Any suggestions or thoughts would be appreciated. Thanks for looking.

Fun idea. I can't pin point what you need to do to improve it. Maybe you could try giving the fur some more texture like in the sunglasses. It also might help to see it on a t-shirt. Keep up the good work :)

yeah the fur looks a bit sparse. and the head is kinda shifted too far to the right (his left), maybe his stance should be repositioned so that the satchel hangs more to his side than to sort of an awkward semi-crotch dwelling position.

Interesting. yes the fur need work, and you could add some shadow. Also let us see some placement...

Plz check mine

This is a cool design, I like the simplicity of it! I think the little bag he's carrying could use a bit of shading; it looks a bit flat compared to the rest of the image. Very nice sense of humor in the design!

ha ha, this is great. I would add some fur, and there is something about the front left leg that seems off to me. maybe its just me?

anyways, this has tons of potential.

could you please check mine out also?

http://www.threadless.com/critique/72874/Only_in_Dreams

thanks people. It def needs a lot of work. Im not sure if its worth continuing or if I should scrap it.

great! definitely see hangover now

Pleas continue your great work!
I love it.and wait to see the tee template.
And please comment my critique.

It's a nice idea. The Hangover's a popular film so I think it's worth sticking with!

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great.... submit it
hope you could with mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/72957/What_Does_This_Button_Do

thanks!

Nice idea. I'd suggest something simple like a small pool of colour around the wolf pack, near the base maybe. Like a small section of the ground. I'll try and find an example of what I mean, but it could be a good way to make the design stand out without compromisng it.

Still a work in progress. Suggestions appreciated.

winnerrr! maybe just add a bit of distress to the shadow. but everything else is perfect

winnerrr! maybe just add a bit of distress to the shadow. but everything else is perfect

thanks... i think this needs a ton of work tho. not sure what I want to do with it.

I would personally distress the whole design a lil i think. The shadow looks a little strange to me..i think it would be better if it was more subtle and a bit smoother.

oh would you mind
http://www.threadless.com/critique/73084/Flanno_with_missing_button

I agree with the others, the shadow looks awkward and harsh- distress it a bit.
Will you please help me out and score my design?
http://www.threadless.com/submission/287181/create_a_rainbow/

should i have seen the hangover?

looks so much better. and the shadow definitely helps. Are you gonna add anything else hangover related?

much better in brown...nice job! =)

if you have a chance can you score my bunnies? Bunny Sex lemme know what you think =)

i like the illustration. do away with the shadow. Maybe some more Hangover references? like a shot of jager and a couple of pills on the floor next to him? Or the entire speech about his "wolfpack" written in the background might be a fun element to add.

check out: http://www.threadless.com/critique/73145/POLIS

and help me out if you get a chance. THANKS

i really like the illustration (the shadow needs more work)
i don't get the joke though...but i assume it's something which i am just not familiar with...

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my first thought was, where is the baby? hihi
cute idea

Dude! It'd be awsome if the baby was in the picture. Then it would bring to mind the symbol of Imperial Rome (baby and wolf), which would make no sense but it would make me laugh for some reason.

definitely make this some sort of hangover shirt i think.
if you reference the whole movie i think ull get more people finding something they like about it you know?
i liked the idea about the bottle of jager n pills.
definitely Carlos (the baby) n sunglasses
maybe the mattress or the mercedes?
soo much you could add.
tasers, cop car, hospital wristbands,
idk its all up 2 you haha but ide take this over the top w. thehangover references lol
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the only thing that bothers be is how angular that shadow it. try softening it up, especially since its the shadow of something fluffy.

if u have time can u help me out? http://www.threadless.com/submission/287853/portrait_of_a_princess

Don't add more Hangover stuff in there. The joke is good enough to stand on its own. Better sub this now while pop culture subs are still printing like crazy.

you should put da baby that would make it funnier