My first critique. I've never submitted a hand-drawn sub before, so I thought I'd get some feedback before I do it. It's I'll post a hi-res version later, I guess. But for now... let me know what you think!

Forgot to mention - yes, I plan to colour this! It's a work in progress!

I like it, it is really cool. I look forward to seeing it coloured etc..

sweetness! creepy but cool!

I would work on making the presence of eyes more strong, make them stand out more... cause everything else does ^_^



well done! keep going!

holy weirdness & oh so good....keep going! looking forward to V2 :)

I think more ear butterflies would be good. I'm sure when you color it, the details will stand out more. You have a really strong idea and a good picture, I can't wait to see how this turns out.

I've started colouring it, and should have V2 up this evening.



Thanks for the feedback so far - please do keep the comments coming.

Hello :-)

yeah i actually didn't notice the eyes and noses until i started reading thru the comments.

You're not meant to see them right away :-)

i'd love to see color

keep it up

Very cool idea. Original. I can't wait to see it in color.

Working on it - next version will be in colour.

Coloured version, against a natural background.



Let me know what you think!

The artwork is very good, but I think yu should get rid of the pale blue background splatters, or maybe use a different color

I really like the blue actually

I think it's great...just seems kinda like something is missing...thought I can't put my finger on just what that something is...

this is great colored, and the colors are great together.

However, it doesn't quite punch as much as it did in B&W.

Maybe lose the blue & darken up the shadows....?

Just a thought....I do really like this drawing :)

I did the design on my Mac, and I'm now looking at it on my PC and I must say the colours are a LOT darker than I thought they were! The turquoise is supposed to be just a light-ish shade.



I'll take it out and see what you guys think.

Wha... what happened to my comment? And what's with the blank?

Here it is again.

Time for a bump I guess!

High-res versions with colour options in my blog post here:



http://www.threadless.com/profile/408258/Krakaboom/blog/262793/Botanical_Biology_WIP_Colour_Options

I'm really diggin the sagestone :D

just submit this! i'll five it

Thank you!

oh yeah! much better w/o the blue. go for it!!

Don't submit: Let me know why!

I love the current version - it's really great & I think you should sub it!



P.S. And I'll pick you to be on the team, too - lol ;)

I will! Just gotta do up the submission file.



P.S. I'm crap at sports though - bad choice!

Bump, I guess :)

Bumpy McBumperson!!

And another for luck!

very interesting concept... right now the design seems a little flat to me... i'd like to see you add another color... i think that would make it "pop"...

It's already 5 colours! :-p

sweet work man , can't to see that on a t-shirt

Working on the sub already!



For hi-res colour options:



http://www.threadless.com/profile/408258/Krakaboom/blog/262793/Botanical_Biology_WIP_Colour_Options

This looks real cool. I think that sometimes having a preview of the design on a tee helps a lot.

which background did you decide on?

Natural and sagestone for now. But I'll put up a few more samples.

Bedtime bump

I agree w/ Saeed....you should show it on a shirt :)

Natural

High-res versions with colour options in my blog post here:



http://www.threadless.com/profile/408258/Krakaboom/blog/262793/Botanical_Biology_WIP_Colour_Options

haha this is good stuff! and nicely "disturbing", submit it!

Thank you! I will.

LOVE IT! I want one!

Great idea, I think the ear in the top-right is completely off. And the art its too big. Good luck!

Submitted! Check it out here.



Hi-res versions and colour options here.

this is very cool, tried to go on over and vote on it, but can't yet. good luck, looks like it'll go over well, though. nice work.

Nice image tones. Goes well with the shirt colour.



Is there a hint of an eye in the centre of the flower or is it just a nose/mouth thang?

that's good enough to submit , goooood luck

This is amazing! If anything, add more contrast. Other than that, it's ready to be submitted!



please:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/35218/Red_Flower

Hey this is cool! Good luck!



Return the love?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/34745/A_piece_of_cake

Nice!

I really like this, not much to say... go for it!



Could you vote and comment on my piece, I would really appreciate it!



http://www.threadless.com/submission/253226/FLight_of_the_imagination:

interesting design



http://www.threadless.com/critique/61614/Umbrella