Thanks for any feedback!

Interesting combination. Is this relegated to only the front of the shirt? I would like to see those lines of colors go up and over the shoulder then down the back.

Food Chain critique?

Hey, great idea!

Perhaps more references to his writings (he's my favorite author), but even if you didn't change it, I'd still love it.

A flash version...

The city's background has elements of Dresden and there's a giant asterisk in the background, but the thrust of this design is Rabo's beams of light. Despite this, I hope the design works as a cool image even if you've never read Breakfast of Champions or Bluebeard or any other Vonnegut for that matter...

Its an awesome picture. I like the characters over the backdrop. I haven't read much Vonnegut so it's too deep for me, but that would make it cool if you bumped into someone who recognized them.

wooow! I love this a loooot! great design!

check mine!

YES YES YES! I'd buy it! I think it's ready for submission.
Can you help me out with my design?

cool! :D

Yeah, I also say this great character and back ground combination! Sub it.
And please free to critique my Silent Night.

i like it alot! 5*s

Thanks for the kind words and support- looks like this one's good to go. I made a few small tweaks and will sub this version tomorrow if it still looks good in the morning.

Thanks for the kind words and support- looks like this one's good to go. I made a few small tweaks and will sub this version tomorrow if it still looks good in the morning.

Ack. Last small tweak. Now plan has thicker lines to look more like it's in the foreground.

Really awesome man. I can't even fathom the ammount of awesomeness going down here, I'd absolutely buy the tee. Delicious use of the colors, and a quirky motif. Excellent!

(And now for some shameless self-exploitation)

Here you have Modern Beauty[Sic] (Warning, perhaps a tad disturbing)

and A murder of crows (Name in progress for that last one, not quite that catchy. :P)

I'd love to hear your thoughts about them!

wow this is just epic...absolutely love it! cant wait until you submit this!