Feel like a banana - Based on the old fruit/veg powered clocks.

Just got decline? Any thoughts?

Just got decline? Any thoughts?

Like the colors in design and of the shirt. Can you change the bottom type from upset to sad?... works better with happy for me. Have you considered adding cartoon eyes and making it more of a character instead? Just to see what it looks like?

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are you trying to use the bananas as a happy and sad face?


bananas should be smaller and add some more elements to the designs, some background maybe.

yeah i would work on the size and the happy sad is a good suggestion, cool idea :)
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this makes no sense to me. Are you using the bananas as smiles and frowns? that's not really apparent, and it's not obvious that those are supposed to be clocks. the huge placement looks garish and juvenile, especially since there's not much detail that warrants being so large.

I know this comment has nothing to do with the artistic side... but! bananas don't have acidic contents. I don't think they would work as oranges do. Plus you need electrodes made of different materials.

ooo dint even think of that...thanks!

I really like it, I think the fruit achieved those gestures for its own.
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I agree with a lot of comments, the bananas need to be more characterized, otherwise its a cool idea. Looking forward to newer versions.

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1. Changed Text to "sad"
2. Added Characterization
3. Shrunk Design Slightly

Oh and changed electrodes so that they are different colour.

Hey, on the right track! Looking Good! I do like the idea you had of the banana being upside down for sad though. Not sure if you need the mouth on them. Nice!

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