i can't decide if it's too plain or not.

i'd really appreciate some additional ideas?



ZOOM

I think your clouds are really nice.

maybe more?

i think that right top corner is screaming for something but it would have to be perfect otherwise pretty cool style

this is quite beaitufl, i think it look nicer larger on the tee shirt. i think it could use some more clouds

yes. larger

How about a little tent w/ a little fire sitting on the top island?

I like Andrew's tent & fire idea :) . Is that a burrow in the bottom left? I can't tell.



And I really wanna just push the clouds on the left over to the right!



Love the style, there's something really understated but great about it :)

how about another island in the blank top right space, with the tent on it, and the fire somewhere around the cave?

2nd version. still looking for alot of suggestions. it still feels a little plain. BUMP BUMP!!

I don't think plain is necessarily a bad think. I really like the look of this as is. I can't think of anything I'd want changed.

BUMP

Beutiful, yellow shirt for me. Just submit it!

It was already great in V1 but those changes have made it even better, $5 from me when subbed :)

I think the roots should extend much larger where there are trees.



This is a really great, printable design. Reminds me of golfing :)

Very cool, but I would keep adding some more things to the land

a moose and a beaver :)



Yay Canada!

I love it!



Especially more clouds!!!

You've got my vote for "Submission" Telp, the little tent and fire made it complete for me.



I won't bitch any more. :)

I don't think that's necessary, but bringing it down a bit might work. I think more clouds would be overkill, but that's just my op.

WHAT ABOUT MORE CLOUDS BELOW THE ISLAND

OR IS ONE ENOUGH



anyone want to go on paint and circle things to change??

i want to get this right!!

too dull....

Looks good as hell, maybe slightly bring down the island with the tent on it, a few more clouds where the design feels empty, other than that, sexy!

add some golfers :-D

You've got nineteen submit it votes. I think you've got it right.

i think it still needs more. i like the moose idea and maybe more clouds. i was thinking of a few more islands just like... wrapping around ?