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Maybe make the little red guys mouth a little clearer as it took a few seconds for my brain to see it as a mouth rather than a nose. Love this idea though, works well.
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The cut in the low part of the scientific is too strong, maybe a gradation to black...
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So cut it very clean where it is suposed to be overlayed by the table, this way it just seems to be pasted over the black...
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I like that title. It's looking really good. I like the addition of the speech bubble. Sub!
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mmm the black outline seem kinda off.... but i dont know what to say, its a funny (and cute) idea :3
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d'awwwwwwwww, CUTE!
Im not sure about the hihihi repeat though. If you have some time, please help me out with my critique: http://www.threadless.com/critique/73857/Pug_Life |
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maybe se hehehe cus that sounds more like someone being tickled.. it just like its say hi a bunch of times. and maybe blur those black outlines of the lab stuff.. besides that id say its perfect :D
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love it!!!!!!!
there's just something i don't like about the beker and the other lab tools....can't u use pictures of them and work them like u did on the man? i think that how they are now, they are more graphically related to the little cute crature, but they should be more part of the scientist world... dunno if i was able to explain my point of view, sorry 4 my english let me know when this will be ready 4 scoring (ps i like the baloon, keep it) I'm Alost There |
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Hahahaha! This is beautiful! Extremely cute! Sub it right away!
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