Royal Dollars Style

can you people help me out.

any suggestions

hmm... i would like to see yellow version of this design,
and maybe with some textures on it to make it look old.

i think u used two different style...

http://www.threadless.com/critique/75638/apricot_juice

Please give me more suggestion

I hope its better in golden color

Ooohh. so many ppl I know would love this design. You could sell this, even if not on threadless, somewhere else really easily.

Not a big fan of the copy-pasted dollar-signs, it needs more depths. Try to add more symbols of wealth and cash and incorporate those into the crest.

thanks inkdummy i will update it

It is better, I'd make it a little smaller... :)
http://www.threadless.com/submission/295957/The_Wish_Tree

too much $ imo, and yes - purple is the colour of wealth in feng shui so maybe its a good idea to add it

feel free to comment

http://www.threadless.com/critique/76286/Sapientia_Dei

I like it with the yellow on black, but I do agree about the dollar signs.

I have updated the design added few more stuff and texture effect to show its old please do suggest

nicee

This has progressed well! Much better!

My design is up for voting! Please vote and comment!

Looking through your designs here this one is a great improvement over the original, though I think there could still be a bit more to it. Where there are other $'s I think you might be able to fit some figure heads of animals or something there. Take a look at some emblems online and you might find some inspiration :) . I love the colors that have been chosen though. I'd like to read a description of how you came up with your original concept. Hope it helps.

this is definitely heading in the right direction. Each version is an improvement.
I would lose the text saying royal dollars, and i think you could keep going with it, making it more intricate etc.
Also not sure what 'royal dollars' means really.
thanks for looking at my boy in the woods.

I like everything except the dollar signs are not integrated into the design

Removed $ signs and added some more stuff please suggest more..

Hmm...the text seems to not really fit, and I think a lot of your unique design gets lost in the realistic money symbols you added (coins and dollars). I liked version 3 mUCH better (but would leave out the text at the bottom of that as well, and would expand those awesome wings out of the crest border to emphasize them. Love those paws too!!!
If you have time, I'd love it if you could critique my design!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/76219/Roller_Deer_est

Yeah....no text

I agree the text doesn't fit in, I'd remove the text on the bottom, all caps the text in the design and make it Trajan Pro then decrease the line spacing. I'd probably lose the dollar bill as well, and the $ at the bottom of the shield fit better into the space it has?

The rest looks really good though, I love the decoration and line work.

Help with mine? :)

V3 reads a lot more clearly I think. Try the above suggestions and see what happens! It's often good to have different details for people to study and enjoy but it's not so good to have a confusing group of details which make the message hard to see.

Made some changes removed coin, Text and stylish dollar $ added some new symbols please o suggest should i submit it now?

I like the addition of the Gryffon. I think it was wise to remove the stylish $. Go for it!

maybe put a dollar coin instead of $ and take the small coin out, replace it with something else :)

Anuc i already tired Coin in center but it didn't seem nice bcz coin is rounded and space is little bit oval

i will try to decrease the leaves size please suggest me should i make back design for t-shirt also.

awesome dude, i don't have any suggestion yet..

maybe u can just submit it

you had both coin and dollar sign... that was too much. One or the other, oversized with detail or a president's face in a medallion... like previous version....
Other than that... no suggestion. You can leave it as it is... if you'd like.
Doesn't need much, just fine-tuning

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Yeah, looks great on brown tee, dude! Sub it!

It looks good, could you put up a version without the coin there? I think maybe it is not necessary to have it.

I am thinking to add wings on backside what do u suggests?

Wow.. this is awesome!!! The different development phases show good progression... as for the wings? It can't hurt to upload a new version, I'd go for it! Otherwise SUB SUB SUB away!!!

Wow you came a real long way, this is awesome !
please comment on my third version!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/76507/Mice_tee_you_have_there

Made leaves smaller i hope its final now please suggest should i submit it

suggest any changes

it's interesting, but I don't think it has enough of a hook or theme that is going to get voters to give you a good score.

The only thing I can think to make it more catchy and Threadless related would be to simply replace all of the interior elements of the main shield with "5$" then Maybe ditch the coin for the Threadless Heart and placing the words "I'd buy it..." centered under the branches.

I'd buy that concept. It would be like a sequel to the printed Threadless tee.

Aww, I did like the other dollar sign but just wanted it to fit the space better, although I suppose it now fits into the design better. I think it's about ... as done as it could be ... what if it were not a center composition?

It looks kinda commercial. I hate to say it, but i don't consider this to be a threadless shirt. It is obvious that you put much effort and work into this, so its really a shame. Don't have any ideas how to get it on the right track thou.

nice design, but it might be better if it is positioned on the upper left chest area; it looks too big in center.

Looks like something Anchor Blue would print, haha! I think it's cool, though.

Lawl... More like "Arti-STRANGLE"!

I really like the design, but what if rather than dead center it was more like an emblem and you positioned it in the right corner of the chest.

the design is really rich. there's a bunch of cool stuff in there. and i really like the texture. if you wanted to add some more money type elements, i would suggest some diamonds. right now i am getting the royal theme more than the dollars, but i think a few minor tweaks and additions would do the trick.

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beautiful design! love it

Oh wow, really love this design! : D

Like it:)

Removed lots of stuff and made it simple and up to point hope its better now!

yep I think its kind of better .. or lets say it totaly differenet design now ... I like this one most ....


I would really appreciate if you comment:
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You may even remove the dollar sign. It's the dullest thing in the design.

Please comment on my design:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/76967/Scuba_amp_Mermaid

Shown in front and back version i hope it will be perfect now please do suggest

nice illustration, but... what's the idea of this design? what does it represent?

if you look at history royal families use to rule this world but now only thing which rules now is dollar and money power.

the front looks amazing, but the "wings" on the back look a little odd, like they're facing the wrong way. I'd suggest flipping it upside down (though I can see how being that way ties into the front, still looks off)

please comment on my design:
Silhouette

I like it! This the best one so far. Nice!

Please vote & comment on Driftwood Swan? Thanks!

great work

Put the front design on the left side of the chest and move the back design to the center of the front.

Please comment on Sheriff Mo

I think rotation of wing seem good idea do suggest more

I only understood the concept after reading the comments.

I think what's holding this back is that the design doesn't follow the way traditional coat of arms are laid out.

Do some research on royal coat of arms and apply that to your concept. I think that will take this to a much higher level.

The dollar sign seems to be less part of the design than it originally started out being. I don't really think you are going for subtle here, so maybe more CA$H

Or design a new dollar sign in harmony with the rest of the design.

Scuba & Mermaid

Updated the wings on the back to give it cooler look hope this version is final. Need your vote and comments.

Looks good the wings feel a lot better. I cant think of anything you could change i say submit and see what happens

thanks buddy :)

Looking good man!!!

thanks any suggestion?

Like a little more V7 but i love this version too.. great work!

What do you think ofmy design?

I like the back more than the front. I think you don't need the shield there. Nice job on the details.

awesome! submit it (:
comments about mine?

will it work on different coloured t-shirts?

Have you tried making it more of an orange gold than a yellow? it might bring out a richer colour

I think golden looks better in this texture

I like v7 more, but this one is cool too. The back is very good.

if you have a second

http://www.threadless.com/submission/298617/Giant_salamander

nauman_pak on Sep 27 '10
wow great work i love it

Do suggest on my designs below:-

Royal Dollars

Vampire's Blood

A girl Painting

Arabian_Hug

I suggest you stop spamming designs that were submitted over 3 months ago. Or just stop spamming full stop. Please.

ohh its cool only i dont like too much the wings but the front side 4 mee is cool good job (:

i love it its great on both sides

Good stuff. I think it's ready for scoring.

I like v8's wings much more dude.

If you didn't use the wings, I think they could almost be used as their own submission y'know?

I think mine is ready for submission! Take a peek!

which version should i submit V9 or V8 do suggest?

V9 is cool

awesome... I'd wear it

Looks cool. Excellent work.

Nice :)

Looks good, but one thing is bugging me... did you illustrate these elements? or are they just a mish-mash of vectors from downloaded/bought vector packs? I swear I have some of these on file... forgive me if I am wrong...

Pretty wicked, my only suggestion would be to lose the wings on the back and instead place the coin design you used in v.4. Maybe around 3 inches in diameter somewhere in between the shoulders?

Cool design, love the front design, I'm not a big fan of the wings tho, I like on version 4 the design in the top left corner, maybe you could put the on the back somewhat close to the neck.. good work.. if you have a chance could you check out mine, thanks man!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/75593/The_Young_and_the_Restless"

im liking the wings on da back its cool

Please sheck out my shirt
Above The Influence

Lots of changes from the original version. I kinda liked the idea of the Graffiti type of dollar sign though. I like the style you have given it. I would make the wings smaller and place them may e in the upper right shoulder. Great job over all!

Please check my critique HERE . Comments or ideas most appreciated!

lakh lanat

cool illustration :) the wings on the back seem a bit cheesy although the front is cool :)
I have put a design into the running... would love it if you could help me with the scoring on it :) KNIGHT OWL