Based on the fancy lionhead goldfish. I look forward to your feedback. Thanks.

you could add some waterplants.
placing the fish on the arm might look strange on a shirt.

any comments for friendly clouds?

I think adding a very light gold-orange color to the fishes tales would add something instead of the black outlines and create softer shapes. could you give me some advice? http://www.threadless.com/critique/74176/Rocking_Out

Thanks for the feedback!

fantastic design. I think you should make the fishes a little bit smaller and put them facing one another like in the top image, so they seem to comunicate toghether.


may I have your opinion?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/74708/Electric_vertigo

hey eladear, i wouldn't change much of the placement, i erally like them big like this :) i agree with yesmam about the light amount of color that you could give the tale and therefore lighten up the outlines there. i can see some white and black lines on the shirt between the two fish, are they supposed to be there or was this just some testing for linework?

would be great if you can comment & rate my submission keeping me alive :)

This is funny, I really like it. Thunderous is right about the background, it needs a little something. Wish I could be useful and say what, but I really don't know.

If you have a minute I'd appreciate a look at my new design.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/75013/Who_s_gonna_clean_me

Thanks for the comments

I'm not sure if you need to see the fishes real face, maybe it would look cool if they just had lions heads instead...?

Yeah, I love it!!!! I say sub.

Feel free to vote my Sunbathing.

this is very nice!!!
i gotta say i think you should keep the composition on the shirt just like in the upper image!:)
there is a nice dialog between the two fish!:)
please let me know what you think of this critique design:Power Plant:) Thanks!

Thanks!