A vampire bleeding in dark night in search of her love

like it: do it less computerized :)

give me any suggestion

Like it, though where are the fangs, I can't really see them this way. I really love this design, I would try to make it a little bit smoother though, the lines I mean

comments anyone
http://www.threadless.com/critique/76507/Mice_tee_you_have_there

Thats a true peace or art you got there. I can't tell that it suppose to be a vampire either. Something about the left big-red part is distracting.
Maybe try a gradient there?

Creeeeeeepy. Looks fine to me.

Lawl... More like "Arti-STRANGLE"!

my only suggestion is to add some more detail in her hair. just a little bit though. otherwise i say submit it.

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Updated the design changed the background forest and added fangs do suggest any thing i should add

wow this is good ... only the very right part of the face somehow disturbs me ... there is too strong border ... i think


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Wow that's an amazing illustration. It's so scary but right. Your placement suits it really good. Total Submit.

A New Life

thanks for your comments any more suggestions...

I think aside from maybe putting some white in the other corner in the form of a partially hidden moon.... this is awsum :3

i agree you definetly need some extra white to balance it

mind commenting?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/76035/Water_Colors

Nah, I think keep just the white on her face. Very striking!

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any more suggestion or should i submit it

awsome! i like a lot ;)

wow, i love this design!
maybe choose another model, i can see the pixels...

any comments for sea level?

I dig it. Personally I don't think it needs anything else. I'd submit it.

now it looks even betterhttp://threadless.com/critique/77283/A_Zombie_pear

i don't want to add white on back ground because it will be less focus on vampire face when added white in background please suggest should i submit it?

dear can u remove the blood on her eyes. so,we can see her beautiful eyes. anyway,i submit it....

Clairi i am happy to see your comment :)

This is a great composition!!!1

here too

Looking pretty cool, I think some single line highlights on the main person would nice and help to her stand out, perhaps add some animals in the forest ones linked to vampires such and bats and so on

Excellent.
What about a silhouette of a man among the trees suggesting to be her next prey.

this is great submit this

Yeah i wil add some bats in next version any more suggestions

Added some bats in background i hope its final now what do u think? any suggestions

still to much blood on her eyes i think...

wow i love your work i think you dont need any changes submit it $5

I think it's perfect. Great use of colour on a black tee. Submit!!!

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very cool design. submit

Very nice! I think the number and size of the bats are rather imbalanced. How about making the smaller bats a bit larger and fewer?

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yeah i will try to balance the bats thanks for your nice suggestion

Really cool. Maybe you could lose the largest bat. (I think it's a little much) Other then that it should be good to go.

i agree re the bats, they actually look out of place. They appear to be the focal point where the face should be, you need to try and get the viewer to see the face as the main element

The bat suggestion was really good. Larger and fewer.

Great design you got going here!

I think mine is ready for submission! Take a peek!

yep its ready to go!!!

too many blood for "clairi_willy", I didn't expect that!
i do like the design, i think it is ready.

would you be so kind to tell me what you think about my design:
I Am the Walrus

like it
think it's ready

what about my critique!?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/77497/Big_Nose_Concealing

Red lights flash before my eyes. This is the only way I can feel. He wraps me in a tight embrace laying kisses down my neck. I can feel the blood running down. I want him more than I have ever wanted anything. I can feel my heart slow. I am ready for him to take me to his world. This is how i turn into a Vampire.

Made the Vampires bigger. Hope this is final.

Great i think you should submit it now $5

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I like it. this is good.

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Midnight Balloon Chase
Diving Deep
I'm Dying

i like it better without the bats
pleaase check chullo

Red lights flash before my eyes. This is the only way I can feel. He wraps me in a tight embrace laying kisses down my neck. I can feel the blood running down. I want him more than I have ever wanted anything. I can feel my heart slow. I am ready for him to take me to his world. This is how i turn into a Vampire.

Up dated my design removed some bats and created proper gape between them. I think its Final.

its looking perfect now submit it...

Yeah, this is really improved and great to sub, dude!

Thanks

It looks great. It might look better with only three bats, but I'd say to submit it.

nice. great use of negative space. Sub

Really cool design it's come a long way as well!

Hey friend thanks for you support this design is out for scoring

http://www.threadless.com/submission/300989/Vampire_s_Blood

give best score and comments :)

really cool :)

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I love this!
Don't really find something you could change... You should sub it :D

Please tell me if I could change something on my designs :)
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