Working on a new idea. Would love to get some feedback. The top tagline reads, "From the People that brought you Franken-Goth and Nightmare on Emo Street comes their most ironically terrifying tale to date.rnrnthanks!

i like it, are you going to put colours and stuff with it? if so i would like to see it with colour

check mine out?
http://www.threadless.com/profile/1130070/beautifulthieve/critiques

thanks, yup this is just a sketch

I adore this! Love the poser nerd glasses... It's so true and satirical. I love it. Can't wait to see how it turns out.

Can you help me with my design?

this is freakin great! haha I know once the color is in this will freakin rock!

If you can, please score my Flood and lemme know what you think, thanks!

This is very cool. I love the tagline and your sketch skills are pretty top notch. So yeah, if you were trying to decide whether to proceed with this one, big yes from me!
Are you going to have them very zombie-looking (greenish skin etc)? I think their aloof cooler-than-thou-ness is probably scary enough.

Desperately looking for feedback on my Awestruck critique!

Yeah, this sketch just great! I hope this can be made to 3D?
And feel free to critique my Silent Night.

I can tell by your pencil skills that this is going to be badass.
I can't really critique anything but the idea at this point. Are the zombies suppose to be anyone or just generic hipsters? Will you use glow in the dark ink? Reference old horror movie posters for type. Which it looks like you are.
critique mine please:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/74963/asthmatic_marathoner

thanks peoples. Im thinking green or grey for the skin. Anyone think they need to look more decayed or gory?

help me peoples

guess ill give this one more bump until i start inking.

Grey, I think. Maybe a cold, blueish grey.

If you get a chance, could you critique mine?

coool! love the draft style! I wouldnt make it too neat if I wear you, this add a charm t it, the pencil nd the lack of colors! just a suggestion!
hope this help, and feel free to comment and score my design :)
http://www.threadless.com/submission/295957/The_Wish_Tree

i really like it so far, I need to colors now, haha

thakn you for commented on mine, btw is out for scoring!

Grey is the best!
I need your comments for the weakness and concept.
You can see the progress works here.
Please let me know your feelings. Thanks!!

Whhaaddya think?

You gotta have one claiming to not be a hipster. Every hipster denies being a hipster.

Conception of a Great Idea

I dig this a lot!
I might tweak some of the text to make a bit bigger and font used.

thanks

great work. let's see the placement on a tee :) my only question is why you have text for the upper 4 and not also for the ones on the lower row :)

PS is you have the time, please give me your input on
I Am Your Father

will it be more cool if u take off the text?

I'd have the image on one side, the title on the other. Also, a guy who enjoys eating brains "ironically". Set-up, punchline.

Check this out:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/84306/Japan_Rocks

oh yeah!!