comes a litlle bit more nu rave now ;) also changed the background fill into an ouline, like some of you rec. what you all mean?



bigup.

oh no :o(

I'm not diggin' the brown/pink/gold combo. I've seen it too many places to name. Plus, brown doesn't seem very any kind of rave to me.



I do, however, like the simplified lines. I'm not sure what to call it, but the largest circle on the shirt should probably be a little thicker, just to balance things.

i liked how the background was solid in the original. i really do like the colors...i haven seen them very often maybe im not that cultured though..haha solidify some of the lines so they stand out more.

just some minor changes: balanced the lines and fills. comes a little lighter now. i think its ready now, what you think?

wicked good, colors are great!!

Yep, this is ace...submit

I like the original best. The crazy colors don't do much for me.

Ya i like the look of the record on the first one, like the shine and stuff, this version looks too geometric idn

beautiful!

I like this better than the first versions, much more orignal. Only thing I'd say is that the circle in the bottom left corner looks a bit lost. Other than that its great.

This is cool. I'm a sucker for turntables. I liked the original. Sometimes I don't know about these critique forums. There are a lot of shitty ideas floating around. The new one is fine tho, if you are a girl or flambouyant (spchk)

like the colors a lot! but i like the turntable filled in a bit from v.2 better.