I will be adding more detail to the wolf. What else should I work on?

girl! you are a mean lean designing machine!!! This is fantastic!

Looking forward to seeing the final version :)

hey thanks. Nikolina I always love your comments.

I like this! But I would go with a darker fabric - the white is too bright

The white is just for placement. I plan on submitting on brown.

I have been trying for years to come up with a red ridding hood design that I liked. I think this may be it. : )

any ideas? Anyone?

I don't know why the wolfs eyes kind of freak me out a little bit O.o but i like the overall design alot and the style isn't something I would usualy got for but it fits really well in this case! I like the shirt on the darker colors because it adds to the atmosphear.

Oops i missed the white/brown comment on your other submission sorry ! :)

highlights added

throw me a bone people!!! :)

I think there are too many highlights on the wolf. I like them I just don't think you need as many. Everything else looks pretty good :)

thanks will revise again

i agree with the darker shirt. i happen to like this on a dark shirt such as the one presented with the design.



it's difficult to tell what's going on with the story here. since i can read the title, i'm assuming she's going to throw the apple and make a dash for it, but the design doesn't convey that especially well (if that's what you are going for)

its a ball. I guess I need to make it look more like a ball.

i am not sure how i can convey that. I will think on it.

This is my last change I think, I added a leash and placd the ball in the dogs mouth. Ball is now pink. Hope its readable as a ball now. Please add more comments if you think I should change anything.

for some reason this loaded all spotty. You can see it better here.



http://www.flickr.com/photos/kalien68/1268384245/

submitted this

it came out brilliant :)

its awesome, check mine out

thanks guys. its good to hear something nice.

If anyone wants to view this in brighter colorsits here.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/kalien68/1276735324/