Sorry for re posting this critique. I deleted by accident thinking I was only deleting a previous verion. Anyway I am posting the original and another version. Let me know which you like better. Also if you can weigh in on this it would help alot. Mustache brown or keep it the color of the shirt? Wood texture on the stage or no? Is the body in version 2 an improvement? Thanks in advance for your input.

Heres the second version. Stache is brown. Shoulders rounded, Banners more detailed, hair on stomache, wood texture on stage. "Intro" and "Musclestache" lettering changed (see detail)

Hahaha this is so great. Kind of creepy, but it is very unique!

Hah! I want to grow one.

Very nice, great colours and textures.

Just bumping this so people who have seen it already can help me decide which is better v1 or v2. Thanks

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v2

Do you guys like the texture in the wood? and the more detailed

"intro" and "mstache" banners? Also which is better, rounded shoulders or not? More hair on the body (v2) or not. Colored Musclestache or not? I need a majority vote, thanks!

If you took out the lower chest hair in vol 2 i would choose 2. So like all those things you asked about. Just take out the lower chest hair.

Cool , thanks for the feedback Kalien

love it. i think the colors are tight. i think the build on the guy is just right, love the wood grain, not sure i'd change a thing.

Just bumping because I want to get opinions from people who have already seen it to get a majority vote. Thanks.

I think we should see a little bit of nipple under the clothing

I love this more than I expected to. The texture is nice, and the little changes from v1 to v2 are nice. I think it's a good concept, well executed, ready to sub!

might just b me but looks a bit weird that thers no mouth under the tash

This kicks arse. The wood texture is good.



But where is his mouth?

Ahhh. his mouth, good point. I guess to me it was just implied. Now that you guys mention it I might have to do something about that.

thanks

I really hope it doesn't change the design too much. I'm just a stickler for things like that. It like detail, and moustaches are funnier than beards. :)

Manly! Manly! Manly! I want this MANLY SHIRT!!

I think there could also be a problem with the nipple placement?

v.2!!!

I added a mouth and closed the gap between the stache so it would cover the top lip. I also

changed the nipple placement. Any improvement?

this is seriously awesome...submit already :)

Sorry about the exteneded critique. I submitted my first design too soon , and everyone hated the placement of the shirt. This time I want to make sure I get a concensus before I submit. I would have submitted already but someone mentioned there was no mouth. I didn't see it before, but after he said it I took another look and I made this version. So now I want to know if I should go mouth or no mouth.

this version is good enough! Submit!

yeah, the mouth looks good :)

Awesome. I was worried the mouth would change it too much, but this is subtle enough that you don't even notice - in a good way. Well done.

Looks ready, go for it!

I love this design, looks very cool. SUMBIT!

love it!

ahahah excellent! great execution, pure fun...you can sub it ;-)