its all in a days work...

Why is the man going to kill the boy?

Oh I forgot...

Pls crit my design.

its the ' please remain in the veichile type if thing' i'll check it out

Ah - i don't think it's clear from just one SWAT guy.

Ah - i don't think it's clear from just one SWAT guy.

i did orignally have text but i took it away

i looked at you critiques you have alot lol

i think need add the shadow~

i feel like this needs detail on the faces. the concept is random and cool.

This isn't a raven

Yaa, i think need more shading on this artwork dude. :)

great image. I like it graphic - forget shading. the boy looks a bit old. he should be smaller and more innocent. A girl with pigtails could be even better. ideally, to get the message across, you need a swat team surrounding the car, with lazers pointing towards the car. the title could be 'please remain in the vehicle'

i did originally have that in a text bubble but i removed it because i didnt like the text :P

more shading on the boy and car or swat guy?

More shading on both! Nice concept though.

It would be sweet to see what you think about my two critiques, if you feel you have the time. :)

Here you have Modern Beauty[Sic]

and A murder of crows (Name in progress for that last one, not quite that catchy. :P)

shadow swat guy and car :) but great design if this were running id give it a 4. not to say it shouldnt be edited a lil- innocent girl should do the job! great work :D

i think the illustration is cool, though you need to add more details to each one of them.
also, the concept isn't clear, i too feel like the swat guy's gonna kill the poor driver:)

I think it'd look better on plain white. I love that there's no detail in the faces.

I Agree with fatheed, you need more than one swat dude. Maybe try making the characters smaller on the shirt, then add a couple more swat guys surrouding the kid. I think that might get your idea across a little better. Just my opinion though...

good one... I coul imagine only the boy with this man in his own t-shit.. just as an idea.. but this desing is interesting.. summit and try.. sometimes the best it´s what you have in your main....

again: sorry for my english.. i´m from Spain...

it's rather sinister... I also like the anonymosity of the facelessness... :)

Can you help me out with my design?

its too violent for me haha

please don't post crit links in subs up for scoring :)

cool idea more shades and colouring it

it would be nice if you checked mine, thank you :)

im making a new one with faces and instead of the boy there is an old woman in a mobility scooter lol :P

i will post it tomorow

act wth am i saying i mean submit!!!! old woman would b even better though and because it counts as a considerable change u can make 2 tees

act wth am i saying i mean submit!!!! old woman would b even better though and because it counts as a considerable change u can make 2 tees

;D

your new version sounds interesting and funny...good luck =)

If you can, please score my Flood and lemme know what you think, thanks!

I think that the idea of making the man in the vehicle a little girl is really good, and surrounding her with swat guys. It would be really funny, especially if she was holding a teddy bear or something cute. I would wear that shirt. :)

lol thanks very much :)

I like the premise of the idea, but I'd kinda like to see actual facial expressions to really sell the idea better.

i will add some soon :)

this is great!
you could try to do this in a childish hand drawn style.

A great idea :)
My advice - more details on the car, and maybe some face details...
Plus I personally don't like the yellow color on that blue but that's just my taste :) play with the colors a bit
Pls check out my Tool Belt... Thanx :)

thanks for the advice i'll check it out

This is my newest version, changed the boy for an old lady and got it down to 9 colours. ( any sugestions how to get rid of the last one and still have the same sort of affect)

maybe there too much grey tipe... but i don't know... i like the style :)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/76302/rorschach_ladybug

any idea's on how to get it down to 8?

Pretty awesome. How about instead of white you use a light grey that can also be used for grey highlights?

The idea is great and love the style of the drawings, maybe include some text saying please pull over the vehicle or something similar, just to make the concept a little clearer. Unless you think that would overcomplicate the design.

If you've got the time I would appreciate your rating and comment on my submitted t-shirt design Totem Pole Thank you

This is pretty well illustrated but I don't understand what is supposed to be happening.

This is pretty well illustrated but I don't understand what is supposed to be happening.

its the ' please remain in the veichile senario' the old lady is

* the criminal

same as befor but with text to show whats actually happening lol

please rate thanks

Realised text wasnt visible enougth

please rate