Dear all, this is one of my loved old piece of character, The Sun.rnrnIt think It want to make it to graphic Tee.rnDo you think it is so normal or any other idea?

Bump for help.

looks like a sunflower :-(

Oh, I thought The Sun just alike the Sunflower, dude.
I am going to do the graphic style. Thanks your words.

BUMP!

this design is cool.
if its not to be confused with a sunflower u should make the rays sharper or triangular.would make the design even better.
good work

could you please critique ours as well?http://www.threadless.com/critique/73696/Cartoon_Sounds

Dear potternerds, just visited you and pls vote my sub: The Escape. Thanks!

ok done

It has humor into it, but I want to see it a shirt

different background color (maybe light blue) and different color for the clouds (maybe white) ;)

would be cool if you check mine:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/73940/minephant
thanks!!

Dear SR2010, just gave my comments and thanks!

well it need to look more like bathing :S

can you RATE bananas please?

it's cool:) just why the bird's so confused?XD

Opssss, the bird just feel hot.
And maybe I should draw the bird taking a soap?

BUMP for helps!

Hm, I don't really like the bird, maybe try re-drawing it,

If you have some time, please take a look at my critique, and leave a comment:
Pug Life

i think you should add more to it

http://www.threadless.com/critique/74048/Thinkin_monkey

I don't like the bird either. You could redraw it, but I think this would be better without it.

Dear all, thanks the ideas and I think I will redraw the bird with a handkerchief?

I think you should get rid of the bird, it is not needed. Also the sun has some blue on its teeth and that looks a bit strange. I would also add in a bit more white to the suds and bubbles.

Yeah, Linda, thanks for your advices!!

BUMP for helps!

Haha, wow. It's cute, I think a nice kids' tee. Oh, and if you have trouble getting comments, I would suggest doing this:

Couch Surfer: I believe this is it... (V.10)

Cup of Rocket: Unleash the fury!

and by that I mean comment with some actual content that might make a difference, and leave a link! Keep goin', breh!

Dear Jeiji, Thanks for your brief!!

pretty sweet. :) yeah try it on a light blue tee :D

if you got a moment please check out mine :D

http://www.threadless.com/critique/73921/Color_Cats

Thanks!!!

BUMP!

I like the simplicity and cuteness in this. How bout the placement?

I would like to know whatt you think of this :)
No One Should Be Alone

Dear Ellonyme, just voted your heart work!

BUMP on 1:24AM here.

i would like to see it on a tee:) the birdy needs some fixing you could change the color of it and add detail with black lines like you did with the sun or just remake it :D
please comment on mine :)
http://www.threadless.com/critique/74063/Bunny_Ears

OK. My v2 will be done soon!

Dear ephemeris, just comment on your design.
Now I am just thinking how about the Sun likely the sunflower??
Can you accept it??

Sweet and nice. Show a real shirt.
Has a time?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/74121/Serious_Gentleman

Dear swellsights, just comment on your work.

I don't thing there is anything wrong with it as it is. Put it on a tee on a model and let have a look what the placement looks like. I think it'll make a great Kids shirt. ^_^

Hahahah, ok, Flowtees, thanks for coim again!

Maybe make rain clouds above the sun instead of the bird as if he is showering in the rain? Keep it up!


If you have time I would appreciate it if you could score my Mario design. Thanks!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/290356/An_Unfortunate_Accident

Dear kevin, good idea!

I think it would be good to see some clouds raining down on the sun

yeah, dear empiricist, good idea and thanks for comin!

BUMP for help!

The bird looks a little angry but this design is SO wonderful. :)

OK, thanks the words!

I don't really understand the "bird". If I may suggest, maybe the sun bathing in a lake of boiling water (warm thermal spring)
can you critique mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/73966/little_angel

Thankssss!

While I am not free to do the v2, i want to get more ideas!

BUMP for helps!

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Yeah, more comments to bring up the new version!

Hi, dear all!
Here the The Sun in graphic. I have deleted the bird so the Sun being alone in bath.
What do you think ?

cool idea, I like the foamy clouds from the first version better but it is well done!

If you have the time to have a look:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/74220/oneline_love
http://www.threadless.com/critique/72464/changes

cool idea, I like the foamy clouds from the first version better but it is well done!

If you have the time to have a look:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/74220/oneline_love
http://www.threadless.com/critique/72464/changes

sorry, dunno why twice...

Its ok! thanks your comments.

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love this new version =)

I like this design a lot, but it might be cool to see the overall idea from v2 rendered in the sketch style of v1.

Dear Fablucero, thanks your love.
And this is just a rough idea with simple graphic to see the colors and idea match.
what do you think of the Sun likely to sunflower??OK??

Dear Karpar, I wish you really love it at the final!

BUMP for idea.

i actually like how the sun is...it's very playful and cute...you shouldn't change it...i think with a lil more detail it would be ready to go

Oh, great!
I need more works on the details and color scheme.

Desenho muito bonito, mas precisa de mais detalhes. É o que penso.
Teria tempo para ver meu desenho?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/73134/Super_Ride

Aw, I liked the bubbly cloud he was bathing in in the first version. I'm glad to see the bird gone, but I miss the cuddly sun.

Dear winck, I just commented your great work, thanksss!

this looks good! although i did like the style of the first one.
i think if you change the little blue dot's falling by the clouds a bit it would look better

Yeah, great idea!! Thanks your words.

Dear Mrcoffeebean, sorry.
There are many messages, mistakes happen.
I wish him good luck.

Hahahha, thanks for coming back!

oh this looks awesome! i love the style of the 2nd version, but maybe you can do something with the soap-foam...

Yeah, I will repair the soap-foam!! Thanksss!

Dear all, this is the something different design.
I have changed the concept from The Sun Taking Bath to
this telling us about Where the Rain drops came from.
What do you think???

BUMP.

Looks great. Nice changes. Submit!

Very cool concept. The design is good but I think it could be better. :)

Oh I love play on words. this is great you should submit it.
Oh by the way can you tell me want you think of my design http://www.threadless.com/critique/73720/Troy

Dear karpar, thanks for words!!

this idea is really nice.
you need to work on the rain drops.

critique mine?

Dear Quiroz, you are right.
I am just need more time and comments from you and i would be better!!!

This is LOVELY! work on the little cloud bumps. and the blue shines on the bubbles are weird too. apart form that, i love it.
Please rate & comment muy latest submission
Rock & Roll

Dear jiska, just commented your nice work!

Oh hey! How'd I miss this? So ok, here I come: Break up the sense of symmetry. i know it's not exactly symmetrical but it's too close to being so. Apart from that, this is definitely a fresh idea on the origins of rain. Lol..

I'd appreciate your critiue on Light and Flight and your score on Mr. Spork. Thanks!!!!

Dear jumppuppyjump, I really miss you!
yeah, you have a good idea!

its very cool but i think that if you add some more detail to the clouds it would be better :P

Yea, maybe I should make some texture of clouds, thanks your words!

hey, really nice progress here! i love the idea of "where the rain comes from" but i prefer the style of the sun from v2. maybe you can mix v2 and v3

it would be great if you could score and take a look at my pirate shirt :)

Dear hannesjung, just voted your nice work!!
And yes, I am considering to combine v2 and v3, but do people understand the concept??

BUMP for advice!

Hi mate, you need to stop asking people to comment on your stuff all over the place. It's considered spamming.

Close encounter of the A fototype :)

I will happy to read a your comment about my
Gone with the Zomb

Aw, cute! I think the rain and clouds could use a bit of work, but overall, nice!

Dear staffell, you always be my nice reminder!!Thanksss!

Hi! Here the new look.
I have drew some textures in clouds and focusing on the concept: Where the rain drops came from.
Please give me any idea to improve.

very well done! you made the foam more foamy again and the bubbles more 3D! I only think the lower clouds are are bit too big and maybe too low... likieitlikeitlikeit!!!

oops new version at the same time I regret all except for very well done and I likeitlikeitlikeit !

But Iliked the sun and foam more in V3

dude WAY much better that v1 :D

work on the drops looks like they could use some work

Dear DuMone, I like your sweet face! Thanks for giving your truely heart words, thanksss!

Dear clavediseno, thanks your comin again!!

I like the style of the first version the most... In my opinion this technique looks a bit too synthetic compared to the first version.

Care to crit mine:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/72559/Push_the_tempo
thanks...

Yeah, the v1 is drawn by hand then computer colored.
I am also like the v1 for free and natural.
But My aim is to make it into graphic look. Thanks!!

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I think it would look very good if the rain drops were more scattered, they seem very uniformed. Also it may be cool looking if the bubbles were more iridescent like. It's very cute looking I would love it for a childrens shirt !
Pretty please if you have time I would love your opinion...
http://www.threadless.com/critique/73458/Gunslinger

it's really cute and a big improvement since the earlier versions.
i'd eliminate some of the drops on the bottom to give it a more round-ish look.
please take a moment to comment on my design here.

gettin´red...

oh yes, great improvement, the arms look so much better now :) maybe you could work on the cloud shading

Does the SUN need arms?
I loved the face and mimics of V3 more...

Dear Miss Monica, Thanks for so details comments!!

Dear Vecto, just commented on your nice work. and thanks for advice.

Dear hannesjung, yeah I should put more effects on the clouds, thanks!!

BUMP for comments.

Oh, an interesting development. This is more poeatic tha you realise, I hope. Water is recycled from the cloud to bathe the sun and the overflow turns into rain which eventually becomes cloud and on and on and on.... I like the subtext in the rationale of designs, but that's just me. Great job! I have loads for you to do though :P

Oh, I'd really appreciate it if you could pop by to score Mr. Spock and tell me what you think about Light and Flight AND It's Peaceful Up Here. THanks!

Wowww, are you really a poet??
Yes, yes, I meant that. Is that serious or heavy for Threadless taste? hahahhahh Thankssss!

Yeah, last bumb before new version!

BUMP.

I love this concept!
I like the foamy look of the bubbles in version 3,
and your sun reminds me of a flower :)

Can't wait to see new version :)

& I like the sun from version 1, it has a nice face :)

The sun and cloouds looks very nice, but I think you should place raindrops more chaotic. :)

Dear mynameissarah, thanks your words!

Hi, dear all!

Here the new look with Sea blue Tee template.
And maybe this will be the sub template.
How is your feeling?
Can anybody count how many colors ?

This is awsome

Thanks, dude.
And I have changed the title to: Where The Rain Drops Came From, is this title OK??

awesome :) great idea :)
your new title is better

@Mrcoffeebean: Yeah, I love your idea. Designs about
fun, cute nature is common, but your idea is great. It has
made me think of the rain that way, as the sun's leftover
bath water. I really do like the concept. & the title is absolutely
perfect now that it matches your design :)

Dear LaBella Vita, Thanks for your short but helpful words!

very good evolution, man. i think its ready to sub... with the new title! ;)

What do you think about mine?

Dear Mynameissarah, thanks again your visiting and praise.
You are so kind looking around and make people get lots of good ideas!!

Awesome! Submit this!

This is so cool! I love how the rain drops look, I don't know why haha

Hi, Tunderous, just commented your great work and thanks!!

Dear quiroz and razmataz, thanks to your heart words.

amazing bathing sun! submit!

Thanks AliHz!

Hey this has come a long way, I think it's great, my only suggestion would be to make the tub less square and more curved, then I'd sub it! :)

yeah, thanks dude! and anybody know how many colors ?

BUM for helps!

BUMP!!
Anybody count the number of colors??

Ha ha did you get this from the Pun bog, Fatheed wrote?

Nice idea.
As a title seems like you should call it; The Sunbather

looks good btw-the bath could do with some re-working, the negative space isn't really working.

my crit-please look thanx

good new title and great improvements!
I´m still missing the foam and the joyful sun-face from V1 but I cannot have everything, right?
If you put it on blue tee you could lose the blue colour of the tub and stuff; so you won´t get problems with slightly different blue biting each other :Z

super improvements from the first version to the last. mock it up and a kids tee and sub it!

Dear Boycey, Is this familir with someone's??? I don't know it, dude. And Thanks your words.

No, the idea was in a blog called the pun blog that's all. No problem subbing this.

Comment on my crit. pls!

Dear DuMone, great thanks to you. Yeah, its hard to choose best color match and so I have to spend more time on searching comments.

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Hey MrBC. This has changed sooo much since version 1. They're almost like different designs now.

I agree with some of the other comments new bath shape (one of those curvy free standing ones would look awesome) Boyceys idea for 'The Sunbather' is pretty cool.

at the end of the day it's down to you though, I think it looks great and will make a superb kid's shirt.

^_^

Yeah, welcome back, dear Flowtees. Great thanks to your comments and I am doing the new version soon.

So very cute. Looking forward to the next round.

If you have a sec... Lil Pink Hoss

its cute and ready i think, good luck :)

Wow this is so different from the first one I saw! I love it!

Dear clairecreative, kiiarella and tifferlee, you all are sweet ladies! thanks for your words and i hope this should not be only the female Tee, hahahhaa

Hi, dear all!!
As I said, your words are worthy to make my Tee better and lovely!
Great thanks to Jublin and Plu Shu, your comments helped me so much.

Here the changes of this latest design:
I have totally redo the Sun so she doesn't alike Sunflower.
And just because the concept/ title is Where The Rain Drops Came From, I made the water recycling to be more Scientific.
And I also use pink and light blue shadows on the tube for not the same color with background.
Do you think it is better?

Please tell me you like light blue or dark blue Tee template.
Have a nice coffee!

BUMP for more.

so cute. shadows and shading maybe?

Please help me out and Critique

Dear ArmoreFowl, just gave comments and thanks.

Dear all, fyi I have changed the title to The SunBathing, is it better?

BUMP!

BUMP for anything.

This is a huge improvement over V1. I kinda like v5 better tho, with the exception of the eye's and maybe the shirt color.

These critique threads can be pretty stingee huh?

Please critique mine too!


http://www.threadless.com/critique/74349/Don_t_be_a_Pot_Head

Dear Sofamonkeyz, thanks for your short briefing.
and just commented on your nice work.

So cute! I really like this one.

Dear MadameT, thanks for comin.

As usual great design. I like this, but i wonder if that cloud should have more character like the sun...

Ah ah! Funny as usual!

I will happy to read a your comment about my
Gone with the Zomb

Dear Lord earthquake, yeah, maybe the cloud should be another partner to bath the Sun, great!!!!

Yeah, this is the look for the sub, maybe.
I use navy Kids Tee. And I have added the face to cloud for the interaction.
What do you think??

Yeah, I just changed the title to : The Sun Bather/ The Sun Bathing.
Which one you feel better?

Very cute. I think the Tub could use some work. How about making it look more like an old Claw Foot Tub

wow... Fast reaction!!! Much better now!
Now I see the shower is the hand of cloud... so Why the sun keeps a cloud hand? cloud wash the sun with shower.. and sun should wash the cloud with sponge! ... I'm not sure my explain are clearly.

Dear bortwein, what a good sample! I like the white bold and blue body, but I dont like the model. Anyway, I will consider and great thanks to you again.

The sun looks much more joyful again now!
Sunbath hmm ja, it´s a pun, but I would like to call it as you said " where the raindrops (really) come from", that´s kind of romantic.

cloud´s face might be too much. It´s kind of competition to the sun´s sunny face, I think

The Origin of Rain from a childs POV. Thats kind of how i see this design.
i like the simplicity. I think simple designs seem to work better on tees where u only sometimes have a quick glimpse on a tee (assuming its been printed already) to understand the concept.

My minor suggestions. Make the raindrops from cloud less uniform and more random spacing. Reads a bit like an arrow due to its even spacing. Really though there isnt much more i would add. It reads easily and quickly.

I have some subs up scoring if you get a chance. I value your opinions.

Sports Nut

Davinci's Rejected sketch

Can't think of anything to add. I like the style, the characters are cute and perfect on a kid's shirt, and the color shirt you chose offers a nice contrast to the colors in the design. It's happy... makes me smile! Great job!

Yeah, see you again!
This is the experiment design refered to your previous comments.
The major change is the left hand of cloud crabbing a soap.
And I try to use Turquoise Tee and Royal Blue for better look.
What do you think of this try?
Do you think Turquoise color is the better one??
Do you think the Turquoise color is the better one??

Yeah, Bump for comin news!

Yeah, choose your loved Tee!

BUMP!

BUMP!!

NICE! This is really cute! I like to see this in a sea blue shirt! :)

Thanks dear Cadeia, thats great suggetion!

very simplistic and simple design, I would almost say this is better for a kids t for sure, and on colors I would say this would look good int powder blue in the corner that you have it on.

i think this is a unisex design:)

Thanks!! And will ready the sub.

yey cool.. like your concept.. blue one is better!!

would be cool if you check my nonswimmer. thank you! :)

Dear SR2010, just commented on your great design! Thanksss!

BUMP! Final words.

I quite like the royal blue, although to me it definitely seems like a kids tee, but either way its a great design.

Would appreciate feedback on my design Peace and War"

Dear ryandemello, just commented your nice work! Thanksss!

prefere the previous version.
and this without cloud´s face.
Because now the sun is not protargonist anymore... sigh.

Hahahha, Kids should not be alone, you know?
Anybody say yes, no?

BUMP!!

this is a really great kids design! It may not need the water drops at the bottom (under the cloud). good stuff!

Thats good idea. let it focusing on Sunbathing!

Yeah, this is the experiment look on Navy Tee by model.
How do you feel?
Sub it by kids Tee or girly Tee?
Any other comments?

Yes! I want more comments before sub it.

BUMP!!

I like this tee color...
If I could suggest an idea, you could make 2 images: 1) with sun smiling, water on shower ando no rain under the cloud.. then another (2) with sun surprised or unhappy looking up, nowater on shower and rain under the cloud looking down..
just an idea, might make or break the piece..

Giving life to the cloud is a nice idea. Collaboration between the sun and the cloud is even nicer. Very cool concept. The implementation is quite good. I don't know how you can further improve that aspect. Both royal blue and navy blue tees are good. :)

My 2 cents,
Quiroz

Dear Lewis Cern, yeah, I think I should use image1 for positive think. really thanks for your suggestions!!
Have a nice coffee!

i like this navy shirt better than the royal blue one :)

i think it works on this girly tee.

any more comments for friendly clouds?

I think you should Submitted already...
I've seen the process, and by now is pretty DONE for me.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/74759/URBAN_KING

http://www.threadless.com/critique/74733/GRAFFITI_LOVE

I forgot, do it for GIRLS and KIDS too...

Dear quiroz, Yeah, I thought there is better interaction between two friends.
And I will delete the rain drop from cloud for the new title, The Sunbathing.

Nice design, after looking through the different versions this design is very solid. I'm not sure if you can improve much more on it, I agree with Guttmann and say submit.

Dear Guttmann and JetJones, Thanks to both of you!

Looks great

I like this a lot better! Great improvements. My only suggestion would be that the cloud looks metallic. Keep it up good job!


If you could critique me that would be great!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/74771/Melting_ice_cream_truck_tittle

Dear harrietgolden, I love your sharp eye!!

Dear Kevin, thanks for sharing!

looks very nice on navy .. and kids shirt;)

would be cool if you check my tea bag. thank you!! version 3 ;)

Dear SR2010, thanks and will comment yours.

Dear SR2010, I love your tee!

Yeah!!!
This is the really Sub template before go!
So what do you think?

OH, yes.
The title will be The Sunbathing.
This design for both Kids Tee and Girly Tee.

Really a cute tee.Verry girlys I think..or maybe for kids.
The blue is pretty good too.

Dear AFL, thanks the words!

BUMP!
Should I sub this template?

go-go-go!

OK! This is the final sub template.
Have a look.
Do you think it is better to sub?

Yeah, The title is changed to The Sunbathing.
Hope you love it!

BUMP!

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i think this template is better than the version before.
the tee in the middle still has some white pixels around it.

any comments for phone invaders?

looks good, just get rid of the white pixels around the middle tee and maybe put a drop shadow around them so the edges on the tee dont disappear. rock n roll dude!

Yeah! Yeah!! Yeah!!! Submit it

I'm happy if you will score my
Gone with the Dead !

Dear Gabriele Nanni, I just voted your great work!

Looks great, perfect for a kids shirt too.

I fell kinda lame, but could you
Score me

Dear jerbing33, Yes, I saw that, thanks remind!!

BUMP!

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I agree with everyone. The white pixels are a little distracting. I'm not even sure I'm crazy about that blue to begin with...I prefer the darker one but that's just me.

(would love to get some feedback too: Jonah?

I think it looks great, the only thing is should the soap be a tiny bit bigger? it seems to conflict a bit with the size of the clouds hand.

could i get some feedback?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/74840/Sir_Your_fly

Dear Elfedward, yes, I saw it. And sure the royal Blue is better, thanks!

Dear scribbleicious, just commented on your work and thanks.

BUMP!!

I like it the way it is by now.
I rated on "submit it".

http://www.threadless.com/critique/74733/GRAFFITI_LOVE

Dear Guttmann, thanks the words.

Looks much better ! :)

Mmm...I think it's ready!

If you have some free time, can you comment and vote my design please? Thank you!

Dear Lord erthquake, Yeah you again! thankssss!

I lurk and watch all the time :D !!!

it's cool!

Dear Lillo, Thanks the confirmation!

Haha woah, it is so much different and better than the first design. I love it :)

FittoPollame, Hi, you again! How r you doing????
Thanks your words!

Dear candrew, yes, I love you, too! hahahahahah
have a nice coffee!

Dear candrew, yes, I love you, too! hahahahahah
have a nice coffee!

Dear candrew, yes, I love you, too! hahahahahah
have a nice coffee!

OK! This is the Sub template preview.
Do you think it is ready to go sub?
Please press Submit.

Yeah, countdown to sub!

Yes, I am not sure if this sub template is really better to go sub,
please tell me and press Submit, thanks!!

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i love this, submit it! :D

Hi, Jiska, you again!!
I have changed the title to The Sunbathing, hope you get it.
And thanks for pressing the Submit!!

BUMP.

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Loving this! Beautiful. Submit!

Dear allika, great thanks to you!

looks like the water droplets are copy pasted, try giving them more individuality :)

The cloud face is cool now :) I like it!
Give the Sun a face expression like it's taking a very cold shower :) If you want.

dear agrimony, yeah, this should be more energy, thanks!!!

dear lord earthquake, Thats a good idea!!! I consider it. Thankssss!

YOu still haven't submitted this?

I'd be eternally grateful (yes, I'm prone to grandiloquence) if you could pop by to give It's Peaceful Up here and Light and Flight your score and blessing. :X Thanks!

Yes, dude! I wonder why this template seems blur and the girl model maybe should change to a sweet smiling girl, any suggestion?

Dear jumppuppyjump, I just voted your great works!

BUMP!

BUMP again!

Yeah!!! I just sent this Sub!!

About time! Haha

haha ...clever idea...now i know where clouds come from .. :P

If you have time can you score mine?
http://www.threadless.com/submission/292629/FightforLove/showmore,designs

haha! sooooo much more awesome now! :D submit! :)

if you have a minute, could you critique mine? thanks :)

Dear staffell, yes, this golden time, woaaaahahahhah!

Dear bleedinghitman, just commented your nice work.
Thanks your words.

i like this


can u please

Dear TSUNAMISET, thanks and just commented on your cool work.

BUMP!!

dude this idea has evolve SO F6CKIN MUCH xD love this V

dark blue is my choose, best of luck, great tee! :D

help me with pacman please D:t

Yeah, thanks to you, dude!
Now this Sub just up for score, please vote me!!!

put the link man!

Yeah, Sunbathing is up for score.
Please vote me HERE.
Thanks to you, Clavediseno!

Yeah, Bump and score mine!

Yeah, Bump and score mine!

Yeah, Bump and score mine!

BUMP!

BUMP. Time to score this : Sunbathing

Definitely Submit it

Real cool... you should submit it... please critique mine http://threadless.com/critique/75200/Energy_Saving

Yeah! Please vote me.

this is awesome, came a long way! submit!!
if you have a second i'd love a critique :) we can fly!

nice work on developing the concept!!!

The cloud providing the water was a nice addition. The design looks ready to rock.

Please score me!

LOVE IT!!!! it is such a cute idea! i would totally wear it!

Yeah, it is submited. Please vote Sunbathing.

Thanks!