You get the idea, right? Now, is it worth submitting? What more changes should I make? ^^

I submitted it before, but Threadless rejected it because it is more of a type tee.

I have a problem though, because the underline is a very essential part of the design, and I don't know how I could say that through a type tee submission. ^^

Thanks! And, please do leave honest comments, they'll be much appreciated. ^^

The concept MIGHT work with a layout that was less MS Word. Try working with different colors & text layout. Make it have more POP and PIZAZZ.

might simply be better as a slogan tee.

Lol it took me SO long to read that!

honestly you should consider submitting it to another site. i have one specifically in mind but I don't think I'm allowed to post the link.

e-mail me for a link I guess

I agree with grypesagon. I think it works, but not for a Threadless tee.