In the beginning there were eggs, lots of them. They came down, hatched and little glowing men came out!

www.threadless.com/critique/71431/In_the_beginning

Testing again, I'm totally newb with html

i like the photoshop effect you've got going there....i would suggest finding another way to place this instead of the square frame..maybe fade it into the shirt

Please help me out with my submission and vote on my design: Killer B

In the beginning there were eggs and glowing men.

This second version has an improved layout..

nice effects, but the edges are a bit harsh... perhaps blend it into the background?

if you get a chance could you comment on mine? Darth Bear

Try to blur a little the gray part at the top. I like the style... its so trippie...
If you have any spare time, Please rate my design :)

its great try to play with the possitioning of this.

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http://www.threadless.com/submission/283409/CHIRULOS

Thanks for the critiques guys, will submit a new version soon!

i don't like that the men look like wooden artist models. they seem too stiff and artificial. cool concept and neat colors though

If this is in the beginning stages then I guess I'll wait before I critique it. Outside of that, the layout shows promise and the title sounds intriguing.

Would you mind rating and leaving a comment on my design? A Quiet Spot , Thank You.

this is so cool. cant wait for the next v

Help me out and Please Score and Comment: Peas in a Pod

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@ Bio-bot you are exactly right.. they are actually little wooden artist models that I jazzed up in photoshop (I wanted to pass them off as robots, obviously I haven't been successful haha)

Thanks for the comments guys, will go back to the drawing board and play around with it. New versions by Friday next week.