i thought, what if a writer tried to update frankenstein's monster like they did vampires with the twilight series? Here are my results.

woow nice illustration.. like it...


would be cool if you check mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/71528/nuts thx ;)

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This is really cool, submit it as it is!
If you have the time, please rate and comment my submission: Alone on a Bicycle for Two

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Yeah dark and moody and a bit emo. Nice subtle colours too. I think that works really well on the tee.

My first sub is up for scoring please vote and comment! Organised Confusion

sweet!!

i thought, what if a writer tried to update frankenstein's monster like they did vampires with the twilight series? Here are my results.

On this version, I fixed up the bolt positioning and fixed up a hair issue missing from the last version.

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EMO Frankenstein... How funny...

Being a Vampire and a Lycan used to me so cool; until the way the were portrayed as emo in Twilite. I just don't know anymore...

I like the emo frankenstein concept, the hair just looks so natural on him. I would however take this concept even further. The Twilight vampires and werewolves are all young and pretty so shouldn't Frankie be too?

Good suggestion, though I don't want the skin tone and bolts to be the only clues to the subject

I'd date him... But that's just me...

I'd appreciate your help for this and this AND it's the final day of voting for this! Thanks!!

This is perfect as it is. sub it.

I like it!!! Submit!

Please rate my submission:

its great :D you shouls submit i dont think i can tell you something usefull its finished for me..

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http://www.threadless.com/submission/283409/CHIRULOS

Nice! You could always pierce him a bit (helps to convey the "updated, modern" concept!) Love it!

A lip piercing could be one thing. And a lone tear rolling down his cheek. And you could always print him with glitter ink for the Twilight fans. No, just kidding with that last one.

WAIT!!! DON'T SUB YET!!!:)
ok, now that i have your attantion lol, i think it's almost perfect! the only thing the bugs me is his forehead vain...either lose it or fix it:)
after that, i permit you to sub this;)

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Now with added emo-ness. Lip ring and a low gauge ear plug.

Please let me know if you think these additions are too much, or if it works well with the design.

And morkki, gliter ink joke aside, it would be nice to use silver ink for the lip ring, ear plug and neck bolts

*glitter

I think they work. The bolt ear plug is really funny and I like that it's partially hidden behind the hair so you don't notice it immediately.

I liked your tear idea as well, but I couldn't add it without increasing the color count :/

It could be a black tear. You know, if his eyeliner's running :)

Take away the vein on the forehead and you are done.

this is nice idea and design! I have no any suggestions because it looks really good like this!

please score and comment on my design, if you have time:

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The vein/crack in his head reminds me of Harry Potter. I agree with EvaB.

Critique mine? http://www.threadless.com/critique/70836/Woman_Tree

Thanks for all the help and suggestions folks, I submitted this last night, so it should be up soon.

very nice:) post a link when it's up:)
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