Getting in early for Haloween.

haha, I like it! :)
Why are most of them on their side?
Also - I'm not so familiar with special inks, but is there any way to make a fire inside that will glow in the dark or be visible in direct light?

Yeah, I love the orange color and sweet stuff!!
And feel free to critique mine? Silent Night

that's a good idea! I should just do some halftoning pattern to make it look like there are fires inside for sure. re: the faces being on the side, they're all faces created using characters on a keyboard

oh, right I didn't notice at first, but now I see it :D

BTW, It would be great if you could score/comment on my design lil' monster :)

ahahahhaahha this is cool!!!
take a look at my Design if u like xxx

try to do it more perspective :)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/76159/tooth_fairy

I would if I understood what you meant...

haha yeah monostyke is typing in riddles.
This'll be just in time for halloween, I think the halftone pattern is a good idea! way clever with the pumpkin seed spew too!
Is there a way to give more depth to the pumpkins? I'm more referring to the lines on them, like a slight shadow on some of them to give them more shape. Are you gonna show placement next version? =]

A few helping words on my critique would be appreciated!

haha awesome, this is such a good idea. the only thing i see is that the stuff coming out of the pumpkins mouth looks a bit funny, especially around the other little pumpkin. maybe work on that a bit and yea a fire in the mouths could be cool. would be great to see it on a tee, maybe not an orange one though?

please comment and score my swallows

It shouldn't be too hard to give them depth, I'll see what I can do. I also think the pulp coming from the big pumpkin's mouth looks strange because it has no outline like the rest of the elements do.

I love the subtlety of the humor in this piece. It made me think for a second before I got the joke, very cool!
I don't think I can add much to the other critiques you've been given, definitely want to see a second version of this. I would also like to see it on a different color shirt, but that's mostly because I look terrible in orange ;)
Good luck!

Thanks everyone. I think I'll try this on a blue and possibly a brown. Nobody likes orange!

I've updated this a lot. Going to sub it to critiques tomorrow as its 3 in the morning and I'm tired

Clever. I think the orange background might need changing. It kinda washes out the pumpkins.

Score me!

Hahaha this is really clever. I can't think of anything wrong with it! Check mine for me please!

Major work gone into this. Probably more than was sensible.

the yellow light inside the pumpkins is too strong at the moment, I need to tone that down

bump

I like it, but as far as I can see, the only connection between keyboard faces and pumpkins is the title... perhaps the meaning of 'ween' is eluding me...?

AWWW, funny! love your shadowing!!! and the idea ^-^!
Show us the placement and good luck!

Please critique mine if you have the time :) Umbrella Tandem

I think this is done

rad! love the glow in the dark!

yes, this is great, submit it! i love to see the development of that piece.

any ideas for sea level? i'm still looking for stuff to add.

Great. Sub!

yea this is pretty cool man! sub!

now with placement

hey looks good....i really like the glow in the dark effect......great work...cheers

Please feel free to critique my design....comments and advice really appreciated..
http://www.threadless.com/critique/76410/Common_Misconception

very cool!
Submit this!

Do you want to critique my design?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/76402/We_are_watching_you

I say submit this now! Halloween is getting dangerously close!

I really like this, submit for sure

Yeah, I wanna wear it so submit please :)

I love it! Yes! SUBMIT!!!

this is up for scoring here

Thanks for looking!

bump

I Love it!

If you like, let me know what you think of my design.