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staffell on Sep 18 '10 Something slightly different.
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staffell on Sep 19 '10 bump
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Cool concept. Though I think you should revise the text placement. Would it work better if you confined the text within an invisible frame, or even removed the 'mouth', 'throat' and 'hyperspace' text altogether?
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staffell on Sep 19 '10 Ha, in my updated version, I've already done just that! Most of the text is completely superfluous.
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maybe make the worm in green lines too? just a suggestion.
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Yeah, I prefer the worm in white, and the rest are just great!
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I want to see what happen with the worm in another color, and maybe change the question mark for one Exclamation mark
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staffell on Sep 19 '10 I don't think I'm going to change the colour of the worm, as I like the juxtaposition of the colours. Plus, what other colours do worms come in?
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