Any critique is welcome, but I'd esecially love some verification that Google translator didn't steer me wrong with the Japanese text. Thanks!

dude. that says "steep doctor"

hahahahaha just kidding! Idk if it's right, but I would say delete it entirely. the rest is REALLY great! this is sweet, i would totally score a 5

Thanks. I really like the text, but I can see how it might be a turn-off. Hmmm.

I don't agree I like the japanese text. It preserves a super happiness associated with Japanese products. I really like it and really want to know when I can wear it. I will be following this design close.

this is uber cute nice job!

If you can, please score my Flood and also my Apple and lemme know what you think, thanks!

Aww,this is so cute!^^ I like the japanese text too!

Please, if you have some time visit my submission:
http://www.threadless.com/submission/295629/Picnic_in_your_lungs

Thanks!

I love the whole concept, dude! But maybe you should change the cute stuffs at rainbow to white color.
Please critique mine?

Thanks for the feedback- I'll def keep the text. Here's the flash presentation...

I like the illustration, the style of it all is really cute! but can you explain a bit to me (no Im not dumb just tired :)) why does it say avoid narcotics? good good work anyway :)

Thanks. As for the text, it just seems to fit- drugs are lots of fun (sometimes) but can be super deadly, too. And it makes it feel like a bizarre PSA or something.

I'd be open to other phrases, too- any ideas?

i like it, but i think that the clouds style's too different from the rest

http://www.threadless.com/critique/75966/mistake

One slide like V3 or two slides like V3? thanks!

ha,ha,ha I love this. especially smiling shark!

lol this is very cool

http://www.threadless.com/critique/76001/all_in_a_days_work

please check out my critique :)

you should submit this

Yeah, this just great!!

very trippy & ironic. lol!

i like this.

Id say submit! really nice style!

funny, submit

Thanks, everyone- it's subbed. :)