This is a tweak version from my running sub We currently in the Science class. Just thinking the Data Transfer is more easier than a studies mechine. (I'm a lazy student :P)
And also the colour is totally different with the prvious one.
Thi is really nice, I like this colors and the fact that only the green stands out. One suggestion: why don't you give slightly different postures to the children.
I love this SO much more than your first sub. I think it's the colours, and also it works much better without text in the centre.
I kinda like how all the kids are exactly the same...it alludes to ideas of conformity, or the power that the information they receive has over them (encouraging them to all be the same, behave the same way, believe the same things...etc).
I know that's not really the intention of the shirt, but I think people can find their own meanings in it the way it is, which is good in my opinion (hooray for thought provoking tees!).
Love it, will $5 when subbed except for the fact of the curly haired kids hair. It's so dark, my eyes keep going towards it!
Just remembered a word I was trying to think of...Passive! The kids look passive! Which I think is appropriate because of the cold unindividual nature of the "data transfer".
Can you move the giant ducts around so they just turn in on themselves, and there is no floor? Then the design can float in the middle of the shirt without having to ground it.
And also the colour is totally different with the prvious one.
Let me know what you think.