This is the first sketch of my Gone with the Zomb, based on the Gone with the Wind movie poster

Yeah, great idea.
And I want to see the details and Tee template.
Please comment my critique.

It's got potential.

Thanks Neil!
P.S. I love your Simple Plan

Oh man....this is a great idea.

Thanks, i'm onored to receive a so positive comment from a great illustrator like you

The basic idea is very original, not what I personallywould like (not such a zombie fan ;) ), but it is funny. Continue working on it, the colouring and so on.. I think there will be many people loving this idea if you work on it well.

Hi everybody. Today i redifine the flames behind the zomb and the woman clothes. Have a question. Which color do you prefer for the woman hair? Blu electric?

lol!!! great idea!!!
i think the color scheme should be a close one...meaning, if all the colors are warm, then keep the hair with something warm...and use the skin colors with a bit colder tones to contrass the wormth....can't wait for the next version!

Please score my design: African Mirage
and if you have the time, tell me what you think about the final version before submitting of: Lets settle this! :)

Thank's ibeen for the advices about the colors!

yea use a warm color pallete, wow this is going to look pretty sweet when you're done!

Yeah, I want see details.
Please comment my design on critique.

hahahah sweet idea! I'm not a fan of zombie things usually but I think this could really work. I agree that colors should stay warm for now. I'm not entirely sure 'gone with the zomb' is the best title - maybe something a tad smoother, like 'gone with the dead', or some such? But that's a minor niggle. I'm really looking forward to seeing this develop, I think that if you do it in a detailed style you seem to be going towards it might really come out amazing.

Lol... I just have a soft spot for pop culture pieces AND zombie art and combining these two, well, you had me at 'zomb'. That being said, comment wise, i LOVE the paintey thing you've got going there, a degree of verisimilitude is always important in a tribute piece but the zomb. I need more face and a slobbery iwannaeatchoo expression. Title wise, why not 'zomb with the wind'? It won't be to phonetically dissimilar that way.

Thanks celandinestern and jumppuppyjump for all the advices! They are very important for me

"Gone with the Dead" is a great idea. I can't wait to see this in all its glory. I been there has some great color ideas. Keep it up!

The Missin Link

Tomorrow a new design of Gone with the Zomb. The new question: the title :) Do you prefer:

a) Gone with the Zomb
b) Gone with the Dead
c) Zomb in the Wind

B!

Placing a link on other critiques is fine but placing a link on people's submissions is not ok here. It is actually considered spamming and I would recommend not to do it any more.

Please read this blog on promoting

Can you position it on the shirt? I am trying to envision it.

please help with mine:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/72933/Just_Out_of_Reach

hahaha I have a thing for zombies so you get an A....titlewise i would go with b....just need to see placement on it =)

great work!

Ah, ok MurrayMullet, i didnt know this fact. Sorry, i'm new here on Threadless. Thanks Fablucero!

@ P Schadt: yeah, when i finish the design i put it on the shirt

Your design is very creative :)

Do you think you can critique mine if you have time?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/73157/Love_Unrequited

New version of Gone with the Zomb (or "Gone with the Dead"). Today i redifine the zombie clothes, the woman face (dont look at hair' colour, is temporary!) and i put a Michael Jackson Thriller tattoo on the woman's shoulder! ;)

Ah, another thing: onother idea is to draw a centipede which exit from the mouth of the zomb. What do you think?

I think prolly no on the centepede personally ha but you could try it, haha the tatoo is a good addition, its getting their man slowly but surly cant wait for it to be finished!

I LOVE DA WAY U ADDED DETAILS IT LOOKS CRAZY
I SAY SUBMIT =)

very nice! i think the zombi is colored very nice i think the woman should be paler...cause she looks dead...and it will give nice contrass to the clothes, hair and background warm colors...

nice work! I would do the features of both of them darker! But I really like it :)

nice work! I would do the features of both of them darker! But I really like it :)

I like everything but the white, it looks unfinished. Aside from that i'd give this a definite buy.
Stop by my critique sometime and help me out.

looks all white but its cool

Very eager to see the rest of it! How are you painting? digitally or real world type paints?

I think the harmonious colors.

hey cool, i think you need to get rid of the white. and are those little zombies down the bottom? keep working on it, should be great!

Okay, this is definately one to watch! Exceptionally original which is saying a lot considering it's a zombie theme.

Title = Gone With the Dead I think works best.

The sillouettes of the people at the bottom is pretty cool. Not sure if I'm liking the tatoo though, I think it takes away from the vintage feel of the poster, also I say no to the centepede.

I looks kind of faded at the moment and unfinished so I'll keep an eye on it and see how it comes along.

BTW, too homeruns from me cause I'm a Gone with the Wind fan too!

Thank you all! I'm drawing Gone with the Dead (definetely choose the title!) with a Wacom graphic table. Yeah, the draw is unfinished: today i try to define the bottom zombies

If you want, join my in my new facebook profile ;)
http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id#!/profile.php?id=1352269514

Another day for the zomb.. :) Today i made the woman's hair (warm colour like suggest) and start working on the zomb face (i made the bags under the eyes, and i dont put a centipede exit from the mouth). Some question to all of us: do you like the womans hair? And i think to put a piercing on here nose: what do you think?

and dont forget to join me here :)
Gabri Paintings

Looking better, I think it is a bit too pastel as it is though. Try making the colours a few shades brighter.

how many colors you have there?
haha this is an awesome design.
the only thing is every thing seems a bit too faded.
but maybe thats because your working on it still haha.
great work!
and if you get the time could you vote/comment my submission?
ill be sure to do the same for you!
ONLY 3 DAYS LEFT!
FLY IN LINE

its a nice concept, but i agree that everything should b darker, right now its very pale and faded, making it darker will bring out some details (i know its a WIP, but im just saying), it'll look alot better once u finish polishing all the details of the drawing.

if u have time can u help me out? http://www.threadless.com/submission/287853/portrait_of_a_princess

Thanks of all the advices. Yeah the design is work in progress and i certainly make the colour more bright and darker at the end of the process.

and dont forget to follow me on Twitter ;)
https://twitter.com/GabriThread

Looking forward to the new version.

In the meantime, please vote and comment if you have time, thanks.

Weird, that didn't seem to bump

neat idea! :) i like the progress. i would keep working on it and i like the lights colors because it reminds me of old time movie posters!

Exactly Laurel, i make it to reminds a old movie poster. I happy you like the progress :)

i really want to see how this turns out in the end! so far so good! Id put it on a different color background tho, more of a creature of the night feel if its darker yano?

critique mine if u need a break from drawing!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/73265/Attitude

Coming along great! Looking forward to seeing it with some darker toner. Also intrigued to see how it will work on a tee.

Nice start so far. It has great potential. However, I'm not a fan of the orange background

Please let me know what you think of

Air Rescue

Sorry, my link didn't show up. Keep up the good work.

picture is good but the colors are too light ...... its hard to see

Very nice design :) The colors might need to be a bit more defined though; overall it's a bit light.

Love the design! Agree with the comment before this. It would probably be better to darken the colors

Is a good idea and design but like the others I think you should darken the design. Would you comment mine

Thanks for allo the advice! Yeah, next step i will make the colours darker and start to work with the zombie face (more difficult than i can immagine ;) . Do you think i have to put the title on the design like a poster or leave only the design?

VERY STRONG TEMPTATION: draw a centipede exit from the mounth of the zomb...

love the painting! u got a unique style
i definitely agree this needs a whole lot of contrast
other that that, (Y)

critique mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/73288/3_wittle_monsters

thnx!:)

and dont forget to join my here :)

http://twitter.com/GabriThread

i like it, need more details

im up for scoring could u please

New version of Gone with the Zomb (will be renamed in Gone with the Dead). I finally made the zomb face, more hard to draw then i can image! Then i made the bottom with the zombies advance on a field. And i made then colours more dark Like it?

I really like the colors and the drawing although i don't know about the tattoo though

wow this has come a long way! very nicely done!
i think the lower "ground" will be problametic on a shirt, placement wise...

nice progress

would like to see how it will look on a shirt

Wowww, what a heart painting, dude!
Please finish it.
Thanks for your comment.

this is really cute. it's funny! like comical.
placement?


please help me out,
http://www.threadless.com/critique/73237/Running_Shoes_Running_Together

Thanks StrangeJames for the advice: i try, i try to make like the poster at the bottom, but it's very diffucult. But i try! :)

this is definitely your best version thus far!
:)
i like how you captured the texture from the folds in their clothing.
i think it's quite eerie and magnificent. love the little zombies in the foreground also!
:)

Thanks Lisa for your compliments!

Tomorrow new version of Gone with the Zomb! Redifing the bottom

Hallo everybody. New version of Gone with the Zomb. Today i redefine the bottom, put some houses in fire behind the zombies. I have to paint another house or two in flame to make a full horizon.

I like it.

more fire please

This is coming out fantastic! I would love to start seeing more definition in the main figures. This is going to be amazing when finished.

love the fire

I will say the same that Mr Punch, its going to be amazin when finished :)

can you critique me?

I will say the same that Mr Punch, its going to be amazin when finished :)

can you critique me?

This is going to look great finished. I like the bottom half much better than the top half at this point but I cant wait to see it finished. Great job!

If you have time could you critique mine?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/73691/An_Unfortunate_Accident

The bottom half is stellar. The two main figures could use a little refining, mostly the zombie. Just little things like a little more time on the right hand. You have a solid idea and it is looking really good.

Definitely some more detail with the main characters. Possibly some of her brains showing.

Thank's Kevin. I was thinking to use the bottom also for the retro of the t-shirt

I'm somewhat freaked out. I get that way around zombies. If that's what you're going for, then great :D

If you have time, I could sure use some feedback:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/73723/Rocketdragon

TEMPTATION: draw a centipede exit from the mounth of the zomb... I have to resist! :)

Coming along nicely. With the painterly style the hair on the zombie looks hard. Perhaps soften the line or slightly feather the edge. Not a big deal though.

Thanks Joshua, yeah i will paint a little soft the zomb hair in the next few days

It's really amazing how you got to this point!
I can't really critique your t-shirt because I don't understand how are you using only 8 colors in this!(you critique my design before, I'm having some trouble with the color restrictions). Even tough I think the main characters need a little more detail!

Actually are more than 8 colours (10-11 colours), but it's the last problem :) First i draw all the scene, at the end of all i redifine reducing at 8 colours

This is coming along very nicely! I could see the finished product of this getting printed. I'm not sure about the tattoo on the woman, but I've never seen Gone with the Wind, so maybe that has to do with it. I can't wait to see the finished version!

Thanks for your comment!

it´s good to see the evolution of your paint. Amazing, man! I really want to see it finished! :) add more fire! Keep creating

what do you honestly think about mine?

Looking great so far, keep it going.... maybe some flesh falling off the zombie, or bullet wounds or something. I look forward to seeing this one finished!
Anybody wanna critique my Origin of Sasquatch?

waaouh cool illustration ! I'd like to see what it will look like on a shirt.

Very nice painting! I think it needs a contrast, other than the red background. Because everything is pale in comparison to the background. Maybe make the lady in stronger shades? Or both characters? Just a though :) Anyway, well done!

Score and comment mine? Please :)
Breakfast
Mosquito Biker

nice idea

i like the gouache effect it has. although if it´s meant for the comic challenge, you should try to get more outline definition.

rate mine!
http://www.threadless.com/submission/288639/20_s_Frenzy

best of luck!!

Thanks to all for the advices!

Gone with the Zomb in movie-poster version. Winner of Ten Zombies Award (i will make a Oscar Award looks like a Zombi Award...). Now i have a question for you about the main caracters: do you like the words THE ZOMBIE, THE WOMAN and A GREAT AMOUNT of ZOMBIES or prefer something like THE WAITER, THE CHIEF WOMAN and A GREAT AMOUNT of ZOMBIES?

Getting better each time. Could the Zombi Award just be the gold Oscar with outstretched arms in the classic zombie pose? Or even the thriller pose? Organ-ized V1 up for critique

Exactly! The Zombi Award will be like the gold oscar with a Trhiller pose!

Defiantly coming alone nicely. The wandering silhouettes are a winner. Can't wait to see more detail in the main pose. Nice work & best of luck.

If you get a chance, please check out CrateMan

Oh also, could the zombie have the proper mustache?

I really love this one, I can see it being a real movie poster. Good job!



If you have time I would appreciate it if you could score my Mario design. Thanks!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/290356/An_Unfortunate_Accident

Thanks Kevin!

waw..... so classic but cool....

Any advice about the names in the poster? I put THE ZOMBIE, THE WOMAN and A LOT AMOUNT OF ZOMBIES but "the zombie" and "the woman" i dont like. But i cant put Clark Gable and Vivien Leigh.. :)

Barry A. Live
I. L. Beback
I. B. Ded
I. M. Alive
Yul B. Next
Fester N. Rott
Ray N. Carnation
Dawn Under
Ima Goner

lol ok that's all i have for now

If you have time please score my Bum and lemme know what you think =)

Great Fablucero

Main characters hired :) Barry A. Live, Imma Goner, Dawn Under and Ray N. Carnation. Made the "Zombie Award" trophy using a Thriller move. Next time i will redefine the zombie face and the bottom

i like the technique u're using, maybe a bit more details on the girl's body and redefining the zombie face, as u wrote, will make it better.
defining the edge of the bottom so it has a nice "poster" look will also be good.
thanks for commenting on my design!

This a cool idea. I would start thinking about how its going to work as a shirt. I would not just put a big rectangle poster on the shirt.

Little look how is on a t-shirt

dont like the white fills in the type.. the two characters need more work in the detail i guess. but generally it looks nice..
try some other background-colors..

would be cool if you score my minephant. its in the running! thank you!

Yes! more for zombie lovers! show us the placement and loose some of the text it is too much information and distracts, but is really funny... a dead tree would help convey the meaning! good luck!
If you have the time, please rate & comment my new submission: Rock & Roll

man i love how this has evolved!
i think you should work it out so there won't be a frame...even though it's suppose to be like a movie poster, it's just feels wrong on the tee...
also, lose the white fills...
other then that, the illustration is amazingly done! fix those things and its a 5 from me for sure:)

please Score and comment on my Threadless loves comic design:Comic-Cong:) Thanks!

i like the design but i think the zombie should be more detail.

Man the Zombie Oscar could be a whole killer T-shirt in itself, really funny. It's coming along nicely. I'd agree with ibeenthere and maybe loose the sharp edge boarder & the main. Your main zombie may need work, add a moustache and give the girl longer hair.

Thanks for checking out RefinedState

Also if you get a chance pls VOTE for CrateMan

I would add some texture, like old canvas.

Please, if u don't mind, score and comment my submission, I'll realy appreciate it!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/291015/5th_Element?streetteam=Supereli

Thanks!!

A lot of detail going on here and that's nice but i don't like the way it cuts off with a frame. Can't you bleed it around the whole T instead?

Oh, I'd really appreciate it if you could pop by to score Mr. Spock and tell me what you think about Light and Flight AND It's Peaceful Up Here. THanks!

Good to see it on a shirt. I think you need to work on the colors a bit. The poster art looks very low contrast, but you have on a dark color, which does not work well.

Yeah... Try to use some analogue colors on the most, and maybe just one detail on complementar color.
Helps if you choose another color for the shirt, also

really nice!=)
it evolved a lot, well done :) my suggestions would be to try to remove the frame, put yellow too inside the letters, and try maybe this tshirt on black...but thats really cool :)
if you have time feel free to help and comment on my 10yth version :)http://www.threadless.com/critique/73094/The_Wish_Tree

Thanks to all for the advice!

Only a thing: a lot of you speak about the "frame". But, what is the "frame"?! (sorry, i'm italian and i dont understand all words :)

They mean it looks like a square. To fix that, you could stretch it to the edges of the shirt. I think it looks great if you do that.

Like this version? The main character name, and the Zomb Award i will put on the retro of the t-shirt

wow, big improvement, shirt color and the two characters looks much better now! maybe you can fix the red spots in the white text

would be great if you can rate & comment my submission parrots of the carribean :)

looks much better bub!:)

Thanks, tomorrow i will be the definitive (i hope) version!

I like it. :)

New version of "Gone with the Zomb": changing the color behind in all the poster. Like it? It remain to redifine some little particulars, but i think this will be the final version

Great illustration i really like how you kept to the spirit of a movie poster. I think some of the colors chosen are a liitle to muted. Maybe just a tad more saturation. Besides that I would submit. just a thought.

Thanks Ozzy and Abatala!

Great illustration. I think it needs more contrast in the two characters in the foreground.

Great, good for sub.
But first do a mock up?
Goodluck

Yeah, sub it dude! Really like a classic tee!

The placement

This has come along really well - great work!

i thing this is oké. maybe it's need a few little touch on color harmony.

Please help me about my design:
Heart of Dog's Master

thanks to all!

Gone with the Zomb is up for scoring here:
Gone with the Dead !

VOTE! VOTE! VOTE!

to many versions I see some room for improvements yet.. nice concept

if you have a minute plz help me out with my design
http://www.threadless.com/critique/98106/God_Bless_America

haahhahaah awesome, i think threadless wont have problem with the text on this one!!! Ill vote for it!

I have a shirt up for voting, would you mind checking it out? thanks!
http://www.threadless.com/submission/390879/A_Fair_fight

this is just freaking awesome ...love it ...submit it ...looks great..if u have time can score my design?

http://threadless.com/submission/390392/Dead_Tree