This is my first submission. I hope everyone likes it!

It looks great to me! I like the sort of worn out style of it.

The only thing is you might want to make the 'farting' aspect of it more easily recognized, I'm not sure I would've gotten it quickly without the title. Though honestly I'm not certain how you would do that...

Good design so far though :D

It'd be much appreciated if you could critique my design as well

Thanks for the feedback!!

soggywaffls is right. Maybe you should make the fart bubbles larger. Also i think the brain would look better in a jar (a pickle jar for instance), this looks like something to hold sugar in. Other than that its an excellent idea!

Comment mine if you have time:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/71132/LOVE_AT_FIRST_SPLAT

http://www.threadless.com/critique/71124/TIME_MACHINE

http://www.threadless.com/critique/69960/FACEBOOK

I really love the idea, just kinda hard to get at the moment. Not sure if the face on the brain is even necessary! Yeah, make sure the bubbles are noticeable and not just "added-in-bubbles-for-sake-of-details" bubbles! Beautifully, done!

You did your homework, this design is great....concept, colours, character, specialy love his expresion made with three simple lines...., presentation level....generaly you did a great job here, it looks like you're an old member on this site. Sub this and keep up the good work! Ciao! :)

I love the face. Please keep it. Please critique mine? It's also a brain-based pun:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/71263/Brain_Storm

You did your homework, this design is high....construct, emblem, dimension, specialy screw his expresion made with tierce sagittiform lines...., representation stratum....generaly you did a enthusiastic job here, it looks equal you're an old member on this position. Sub this and save up the benevolent production! Acknowledgement! :)
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lol, nice idea:)
i think the face is redundent...
i say lose the face...the joke can go through just fine.

Please help me out and rate my design: Killer B

great design!
i realy like the placement.
perfect.

thank for critique.

hahaha... i do think you need to keep the face, also to emphasize that the bubbles are coming from its back. or try to make a face out of the brain tissue... that would be awesome if you could do that... wow!

my submission could use some happy cheers:
ever seen a crocodile Riding Ralphs Horse?
it's up for voting ;-)

I think the face needs a bit of work... but very nice silly idea.

Thanks for the great feedback!! I am gonna work on the face a bit more and try a second version!

Changed up the face a bit more. I am pretty excited about all the feedback! Thanks everybody!

Changed it up from the last feedback. Hope it is an improvement!

I think I would like it better without the face, but it's subtle enough that I can't complain. It looks like the water extends above the edge of the container into the lid.

Critique mine? http://www.threadless.com/critique/70836/Woman_Tree

i agree about the water.
i could bu wrong bu the bubbles behind it shouldnt be in front of his "nose"?!

if you dont mind check my design?!

didn't know it was brain fart unless i read the title. v1 face worked better as a fart face haha

cool design though!

funny
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Mhhmm... I laughed a lot when I saw the title... bbut I was having a hard time getting it before.
If you have the time, Please Score my submission