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i love the colors. the yellow ballon seems a little un circleish if you could straigten that line out that would be good other than that looks great

yeah, the added halftones really finish it. i say SUBMIT!

very surrealistic and nice, I think it's ready for submission.

Very strange, but at the same time works really wel - especially the colors. I like the toned deer head in the background. I'd submit as is, but I'm slightly confused by the big deer guy in the background who seems to be facing the front waist up, but backwards waist down.

superduper awesome

same thing that jwalsh said

**well

k lady, that's the left guys bottom/legs. The guy furthest back is only visible from the chest up.

submit, everything is spot on

Wha, that makes it weirder...I still like it though. Thanks for clarification :)

Nice. Not sure about the halftone in the back though. You should submit!

schwag

whoops, anyway, version 2 up

Pshaw. Like you need to submit stuff in the critique section.

balloon looks better and love the stripe! the stripe is a bit weird on screen but i think itd look great on a tee... awesome!

should i maybe thin the stripe up a little?

no I like it that width!

any other thoughts on the stripe?

The stripe feels too arbitrary, so I'm not a fan.

I definitely prefer V1

final version (I hope!). I added some shadow to the creme balloon, and put some patterning on some of the cloth. Those are a couple patterns I subbed to naked and angry. Let me know if this is ready to sub!

id say yeah you fixed my only problem with it way back at version one

def with out the stripe

well done mang

patterns are great

this look so much better!

awesome!

well, i subbed V4, so look for it sometime soon

who are the clowns that vote "Don't Submit"



seriously... rofl

I love this design, you should submit. Sorry for the short comment but I just don't know what else I could add to this other than it looks ready.

Should I Submit This?

like it! submit!

awesome! you should sub!

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Oh! My deer! it's hilarious! Sub! Sub! Sub!