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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 06 '10
Dear all, this is one of my loved old piece of character, The Sun.rnrnIt think It want to make it to graphic Tee.rnDo you think it is so normal or any other idea?
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 06 '10
Bump for help.
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soloyo on Aug 06 '10
looks like a sunflower :-(
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 06 '10
Oh, I thought The Sun just alike the Sunflower, dude.
I am going to do the graphic style. Thanks your words. |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 06 '10
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potternerds on Aug 06 '10
this design is cool.
if its not to be confused with a sunflower u should make the rays sharper or triangular.would make the design even better. good work |
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potternerds on Aug 06 '10
could you please critique ours as well?http://www.threadless.com/critique/73696/Cartoon_Sounds
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 06 '10
Dear potternerds, just visited you and pls vote my sub: The Escape. Thanks!
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potternerds on Aug 06 '10
ok done
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jefferex on Aug 06 '10
It has humor into it, but I want to see it a shirt
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SR2010 on Aug 06 '10
different background color (maybe light blue) and different color for the clouds (maybe white) ;)
would be cool if you check mine: http://www.threadless.com/critique/73940/minephant thanks!! |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 06 '10
Dear SR2010, just gave my comments and thanks!
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clavediseno on Aug 06 '10
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konvalia on Aug 06 '10
it's cool:) just why the bird's so confused?XD
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 06 '10
Opssss, the bird just feel hot.
And maybe I should draw the bird taking a soap? |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 06 '10
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korrijeanne on Aug 06 '10
Hm, I don't really like the bird, maybe try re-drawing it,
If you have some time, please take a look at my critique, and leave a comment: Pug Life |
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jefferex on Aug 06 '10
i think you should add more to it
http://www.threadless.com/critique/74048/Thinkin_monkey |
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tifferlee on Aug 06 '10
I don't like the bird either. You could redraw it, but I think this would be better without it.
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 06 '10
Dear all, thanks the ideas and I think I will redraw the bird with a handkerchief?
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LindaLace on Aug 06 '10
I think you should get rid of the bird, it is not needed. Also the sun has some blue on its teeth and that looks a bit strange. I would also add in a bit more white to the suds and bubbles.
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 06 '10
Yeah, Linda, thanks for your advices!!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 07 '10
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Jeiji on Aug 07 '10
Haha, wow. It's cute, I think a nice kids' tee. Oh, and if you have trouble getting comments, I would suggest doing this:
Couch Surfer: I believe this is it... (V.10) Cup of Rocket: Unleash the fury! and by that I mean comment with some actual content that might make a difference, and leave a link! Keep goin', breh! |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 07 '10
Dear Jeiji, Thanks for your brief!!
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Ramonar on Aug 07 '10
pretty sweet. :) yeah try it on a light blue tee :D
if you got a moment please check out mine :D http://www.threadless.com/critique/73921/Color_Cats |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 07 '10
Thanks!!!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 07 '10
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Ellonyme on Aug 07 '10
I like the simplicity and cuteness in this. How bout the placement?
I would like to know whatt you think of this :) No One Should Be Alone |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 07 '10
Dear Ellonyme, just voted your heart work!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 07 '10
BUMP on 1:24AM here.
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moxley0 on Aug 07 '10
i would like to see it on a tee:) the birdy needs some fixing you could change the color of it and add detail with black lines like you did with the sun or just remake it :D
please comment on mine :) http://www.threadless.com/critique/74063/Bunny_Ears |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 07 '10
OK. My v2 will be done soon!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 07 '10
Dear ephemeris, just comment on your design.
Now I am just thinking how about the Sun likely the sunflower?? Can you accept it?? |
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Winck on Aug 07 '10
Sweet and nice. Show a real shirt.
Has a time? http://www.threadless.com/critique/74121/Serious_Gentleman |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 08 '10
Dear swellsights, just comment on your work.
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Flowtees on Aug 08 '10
I don't thing there is anything wrong with it as it is. Put it on a tee on a model and let have a look what the placement looks like. I think it'll make a great Kids shirt. ^_^
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 08 '10
Hahahah, ok, Flowtees, thanks for coim again!
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kevin10992 on Aug 08 '10
Maybe make rain clouds above the sun instead of the bird as if he is showering in the rain? Keep it up!
If you have time I would appreciate it if you could score my Mario design. Thanks! http://www.threadless.com/submission/290356/An_Unfortunate_Accident |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 08 '10
Dear kevin, good idea!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 08 '10
yeah, dear empiricist, good idea and thanks for comin!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 08 '10
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Jeanie.Gordon on Aug 08 '10
The bird looks a little angry but this design is SO wonderful. :)
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 09 '10
OK, thanks the words!
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webdpix on Aug 09 '10
I don't really understand the "bird". If I may suggest, maybe the sun bathing in a lake of boiling water (warm thermal spring)
can you critique mine? http://www.threadless.com/critique/73966/little_angel |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 09 '10
Thankssss!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 09 '10
While I am not free to do the v2, i want to get more ideas!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 10 '10
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 10 '10
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 11 '10
Yeah, more comments to bring up the new version!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 11 '10
Hi, dear all!
Here the The Sun in graphic. I have deleted the bird so the Sun being alone in bath. What do you think ? |
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DuMone on Aug 11 '10
cool idea, I like the foamy clouds from the first version better but it is well done!
If you have the time to have a look: http://www.threadless.com/critique/74220/oneline_love http://www.threadless.com/critique/72464/changes |
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DuMone on Aug 11 '10
cool idea, I like the foamy clouds from the first version better but it is well done!
If you have the time to have a look: http://www.threadless.com/critique/74220/oneline_love http://www.threadless.com/critique/72464/changes |
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DuMone on Aug 11 '10
sorry, dunno why twice...
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 11 '10
Its ok! thanks your comments.
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 11 '10
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Fablucero on Aug 11 '10
love this new version =)
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karpar on Aug 11 '10
I like this design a lot, but it might be cool to see the overall idea from v2 rendered in the sketch style of v1.
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 11 '10
Dear Fablucero, thanks your love.
And this is just a rough idea with simple graphic to see the colors and idea match. what do you think of the Sun likely to sunflower??OK?? |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 11 '10
Dear Karpar, I wish you really love it at the final!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 11 '10
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Fablucero on Aug 11 '10
i actually like how the sun is...it's very playful and cute...you shouldn't change it...i think with a lil more detail it would be ready to go
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 11 '10
Oh, great!
I need more works on the details and color scheme. |
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Winck on Aug 11 '10
Desenho muito bonito, mas precisa de mais detalhes. É o que penso.
Teria tempo para ver meu desenho? http://www.threadless.com/critique/73134/Super_Ride |
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Jeanie.Gordon on Aug 11 '10
Aw, I liked the bubbly cloud he was bathing in in the first version. I'm glad to see the bird gone, but I miss the cuddly sun.
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 12 '10
Dear winck, I just commented your great work, thanksss!
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matt attack on Aug 12 '10
this looks good! although i did like the style of the first one.
i think if you change the little blue dot's falling by the clouds a bit it would look better |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 12 '10
Yeah, great idea!! Thanks your words.
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Winck on Aug 12 '10
Dear Mrcoffeebean, sorry.
There are many messages, mistakes happen. I wish him good luck. |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 12 '10
Hahahha, thanks for coming back!
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hannesjung on Aug 12 '10
oh this looks awesome! i love the style of the 2nd version, but maybe you can do something with the soap-foam...
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 12 '10
Yeah, I will repair the soap-foam!! Thanksss!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 12 '10
Dear all, this is the something different design.
I have changed the concept from The Sun Taking Bath to this telling us about Where the Rain drops came from. What do you think??? |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 12 '10
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karpar on Aug 12 '10
Looks great. Nice changes. Submit!
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quiroz on Aug 12 '10
Very cool concept. The design is good but I think it could be better. :)
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ragboll on Aug 12 '10
Oh I love play on words. this is great you should submit it.
Oh by the way can you tell me want you think of my design http://www.threadless.com/critique/73720/Troy |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 12 '10
Dear karpar, thanks for words!!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 12 '10
Dear Quiroz, you are right.
I am just need more time and comments from you and i would be better!!! |
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SickSadLittleM on Aug 12 '10
This is LOVELY! work on the little cloud bumps. and the blue shines on the bubbles are weird too. apart form that, i love it.
Please rate & comment muy latest submission Rock & Roll |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 12 '10
Dear jiska, just commented your nice work!
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jumppuppyjump on Aug 12 '10
Oh hey! How'd I miss this? So ok, here I come: Break up the sense of symmetry. i know it's not exactly symmetrical but it's too close to being so. Apart from that, this is definitely a fresh idea on the origins of rain. Lol..
I'd appreciate your critiue on Light and Flight and your score on Mr. Spork. Thanks!!!! |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 13 '10
Dear jumppuppyjump, I really miss you!
yeah, you have a good idea! |
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Shoshkov on Aug 13 '10
its very cool but i think that if you add some more detail to the clouds it would be better :P
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 13 '10
Yea, maybe I should make some texture of clouds, thanks your words!
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hannesjung on Aug 13 '10
hey, really nice progress here! i love the idea of "where the rain comes from" but i prefer the style of the sun from v2. maybe you can mix v2 and v3
it would be great if you could score and take a look at my pirate shirt :) |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 13 '10
Dear hannesjung, just voted your nice work!!
And yes, I am considering to combine v2 and v3, but do people understand the concept?? |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 13 '10
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Hi mate, you need to stop asking people to comment on your stuff all over the place. It's considered spamming.
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Gabriele Nanni on Aug 13 '10
Close encounter of the A fototype :)
I will happy to read a your comment about my Gone with the Zomb |
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Stile on Aug 13 '10
Aw, cute! I think the rain and clouds could use a bit of work, but overall, nice!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 13 '10
Dear staffell, you always be my nice reminder!!Thanksss!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 13 '10
Hi! Here the new look.
I have drew some textures in clouds and focusing on the concept: Where the rain drops came from. Please give me any idea to improve. |
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DuMone on Aug 13 '10
very well done! you made the foam more foamy again and the bubbles more 3D! I only think the lower clouds are are bit too big and maybe too low... likieitlikeitlikeit!!!
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DuMone on Aug 13 '10
oops new version at the same time I regret all except for very well done and I likeitlikeitlikeit !
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DuMone on Aug 13 '10
But Iliked the sun and foam more in V3
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clavediseno on Aug 13 '10
dude WAY much better that v1 :D
work on the drops looks like they could use some work |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 13 '10
Dear DuMone, I like your sweet face! Thanks for giving your truely heart words, thanksss!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 13 '10
Dear clavediseno, thanks your comin again!!
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RoeeSch on Aug 13 '10
I like the style of the first version the most... In my opinion this technique looks a bit too synthetic compared to the first version.
Care to crit mine: http://www.threadless.com/critique/72559/Push_the_tempo thanks... |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 13 '10
Yeah, the v1 is drawn by hand then computer colored.
I am also like the v1 for free and natural. But My aim is to make it into graphic look. Thanks!! |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 13 '10
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Miss Monica on Aug 13 '10
I think it would look very good if the rain drops were more scattered, they seem very uniformed. Also it may be cool looking if the bubbles were more iridescent like. It's very cute looking I would love it for a childrens shirt !
Pretty please if you have time I would love your opinion... http://www.threadless.com/critique/73458/Gunslinger |
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vecto on Aug 13 '10
it's really cute and a big improvement since the earlier versions.
i'd eliminate some of the drops on the bottom to give it a more round-ish look. please take a moment to comment on my design here. |
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DuMone on Aug 13 '10
gettin´red...
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hannesjung on Aug 13 '10
oh yes, great improvement, the arms look so much better now :) maybe you could work on the cloud shading
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DuMone on Aug 13 '10
Does the SUN need arms?
I loved the face and mimics of V3 more... |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 13 '10
Dear Miss Monica, Thanks for so details comments!!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 13 '10
Dear Vecto, just commented on your nice work. and thanks for advice.
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 13 '10
Dear hannesjung, yeah I should put more effects on the clouds, thanks!!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 13 '10
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jumppuppyjump on Aug 13 '10
Oh, an interesting development. This is more poeatic tha you realise, I hope. Water is recycled from the cloud to bathe the sun and the overflow turns into rain which eventually becomes cloud and on and on and on.... I like the subtext in the rationale of designs, but that's just me. Great job! I have loads for you to do though :P
Oh, I'd really appreciate it if you could pop by to score Mr. Spock and tell me what you think about Light and Flight AND It's Peaceful Up Here. THanks! |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 14 '10
Wowww, are you really a poet??
Yes, yes, I meant that. Is that serious or heavy for Threadless taste? hahahhahh Thankssss! |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 14 '10
Yeah, last bumb before new version!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 14 '10
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mynameissarah on Aug 14 '10
I love this concept!
I like the foamy look of the bubbles in version 3, and your sun reminds me of a flower :) Can't wait to see new version :) |
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mynameissarah on Aug 14 '10
& I like the sun from version 1, it has a nice face :)
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Huseens on Aug 14 '10
The sun and cloouds looks very nice, but I think you should place raindrops more chaotic. :)
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 14 '10
Dear mynameissarah, thanks your words!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 14 '10
Hi, dear all!
Here the new look with Sea blue Tee template. And maybe this will be the sub template. How is your feeling? Can anybody count how many colors ? |
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cgar89 on Aug 14 '10
This is awsome
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 14 '10
Thanks, dude.
And I have changed the title to: Where The Rain Drops Came From, is this title OK?? |
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LaBellaVita1 on Aug 14 '10
awesome :) great idea :)
your new title is better |
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mynameissarah on Aug 14 '10
@Mrcoffeebean: Yeah, I love your idea. Designs about
fun, cute nature is common, but your idea is great. It has made me think of the rain that way, as the sun's leftover bath water. I really do like the concept. & the title is absolutely perfect now that it matches your design :) |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 14 '10
Dear LaBella Vita, Thanks for your short but helpful words!
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simininu on Aug 14 '10
very good evolution, man. i think its ready to sub... with the new title! ;)
What do you think about mine? |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 14 '10
Dear Mynameissarah, thanks again your visiting and praise.
You are so kind looking around and make people get lots of good ideas!! |
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quiroz on Aug 14 '10
Awesome! Submit this!
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razmataz on Aug 14 '10
This is so cool! I love how the rain drops look, I don't know why haha
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 14 '10
Hi, Tunderous, just commented your great work and thanks!!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 14 '10
Dear quiroz and razmataz, thanks to your heart words.
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AliHz on Aug 14 '10
amazing bathing sun! submit!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 14 '10
Thanks AliHz!
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MaGoogals on Aug 14 '10
Hey this has come a long way, I think it's great, my only suggestion would be to make the tub less square and more curved, then I'd sub it! :)
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 15 '10
yeah, thanks dude! and anybody know how many colors ?
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 15 '10
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 15 '10
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Anybody count the number of colors?? |
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Boycey on Aug 15 '10
Ha ha did you get this from the Pun bog, Fatheed wrote?
Nice idea. As a title seems like you should call it; The Sunbather |
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Boycey on Aug 15 '10
looks good btw-the bath could do with some re-working, the negative space isn't really working.
my crit-please look thanx |
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DuMone on Aug 15 '10
good new title and great improvements!
I´m still missing the foam and the joyful sun-face from V1 but I cannot have everything, right? If you put it on blue tee you could lose the blue colour of the tub and stuff; so you won´t get problems with slightly different blue biting each other :Z |
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pjbrick7 on Aug 15 '10
super improvements from the first version to the last. mock it up and a kids tee and sub it!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 15 '10
Dear Boycey, Is this familir with someone's??? I don't know it, dude. And Thanks your words.
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Boycey on Aug 15 '10
No, the idea was in a blog called the pun blog that's all. No problem subbing this.
Comment on my crit. pls! |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 15 '10
Dear DuMone, great thanks to you. Yeah, its hard to choose best color match and so I have to spend more time on searching comments.
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 15 '10
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 15 '10
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Flowtees on Aug 15 '10
Hey MrBC. This has changed sooo much since version 1. They're almost like different designs now.
I agree with some of the other comments new bath shape (one of those curvy free standing ones would look awesome) Boyceys idea for 'The Sunbather' is pretty cool. at the end of the day it's down to you though, I think it looks great and will make a superb kid's shirt. ^_^ |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 15 '10
Yeah, welcome back, dear Flowtees. Great thanks to your comments and I am doing the new version soon.
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kiiarella on Aug 15 '10
its cute and ready i think, good luck :)
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tifferlee on Aug 15 '10
Wow this is so different from the first one I saw! I love it!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 15 '10
Dear clairecreative, kiiarella and tifferlee, you all are sweet ladies! thanks for your words and i hope this should not be only the female Tee, hahahhaa
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 15 '10
Hi, dear all!!
As I said, your words are worthy to make my Tee better and lovely! Great thanks to Jublin and Plu Shu, your comments helped me so much. Here the changes of this latest design: I have totally redo the Sun so she doesn't alike Sunflower. And just because the concept/ title is Where The Rain Drops Came From, I made the water recycling to be more Scientific. And I also use pink and light blue shadows on the tube for not the same color with background. Do you think it is better? Please tell me you like light blue or dark blue Tee template. Have a nice coffee! |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 15 '10
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 15 '10
Dear ArmoreFowl, just gave comments and thanks.
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 15 '10
Dear all, fyi I have changed the title to The SunBathing, is it better?
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 15 '10
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 16 '10
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Sofamonkeyz on Aug 16 '10
This is a huge improvement over V1. I kinda like v5 better tho, with the exception of the eye's and maybe the shirt color.
These critique threads can be pretty stingee huh? Please critique mine too! http://www.threadless.com/critique/74349/Don_t_be_a_Pot_Head |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 16 '10
Dear Sofamonkeyz, thanks for your short briefing.
and just commented on your nice work. |
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MadameT on Aug 16 '10
So cute! I really like this one.
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 16 '10
Dear MadameT, thanks for comin.
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lord earthquake on Aug 16 '10
As usual great design. I like this, but i wonder if that cloud should have more character like the sun...
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 16 '10
Dear Lord earthquake, yeah, maybe the cloud should be another partner to bath the Sun, great!!!!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 16 '10
Yeah, this is the look for the sub, maybe.
I use navy Kids Tee. And I have added the face to cloud for the interaction. What do you think?? |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 16 '10
Yeah, I just changed the title to : The Sun Bather/ The Sun Bathing.
Which one you feel better? |
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Very cute. I think the Tub could use some work. How about making it look more like an old Claw Foot Tub
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lord earthquake on Aug 16 '10
wow... Fast reaction!!! Much better now!
Now I see the shower is the hand of cloud... so Why the sun keeps a cloud hand? cloud wash the sun with shower.. and sun should wash the cloud with sponge! ... I'm not sure my explain are clearly. |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 16 '10
Dear bortwein, what a good sample! I like the white bold and blue body, but I dont like the model. Anyway, I will consider and great thanks to you again.
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DuMone on Aug 16 '10
The sun looks much more joyful again now!
Sunbath hmm ja, it´s a pun, but I would like to call it as you said " where the raindrops (really) come from", that´s kind of romantic. |
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DuMone on Aug 16 '10
cloud´s face might be too much. It´s kind of competition to the sun´s sunny face, I think
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rhyminboy on Aug 16 '10
The Origin of Rain from a childs POV. Thats kind of how i see this design.
i like the simplicity. I think simple designs seem to work better on tees where u only sometimes have a quick glimpse on a tee (assuming its been printed already) to understand the concept. My minor suggestions. Make the raindrops from cloud less uniform and more random spacing. Reads a bit like an arrow due to its even spacing. Really though there isnt much more i would add. It reads easily and quickly. I have some subs up scoring if you get a chance. I value your opinions. Sports Nut Davinci's Rejected sketch |
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Tail Spin Designs on Aug 16 '10
Can't think of anything to add. I like the style, the characters are cute and perfect on a kid's shirt, and the color shirt you chose offers a nice contrast to the colors in the design. It's happy... makes me smile! Great job!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 16 '10
Yeah, see you again!
This is the experiment design refered to your previous comments. The major change is the left hand of cloud crabbing a soap. And I try to use Turquoise Tee and Royal Blue for better look. What do you think of this try? Do you think Turquoise color is the better one?? Do you think the Turquoise color is the better one?? |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 16 '10
Yeah, Bump for comin news!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 16 '10
Yeah, choose your loved Tee!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 16 '10
BUMP!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 17 '10
BUMP!!
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cadeia on Aug 17 '10
NICE! This is really cute! I like to see this in a sea blue shirt! :)
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 17 '10
Thanks dear Cadeia, thats great suggetion!
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Lordrych on Aug 17 '10
very simplistic and simple design, I would almost say this is better for a kids t for sure, and on colors I would say this would look good int powder blue in the corner that you have it on.
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ibeenthere on Aug 17 '10
i think this is a unisex design:)
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 17 '10
Thanks!! And will ready the sub.
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SR2010 on Aug 17 '10
yey cool.. like your concept.. blue one is better!!
would be cool if you check my nonswimmer. thank you! :) |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 17 '10
Dear SR2010, just commented on your great design! Thanksss!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 17 '10
BUMP! Final words.
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ryandemello on Aug 17 '10
I quite like the royal blue, although to me it definitely seems like a kids tee, but either way its a great design.
Would appreciate feedback on my design Peace and War" |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 17 '10
Dear ryandemello, just commented your nice work! Thanksss!
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DuMone on Aug 17 '10
prefere the previous version.
and this without cloud´s face. Because now the sun is not protargonist anymore... sigh. |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 17 '10
Hahahha, Kids should not be alone, you know?
Anybody say yes, no? |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 17 '10
BUMP!!
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this is a really great kids design! It may not need the water drops at the bottom (under the cloud). good stuff!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 17 '10
Thats good idea. let it focusing on Sunbathing!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 17 '10
Yeah, this is the experiment look on Navy Tee by model.
How do you feel? Sub it by kids Tee or girly Tee? Any other comments? |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 17 '10
Yes! I want more comments before sub it.
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 17 '10
BUMP!!
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Lewis Cern on Aug 17 '10
I like this tee color...
If I could suggest an idea, you could make 2 images: 1) with sun smiling, water on shower ando no rain under the cloud.. then another (2) with sun surprised or unhappy looking up, nowater on shower and rain under the cloud looking down.. just an idea, might make or break the piece.. |
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quiroz on Aug 17 '10
Giving life to the cloud is a nice idea. Collaboration between the sun and the cloud is even nicer. Very cool concept. The implementation is quite good. I don't know how you can further improve that aspect. Both royal blue and navy blue tees are good. :)
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 17 '10
Dear Lewis Cern, yeah, I think I should use image1 for positive think. really thanks for your suggestions!!
Have a nice coffee! |
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jiska_ on Aug 17 '10
i like this navy shirt better than the royal blue one :)
i think it works on this girly tee. any more comments for friendly clouds? |
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Guttmann on Aug 17 '10
I think you should Submitted already...
I've seen the process, and by now is pretty DONE for me. http://www.threadless.com/critique/74759/URBAN_KING http://www.threadless.com/critique/74733/GRAFFITI_LOVE |
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Guttmann on Aug 17 '10
I forgot, do it for GIRLS and KIDS too...
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 17 '10
Dear quiroz, Yeah, I thought there is better interaction between two friends.
And I will delete the rain drop from cloud for the new title, The Sunbathing. |
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JetJones on Aug 17 '10
Nice design, after looking through the different versions this design is very solid. I'm not sure if you can improve much more on it, I agree with Guttmann and say submit.
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 17 '10
Dear Guttmann and JetJones, Thanks to both of you!
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harrietgolden on Aug 17 '10
Looks great
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kevin10992 on Aug 17 '10
I like this a lot better! Great improvements. My only suggestion would be that the cloud looks metallic. Keep it up good job!
If you could critique me that would be great! http://www.threadless.com/critique/74771/Melting_ice_cream_truck_tittle |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 17 '10
Dear harrietgolden, I love your sharp eye!!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 17 '10
Dear Kevin, thanks for sharing!
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SR2010 on Aug 17 '10
looks very nice on navy .. and kids shirt;)
would be cool if you check my tea bag. thank you!! version 3 ;) |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 18 '10
Dear SR2010, thanks and will comment yours.
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 18 '10
Dear SR2010, I love your tee!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 18 '10
Yeah!!!
This is the really Sub template before go! So what do you think? |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 18 '10
OH, yes.
The title will be The Sunbathing. This design for both Kids Tee and Girly Tee. |
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AFL on Aug 18 '10
Really a cute tee.Verry girlys I think..or maybe for kids.
The blue is pretty good too. |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 18 '10
Dear AFL, thanks the words!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 18 '10
BUMP!
Should I sub this template? |
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DuMone on Aug 18 '10
go-go-go!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 18 '10
OK! This is the final sub template.
Have a look. Do you think it is better to sub? |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 18 '10
Yeah, The title is changed to The Sunbathing.
Hope you love it! |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 18 '10
BUMP!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 18 '10
BUMP!
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jiska_ on Aug 18 '10
i think this template is better than the version before.
the tee in the middle still has some white pixels around it. any comments for phone invaders? |
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looks good, just get rid of the white pixels around the middle tee and maybe put a drop shadow around them so the edges on the tee dont disappear. rock n roll dude!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 18 '10
Dear Gabriele Nanni, I just voted your great work!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 18 '10
Dear jerbing33, Yes, I saw that, thanks remind!!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 18 '10
BUMP!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 18 '10
BUMP!!
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Elfedward on Aug 18 '10
I agree with everyone. The white pixels are a little distracting. I'm not even sure I'm crazy about that blue to begin with...I prefer the darker one but that's just me.
(would love to get some feedback too: Jonah? |
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scribbleicious on Aug 18 '10
I think it looks great, the only thing is should the soap be a tiny bit bigger? it seems to conflict a bit with the size of the clouds hand.
could i get some feedback? http://www.threadless.com/critique/74840/Sir_Your_fly |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 18 '10
Dear Elfedward, yes, I saw it. And sure the royal Blue is better, thanks!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 19 '10
Dear scribbleicious, just commented on your work and thanks.
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 19 '10
BUMP!!
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Guttmann on Aug 19 '10
I like it the way it is by now.
I rated on "submit it". http://www.threadless.com/critique/74733/GRAFFITI_LOVE |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 19 '10
Dear Guttmann, thanks the words.
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lord earthquake on Aug 19 '10
Looks much better ! :)
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_lillo_ on Aug 19 '10
Mmm...I think it's ready!
If you have some free time, can you comment and vote my design please? Thank you! |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 19 '10
Dear Lord erthquake, Yeah you again! thankssss!
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lord earthquake on Aug 19 '10
I lurk and watch all the time :D !!!
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FittoPollame on Aug 19 '10
it's cool!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 19 '10
Dear Lillo, Thanks the confirmation!
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candrew on Aug 19 '10
Haha woah, it is so much different and better than the first design. I love it :)
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 19 '10
FittoPollame, Hi, you again! How r you doing????
Thanks your words! |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 19 '10
Dear candrew, yes, I love you, too! hahahahahah
have a nice coffee! |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 19 '10
Dear candrew, yes, I love you, too! hahahahahah
have a nice coffee! |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 19 '10
Dear candrew, yes, I love you, too! hahahahahah
have a nice coffee! |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 19 '10
OK! This is the Sub template preview.
Do you think it is ready to go sub? Please press Submit. |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 19 '10
Yeah, countdown to sub!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 19 '10
Yes, I am not sure if this sub template is really better to go sub,
please tell me and press Submit, thanks!! |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 19 '10
BUMP!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 19 '10
BUMP!
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jiska_ on Aug 19 '10
i love this, submit it! :D
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 19 '10
Hi, Jiska, you again!!
I have changed the title to The Sunbathing, hope you get it. And thanks for pressing the Submit!! |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 19 '10
BUMP.
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 19 '10
BUMP!!
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allikka on Aug 19 '10
Loving this! Beautiful. Submit!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 20 '10
Dear allika, great thanks to you!
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looks like the water droplets are copy pasted, try giving them more individuality :)
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lord earthquake on Aug 20 '10
The cloud face is cool now :) I like it!
Give the Sun a face expression like it's taking a very cold shower :) If you want. |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 20 '10
dear agrimony, yeah, this should be more energy, thanks!!!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 20 '10
dear lord earthquake, Thats a good idea!!! I consider it. Thankssss!
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jumppuppyjump on Aug 20 '10
YOu still haven't submitted this?
I'd be eternally grateful (yes, I'm prone to grandiloquence) if you could pop by to give It's Peaceful Up here and Light and Flight your score and blessing. :X Thanks! |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 20 '10
Yes, dude! I wonder why this template seems blur and the girl model maybe should change to a sweet smiling girl, any suggestion?
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 20 '10
Dear jumppuppyjump, I just voted your great works!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 20 '10
BUMP!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 20 '10
BUMP again!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 20 '10
Yeah!!! I just sent this Sub!!
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About time! Haha
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bleedinghitman on Aug 20 '10
haha ...clever idea...now i know where clouds come from .. :P
If you have time can you score mine? http://www.threadless.com/submission/292629/FightforLove/showmore,designs |
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LaBellaVita1 on Aug 20 '10
haha! sooooo much more awesome now! :D submit! :)
if you have a minute, could you critique mine? thanks :) |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 20 '10
Dear staffell, yes, this golden time, woaaaahahahhah!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 20 '10
Dear bleedinghitman, just commented your nice work.
Thanks your words. |
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TSUNAMISET on Aug 20 '10
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 20 '10
Dear TSUNAMISET, thanks and just commented on your cool work.
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 20 '10
BUMP!!
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clavediseno on Aug 21 '10
dude this idea has evolve SO F6CKIN MUCH xD love this V
dark blue is my choose, best of luck, great tee! :D help me with pacman please D:t |
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 21 '10
Yeah, thanks to you, dude!
Now this Sub just up for score, please vote me!!! |
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clavediseno on Aug 21 '10
put the link man!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 21 '10
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 21 '10
Yeah, Bump and score mine!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 21 '10
Yeah, Bump and score mine!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 21 '10
Yeah, Bump and score mine!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 22 '10
BUMP!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 23 '10
BUMP. Time to score this : Sunbathing
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Nick Bollen on Aug 24 '10
Definitely Submit it
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andreismoler on Aug 24 '10
Real cool... you should submit it... please critique mine http://threadless.com/critique/75200/Energy_Saving
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 24 '10
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Morethanbarbie on Aug 24 '10
this is awesome, came a long way! submit!!
if you have a second i'd love a critique :) we can fly! |
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thatzswell on Aug 25 '10
nice work on developing the concept!!!
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4runner on Aug 25 '10
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designer25 on Aug 27 '10
LOVE IT!!!! it is such a cute idea! i would totally wear it!
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Mrcoffeebean on Aug 27 '10
Yeah, it is submited. Please vote Sunbathing.
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