for the E for All contest

late night buuuuuuuump!

The guns need to be inverted on top, perhaps throw some controllers to boot?

lotsa "no likeys - need workys"



any more suggestions to sasve it from the need workys?

i like this concept, but imho I would like ti see it more ornate even tatoo style?

thanks, I'll run back through it, I had thought of a faux tribal design made from the zapper's plugs...

I like the concept. keep working.

make up a fictitious game label... something funny would make this really work...

now with skull

I don't have the original blaster illustrator file, so for now, the skull is merely superimposed over the existing blasters, when I get home, the skull will cast some shadow on the blsters and the blasters will be moved a bit differently...

Great start. I think for this to go over well you'll need to change the skull to fit in to the cartoonish nature of Mario World. Perhaps use a dry bones skull or draw what the skull of Mario would look like.

you don't dig the mix with realism?



I'm not inferring you should, mind you. I just really wanted to keep the moustache off the skull :D

It's just that skulls never score well here.

this is all too true

changed up the gun angle, matched the skull up to mario's proportions (but not too cartoony)

bump

anyone else care to vote or suggest?

i am not really a big fan of video game themed shirts.. but to be honest this is pretty good... the blue tee is nice!!

Well... the colors on the guns are realistic, but the skull being the same is just weird. It needs to be white.

I like it on a lighter color (It's hard to want to buy a white shirt) but it would look good on any light color. I do think that your lightest gray color could go lighter. It makes the whole thing seem kind of dull and dark.

thanks, I'll play around with that lightest tone.



I went overboard on the gun's tones and used up all my colors, it'd be nice to have a clean pearly white, I'll have to play around with the guns to see if I can substitute a color anywhere, or as you'd mentioned, just lighten the one tone.

It's an improvement. over V2

Gray may work, otherwise light colors are teh suck. The dark blue is pretty good lookin.

by light colors, do you mean within the design they suck, or as shirt colors?



I entirely agree with the shirt colors sentiment. No one needs to see my nipple shadows.

Ment shirts, the design needs some light colors.

Personally I wouldn't wear this shirt, but I think you have a really great design here. I love the old school NES guns. This would be a perfect gift for my brother.

added some optional text and added shadows to the bottom zapper.

I just submitted this one under the latin title.



thanks for all the suggestions (even if I didn't use them :D ) this has been one of my most helpful critiques!

woot

thank you for your internet exclamations, Mr. Ray.