This is a tweak version from my running sub We currently in the Science class. Just thinking the Data Transfer is more easier than a studies mechine. (I'm a lazy student :P)



And also the colour is totally different with the prvious one.



Let me know what you think.

Thi is really nice, I like this colors and the fact that only the green stands out. One suggestion: why don't you give slightly different postures to the children.

Goo idea, will try make some different for the posture.

the kids all seem the same, try a fat kid, geeky kid etc..... i think the contrast will work

I love this SO much more than your first sub. I think it's the colours, and also it works much better without text in the centre.



I kinda like how all the kids are exactly the same...it alludes to ideas of conformity, or the power that the information they receive has over them (encouraging them to all be the same, behave the same way, believe the same things...etc).



I know that's not really the intention of the shirt, but I think people can find their own meanings in it the way it is, which is good in my opinion (hooray for thought provoking tees!).



Love it, will $5 when subbed except for the fact of the curly haired kids hair. It's so dark, my eyes keep going towards it!

Just remembered a word I was trying to think of...Passive! The kids look passive! Which I think is appropriate because of the cold unindividual nature of the "data transfer".

I have add on some expression for the kids, I think they should have a own personality.



And also a change for the curly hair.

I have a suggestion for you....



Can you move the giant ducts around so they just turn in on themselves, and there is no floor? Then the design can float in the middle of the shirt without having to ground it.

okay, will try...

V 3

Well it's not exactly what I meant, but I like this better than V2 :) It works well placed on a shirt.



Good luck!

i like it on red

I try remove the ducts, but it look a bit simple and blank for the scene.



Anyhow, thanks for your comment;)

V4 _Blue

V5 - Brown

Let me know which one is better, thanks!

gray and blue make it more misterious, I think those are good for your concept.

I think so, keke...

Agreed... I definitely like the grey best.