Dear all, I need your comments about this graphic and the concept.rnrnLet me know how you feel and any suggestions?

what happened to the green?!

Yeah, The finalist still are green, blue, purple and black.
You can see the above Tee templates from my blog.
I wonder if this is details enough and so fine for the sub.

Yeah, The finalist still are green, blue, purple and black.
You can see the above Tee templates from my blog.
I wonder if this is details enough and so fine for the sub.

I like the colours here best. I'd say it's ready- nice job :)

the cake still doesn't look really yummy..

critique mine?
its updated!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/71940/Mirage

Cake? I thought it was cheese? Isn't the moon made of cheese?

yes, the moon is made of cheese.
By the way you can see the latest Tee at my blog.

Dear all,
Thanks for your previous comments.
Now I have changed the grass into dark green and the shadow of shining blue.

I think it is 5 colours.
Did anybody count it more than that?

hmm, I was wondering--would it be more catchy without the tree? also reduces the colours ;-) it will make a great tee!

Thanks, dude!

This is the green Tee template for more comments.

yeah, try it without the tree, cause if its there people might ask y hes not eating it instead of the moon. its cute tho!

Heeeee, you are so tricky, dude!
But that is a good question, thanks!!!

Well I think the tree should stay cause then, Mr. Giraffe is stepping on the tree he's supposed to eat and eating the cheesy moon instead, which he's not supposed to do. This is getting cuter and cuter everytime I see it. You should submit already oy!

I could use some help with scoring this and critique for this. Thanks for your help!

Thanks, dude! I saw you are always visiting and commenting.
But I like to listen people's thinking.
That is the way I create and improve the idea.
Sure, I will help you!!

So, this is the most wanted blue Tee template for you all to see.
Any comments??

This is great. I love the illustration.
(but I love Giraffes)

BTW BTW Thank you for the critique on mine

Oh thanks a lot!
I am now not sure the colors in graphic, 5 or 7 colors?
Can it sub?

I think you're good to go mate, looks great!

yeah don't worry about the colours you're safe

Thanks senior! But do I need to redesign the background for really sub?
The larger graphic details for responds?
Need comments.

Bump for comments.

Too cute!

Thanks, Loriele!
But I think it is to feminem, isn't it?

Both blue and green are nice - submit it!

Hahaha, You mean that Green Tee for Boy and the blue Tee for gals, right?

Opss, I think I shoud change the shadow on the ground like grasses shape, that's better, I think.

So this is the ground that change into grasses shape.
Do you like this one or the previous version.
Need your comments.

Bump for Advices.

Any comments for this sub?

Nice on dark Blue Shirt, looks like Night.
critique mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/72007/Dagger_In_Heart

nice thought!
Maybe work with the tree and the leafs.
Critique mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/72000/Some_things_are_bigger_than_others

Ok, later I will put the final graphic.

Yeah, This should be my final design!
I am ready to go to sub!!

oh, I have deleted the spots on The Moon so it looks really yummy cheese!
Who want to eat ?

Bump for advice.

i think the moon should have a little bit of texture, like some small irregular spots similar to the giraffe's perhaps. the moon spots in v5 were too round or too big.

Yes.
I am thinking what texture on the Moon, thanks!

this is sooooo cool! hahaha, love it and would buy it for my nephew. I think, as said, that mooon should have a texture, also could be way smaller, (test on a tee mock up to see how it looks).

Good luck, i love this! :)

Thanks, ya. The Tee mock up you can go to see at my blog.
And any senior who can help me find the best texture??

Everything looks very good, i think.
Regarding texture, I think you werent far off with the spots originally on moon...just maybe a bit too many and placed too symmetrical. I think just a subtle spot/crater-like texture that mimicks the giraffes spots slightly. It will read as moon craters, swiss cheese holes and at the same time tie the 2 elements together (giraffe and moon). But not too many. Maybe 3 to 5 max with small medium and large (not huge but relative large compared to the othr spots) spots. You could also go in and put a slight crescent shape tone in those to make it even more crater like and see what that looks like and if it works. Just suggestions that may or may not improve it but may be worth a try.
Really though it looks pretty much complete and ready to go. Just a matter of tastes now. Also the purple is probably my favorite color T as well probably because its complimentary color to yellows.
I think

Oh, great, Man!
So details and concern! Thanks.
And I will try to do this so please wait for the up!

I am not sure that spots on the Moon will make it tasty as cheese.

Bump for your votes.
And thanks to your helping this to sub.

I like the spots on the moon, the whole t-shirt is cool, the only thing I am not sure about are the crumbs falling from his mouth? I think the smile on his face and the bite marks in the tasty cheesy moon say it all without that and the crumbs are clashing with his spot colouring?? just a thought?

Hooooo, what a great imagination!
I haven't think of that reason or story.
Thanks, dude.
You make me thinking again.

yea u'd be better off without the crumbs:)

critique mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/71940/Mirage

its updated!:)

ummmm, confusing?

Bump again.

Ok! This is the final Tee template for sub.
Can you see the graphic details?
Is this great to up for voting???

wow, you have done so much work on this! good job!
XD
love the tee colour choice too!
the presentation doesn't really work for it to well.... i think it ruins your beautiful illustration by cutting it in half!
:(

Yup, dude!
I want do the best I can depands on your comments.

OK, this is the presentation template for Sub.
Do you feel this is great or you just love to see a few Tee shirts templates?

share your comments about this, please.

Im not sure i like the split design, but have no suggestions for you other than to maybe use a flash template to flick between placement and design. I like it on the blue tee more.

cute design.i dont kno about the split design.u could put the design in the background and then have a t template in the corner

http://www.threadless.com/critique/71965/Rain_Drops_Keep_Fallin_on_My_Head

Great thanks to both of you!
The simple is the best, hahaah!

I think you do need to use the flash temp instead of the split design.
the illustration looks great!
Please score my design: Bearminator

Thanks, dude!
But I can't able to open the flash template by now, I have been try this few days ago.
The problem am failed to download the Adobe flash player v?
Who can help??

Please give any tips?

Dear all,
How to open the file of Philip, Manos?
After I unziped the file, I can't open the file at all.
And I also failed to download the Adobe flash player 10.1 from the download.com, why??
Any other ways?
My sub of The Delicious Moon Cheese can't go for Sub untill I work with this flash presentation, so sad!

Bump for comments.

I love the image - definately best on blue. I think the split screen doesnt help it tho. id have the image large with a template in the corner.

OK. I will try on that.
Thanks, dude!

Yahooooo!
This is the final template to sub!
Doesn't The Moon looks tasty?

I dont think the moon is good!The moon looks so sad!The radian is a little big,I feel！But I like the colors！
critique mine：
http://www.threadless.com/submission/285778/Game_ing
http://www.threadless.com/critique/72115/Love_U_65292_no_reason

The Moon should be sad though its tasty.

submit this already! lol

I love this. It's adorable. I love how geometric it is.
I am totally new at this, so I feel sort of embarrassed asking, but could you take a look at my design? It's my first design on its second draft.
Thanks!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/72098/Breakfast_to_Go

Thanks, just to hear more comments from dear Threadless fans!

oh cool, this is getting great

ty for the comment on my

TSUNAMISET,
maybe I think of a better sub presentation.

Thanks to all, I sub the design already!
Please check my blog and designs page for update.

hahaha i like it submit

hahaha i like it submit

Really submited, dude!
Thanksssss!

Looks great, I like how it turned out, give us a link when its up!



If you have time could you critique some of my designs? Thanks!

http://www.threadless.com/critique/68234/Flash_Vs_Iphone

and

http://www.threadless.com/critique/48166/Sounds_like_music

Thanks, Please remind me, hahahha!

Bump for sharing.

Why is the giraffe eating cheese? I think that you should have a mouse on top of the giraffe's head eating the moon. But it is very cute either way.
Would you mind critiquing mine please: http://www.threadless.com/critique/72230/Loading_Please_wait_for_response

hahahahha, so great your idea!
But I thought the giraffe so bored to eat the leaves do she eat the Moon as cheese.

Bump for fun!

Bump for fun!

And as the sun sets on the last day of voting on this, a new day dawns on Under the Kilt and I'd be ever so grateful for your support and score. Thanks!! I appreciate all your comments and support Mrcoffeebean. Thanks for visiting.

You are welcomed! I love you, Mr Cat!!

lol, it is very cute. i love it. not sure if the moon could do with some extra brightness, but it looks great :)
PS if you have the time, please help me out and critique this
http://www.threadless.com/critique/72225/the_head_in_the_sky
thanks

i think u shud submit it, looks great :)

if u have the chance,critique mine steafancollins

Oh, Yes! The design is submited already!

i like. submit. please check mine it's honey sweet honey. thanks

Do you like cheese Tee?
Now this character Funny Tee shirt design is up for scoring,
please vote me here.

Do you like cheese Tee?
Now this character Funny Tee shirt design is up for scoring,
please vote me here.

Vote my design, please!

voted:) very cool!
Please score my design: Bearminator

I love you and voted you, dude!!

Vote this design for the last 5 days!!

bump for sharing.

Vote this sub for last 4 days!

Vote this sub for last 4 days!

Yeah, great comments from threadless fans.
Vote this sub maybe I could have an agreement with Threadless to illustrate a childrent book. Hahahaahah!

Look great!
http://www.threadless.com/critique/72456/Scardy_GhostsScardy Ghosts

very cute! take a look at mine here (:

Thanks!
Please vote me, too!

:) Just popping in to say hi and to ask for help. I've got a new critique up that could use some constructive criticism. Help?

With the Wind

Just voted!

awesome submit this!

please critique mine:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/72499/Rockstar_Cowboy_Guy

Thanks your comment. Voted you back.

I need help with my design!

SUBMIT THIS! Please...

Thanks.

Please vote my sub for last 3 days!

ha ha nice. going to vote

Please help me out and critique

Yes, Its done and thanks for your vote.

Nice one, I like the idea and execution!!!!

check mine here plz

Yes, I ve done!

Bump for vote.

Bump again!

BUMP!! fun!!!

Hahahhah, Bump for vote my Sub.

so cute!! its already, you have to submit

good luck and thanks for the recomendation ;)

Yeah, I ve submited.
Thanks!!

2 reasons i am reposting on your work. 1... submit this already :))) and second...
http://media.threadless.com/critique/72225/the_head_in_the_sky

Dear uberaffe, thanks for your work!!
I just comment on yours.Please vote me.

Bump for vote.

Vote me please.

Today is the last day for this Sub.

Submit it! Really cute! Also giraffes win! :)

LOL you did... oopsies.

Hahahha, thankss a lot.
This sub already ended its score.
2.6 not bad for me, sad.

This is really cool!

Thankss baileybat,
unfortunately it is end the score : 2.6, may not be printed.

Thankss baileybat,
unfortunately it is end the score : 2.6, may not be printed.

Thankss baileybat,
unfortunately it is end the score : 2.6, may not be printed.

Bump.

Bump.

this is adorable.

uber cute =)
when you have a chance score mine and lemme know what you think Bunny Sex

Sure!

nice idea, very nice colors, good layout, but i think the level of details is inconsistent. the upper area is very clear, but the ground is a bit overcharged

arrr, already submitted. sorry. first read, then write...

Oh, thanks dude!

Very interesting work. To me more like this green shirt.

Thanks, mate. I love your comment.

cute design..try to use more matching colors

Oh, yes!! Thanksssss!

Dear Tunderous, thanks again!!

interesting ide, but i like green t-shirt

Yeah, thanks!! but this ready subbed and get a great score!

Yeah, how did this do?

I'd appreciate your critiue on Light and Flight and your score on Mr. Spork. Thanks!!!!

Dear, I just voted you and thanks!
Pls comment on my latest design in Critique.

super cute! nice concept!

Thanks, dear. its over and not printed. so sad!
And this my new sub: Sunbathing, please vote.

good color combination i like it

vote for my tee

This is a really cute designs. My only criticism is that the drawing style on the moon is different from everything else (it has more definition and such). I think if you refine the rest to match, you might have a winner here! XD

(Please help and score my design: Jonah?

Thanks a lots! This sub is finished.

WOWOWOWOW!!! Good Idea!!!

If you like, tell me what do you think of my work: HEARTBIT

thanks! but this is already subed, and not getting printed, so sad!

Yay! I am so excited that my Print "The Delicious Moon Cheese" has been selected to be included in the Society6 Shop.

Here the link:The Delicious Moon Cheese

And see my other designs at my store:http://www.society6.com/studio/doodlewall

CONGRATS! :D

critique on mine? :D
Panda!

Thanks! And just commented your design.

Bump. My "The Escape" also up for sale.

BUMP.

good job on this!

My design is now up for scoring, please vote: Shades of Life

So nice! I'd wear it! :)

Please, give me your suggestions:
http://www.threadless.com/critique/90439/Mummy_love#v4