This is an updated version of my TechnoCRAFT submission with the blank paint cans.

Nice idea, but I think it would look better if the yellow can be positioned ahead of the green one to the left.

If you have a sec, comment on my design please:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/76941/Sheriff_Mo

i love it...dunno why someone said "don't submit"...
i also think it's ready, can't see any changes.....

I'm Almost There

nice work

check mine :)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/77227/Small_But_Terrible

awesome ... I clicked submit immediately :)


please score/comment on my design:
Love Is In The Air

thanks all. I think there are a few details I could alter to make this even better.

amazing! have nothing more to say then submit this now! :)
One thing though, the handle on the green bucket, should it not bi under the paint?
great Illustration!

Please comment on my design. (v.5)
http://www.threadless.com/critique/76400/No_Natural_Enemies

Yeah, this is great better than before sub!
And I say sub it now, dude!
I just finished the latest version. I need your critique.
You can see the progress works here.

Very unique design!

For the yellow bucket, why there is sun symbol? Could you explain what is the relation between that sun with the plane?

Btw, could you leave a comment on my design? Here is the link: "Wireless Tech" =)

ChukwumA: Good catch on the handle. I hadn't seen that when I only had this in B&W. I'll try to make the green go over the center part of the handle.

SuperDoki: The sun is in the sky and so are planes. I know that the sky is usually blue but they also can be a golden yellow near dusk or dawn depending on the situation. I am thinking about changing it to sand but I'm not sure how to do it right.

i think the paint puddles should be less round, more irregular. and maybe add some white highlights rather than black shading to the puddles, to give more a sense of depth and texture.

oddly paint puddles come out wanting to be circular in nature from all the research photos I found. I'll look to fix the highlights and I think I have a plan for more texture but I fear making this too complicated. I always think I need to add more but I probably need to just keep it simple.

yep, submit this

please comment on mine

I can't think of anything you need to change. It's a solid concept and a solid design.

conception of a great idea

the great escape

I insist on from perspective point, the yellow bucket is positioned far from the near two. Its visible part is same with the green one. To be like that either it should be bigger, or it should be far. Make it closer and to increase the viewable area position it left.

I will be glad if you comment on Scuba & Mermaid

A few ideas I have for this and some suggestions I got from friends:
•Add a golf putting green to the Green scene.
• Add some textures to each of the paint areas to match the concept:
- Water ripples/waves to the Blue, Grass to the green, Sand dunes to the yellow.
• Possibly change the Boat to a Yacht to make it more of an upscale luxury theme.
• Add highlights to the paint.
• Soften the shadows with a lighter gray.