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Cute idea! Maybe you could make the bricks and ground a little less structured so it becomes part of the shirt rather than being so square.

I'm scrapping the brick background and probably going with a tree/branch combo

Yeah, I think it is a old concept but this is worth to sub.
Maybe try on blue or white Tee, dude.
Feel free please comment my Silent Night.

old? how so?

I agree with SamDunn, and to me it's not an old concept, at least I've never seen it before.

Please comment on my design, Imperial Moustache Trooper, thank you.

right direction?

A person needs two hands to make an entire bird? What if a bird used both his wings to make a profile portrait silhouette? (Lincoln)

It's good thinking, but the impossibility of a bird being able to get his two wings together to form the shape of a profile portrait is enough to put me off

Yeah, I think its Ok for me, dude!
But I see the two little birds are not perfect in details expecially the wings, are they just quick line?
I just finished the latest version. I need your critique.
You can see the progress works here.

Yeah, this really isn't anywhere near being finished, the little birds were sketched up very quickly to show the idea.

HAHA, this is cool! I think it works as a concept. It reminds me of the "Catch 5" logo, though! http://logofaves.com/2008/12/catch-5/


Lawl... More like "Arti-STRANGLE"!

This is so cute! I really like it! It looks pretty much ready to submit. The only thing you could do now is add a little bit more of the line work that you have on the wings to the roof of the house (and the rest of the image).
Please let me know what you think of mine:
The Smallest Skater

ha ha ... this is great!


I would really appreciate if you comment:
Amorīs pilots
and
bad luck

cool! work a bit on the feathers wing maybe :)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/76769/dead_for_coff

cool! work a bit on the feathers wing maybe :)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/76769/dead_for_coff

detail!

I dont see any difference between this and previous version ...
but anyway ... I love this one .... and I would defo submit !

I would really appreciate if you comment:
Amorīs pilots
and
bad luck

look at V2 - v3 just has different feathers

nice work but shape of the wind doesn't match with shadow rest is great nice work

Do suggest on my designs below:-

Royal Dollars

Vampire's Blood

A girl Painting

wind?

AH - you mean wing

You've obviously misunderstood the entire point of my design. It's supposed to be a human hand, so the shadow doesn't match on purpose