Hello,rnrnHere is my very first tee design. Design about dogs and they masters. Text on the tee is :rnrnThere is one best place to bury a dog.rnIf you bury him in this spot, he willrncome to you when you call come to yournover the grim, dim frontier of death,rnand down the well-remembered path,rnand to your side again.rn"The one best place to bury a good dogrnis in the heart of his master."rnrnBy the way i design this tee on photoshop and CMYK mode. Can this t shirt is suitable for print? I'm waiting to your any critiques. rnrnHope you like it.rnrnP.S. Sorry my English.

can you put just the image of the design so we can see the details? it looks pretty cool on a shirt but I'd like to see it up close =)

If you have time please score my Bum; and lemme know what you think =)

This is same version but closer for details. Please look all version and critique this. Thanks.

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uhh. sorry.. i just want to some critique.

so sorry again.

first thing that pleased my eyes is coloros for sure!
very good job at all!
brutalness of this dog with innocent touch all around

i would suggest losing the text...
text are not very liked around this site, but in my opinion, if there is text, it should be readable on the tee...your currently is not, and therefore it's redundent imo...
the colors are very nice!

one last thing, i think you have to many "random" elements here...i mean it looks nice in general, but on closer look, i don't really feel a connection between the buildings, butterflies and doves to the dog...so unless i am missing something, i think you need either to lose them, or make changes so the connection will be more clear:)

hope i helped:)

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Well, I see a few people have already mentioned about spamming already..
But just to be more specific, I believe you can add a link to your critique, asking for
a helping hand absolutely anywhere, except.. just except on designs that are already
up for voting. That's all :)

But, besides that.. I enjoy looking at your design. I love dogs.. & I like the colors you
chose to incorporate into this. It's a very peaceful picture!
& I also like your description of the concept of this tee? What does the birds, butterflies
and buildings represent? :)

cool

Hello again,
first of all i'm sorry my english and so so sorry about spammin. would not want to get it.

My concepts about dogs and their masters. and text on tee a poet about a dog who live forever in master's heart. I guess text is readable. (Unreadable on this critique picture cause resulation).
Besides not important it's readable. I just want create some artistic text pattern.

By the way; buildings are represent to hardworking city life of the boss.
Butterflies are represent short life form. and
birds are represent angels.

by my side.

Thanks for all your valuable comments.

If you include text, it is important that the text is readable, because a unreadable block of text will get you an even lower score than a readable block of text. The small, curly, serifed type that you're using is no good.

With your explanation, the elements make sense (I guess), but tee design tends to be more about direct messages than esoteric symbolism. If you want to make a design about dogs and masters, I'd focus on something that more clearly shows love and loyalty.

Great color palette and cool composition.

Gostei conceito, daria para resumi-lo a poucos objetos!
Abraço

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The colours are working well, maybe you need to get your message across with out the text, love dogs so you have me there :)

Hello,

I accepted my design is includes esoteric symbolism. That's my style and I prefer this instead of simple expression. Maybe this is too much but i almost happy this composition.

I'll think about text again.

Mismonaut, thanks for valuable comments and best regards.

I would try not to copy/paste/and flip the same images. Find another building and few other birds to add instead of using the same ones twice.

Add more and keep layering.

I realize the dog is probably personal to you, but here in the states it looks like Spuds Mckenzie.

i like your design.
thanx 4 your vote to my design " help us " about gulf disaster.

Nice composition and look good on both tee color. But I have something more to show you. People here love these style ;D
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Cut the text, it interrupts the lines of the image - didn't you say you like esoteric symbols rather than direct expression? Think of the design as a visual representation of the poem.

its pretty good but I think it would be better more as an illustration not like picture :)

Hello Again,

I got very valuable comments. This version i removed the text but i'm not sure what is cool? with text or without text. I'll wait your comments specialy about text.
So i change the left side building image a different image.
That's it. i wait your critiques.

Thanks.

so, i thing tee is better with text pattern. :)

Yeah, I like without Text. Great mix photo!!!

Thank you .

Wow! I linke it! some contast on the birds would help, apart form that, i think you are all set! I like the color palette!
If you have the time, please rate & comment my submission :Rock & Roll

Thanks for support.

Yeah better without text.. some contrast to birds and maybe more motion to them.

Thanks for critique

I like the composition of this. Better without the text :) And I agree with lewis cern, a little more motion for the birds would be good. :)

bird in the back looks a little blurry

yes cause i use halftone pattern. thanks for the comment.

I like it.

what do you think of mine?http://www.threadless.com/critique/74702/Going_to_Work

I like the buildings but the whole thing will need to turned into graphics. try halftones in photoshop, or threshold effect

Hello frosby,

i use halftones on birds, buildings and butterflies. Just dog image not halftone. I guess this image too small for seeing this.

Thanks for comments.

Weird but liked it is that a dog????

if you have a minute plz help me out with my design
http://www.threadless.com/critique/98106/God_Bless_America

whoa great image! but how does it look on a shirt????? try uploading an image with the placement!

I have a shirt up for voting, would you mind checking it out? thanks!
http://www.threadless.com/submission/390879/A_Fair_fight

damn this is an awesome design...looks great..if u have time can score my design?

http://threadless.com/submission/390392/Dead_Tree