I was just about to submit ... and thought I'd critique first.
What are your thoughts???

it's a nice idea.
i think the back needs more work, make it so we can see it's the rest of his body...

Please help me out and rate my design: Killer B

I'm agree with I. I din't get what it is, sorry. I would do fur and colour it ;)

Vote for It's not what you think, please =)

What about cream/bone ink on brown shirt? I like the blue, but not the yellow... yellow shirts don't sell so well...

Why do I have such a thing for brown shirts?

No... brown ink on sand shirt... or sand-coloured ink on brown...

I like how the back is a little obscure... makes the person following you think "what is on that shirt?" But maybe it would look better if the dog had a solid colour. That might make the back a little more obvious...

I like this shirt.

It's cool.

I like it on blue and the mint green...cream on a brown shirt would work, too :)...I like the design as it is...it's versatile enough to go on any colour as is. I personally don't think it needs solid colour....that's my preference, though.

Really like the art style and the contrast on the color choices. It definitely looks different without color, I like it.

Check mine out- The Gold Jacket

where do you get the template thing so you can have multiple pages and that pop up box at the bottom?

cute design
Ive seen one like it but yours is better. i likeit on yellow


Hey, if you have time can you help me out with some feedback:


http://www.threadless.com/critique/70767/2_Peas_in_a_Pod

http://www.threadless.com/critique/70892/Chalkboard

http://www.threadless.com/critique/70951/P_B_and_Jacket

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it's nice idea. submit it!!

if you have time please comment http://www.threadless.com/critique/71044/duaskull

I followed some good advice. What do you think now?

Should I add a slight texture to the colouring of the dog?

i think on the back of the shirt, you should make it a little more rounded, kind of like the shape of a U...just not as rounded as a U haha. just make it a little curved. rather than that i love it!

I like that idea, emo bear :)

lol thats quite funny, looks good on the tee colour also

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http://www.threadless.com/critique/71174/Mic_Up

Hmm... now I'm not so sure about the idea of making the back more rounded. I think I like it as it is - a stripe across the back.

Very clever!! And/or awesome. I like the browns.. but I somehow think that the dog should be angry instead, as if he hasn't realized that it's his own tail yet.

Good Job!

Crit mine?
http://www.threadless.com/critique/71107/prAwnstars

Mads

Clever design...solid colour works...I like it :)

looks much better! i agree with the u suggestion.
also, i am not sure i understand what is that stain...can you explain please?

Please help me out and rate my design: Killer B

It's just meant to be a spot ... maybe it's not coming across as I thought?

I really like this tee. I guess I'm just confused on what that strange textured spot is. I would either get rid of it, try a more solid color, or add more to avoid confusion. Otherwise great design. Good Luck!

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After careful consideration, I think I will remove the spot. I think it needs something there - so I think I'll try adding a little bit of fur-like texture in one or two places.

:D

don't go too far with the fur texture on the back, and maybe hint the same texture on the front to carry the idea through. I like the simplicty of the design so don't go too far.

very cool, even if you just lost the spot you could submit it.

thanks for suggestions on mine :)

i always love these wrap arounds... but i agree that the body could use some more furry-look. and i don;t know what that spot is, but people suggest to get rid of it... so do i... i don't think you need it, when the dog got a lot more fur.

my submission could use some happy cheers:
ever seen a crocodile Riding Ralphs Horse?
it's up for voting ;-)

I've got some alternate colour schemes, too. I'll post them soon...

OK, I think I've made all the improvements I needed to. What do you think?

It's a great idea... I like this version!

Please rate my submission:

This is really cute.. I can see them in a set of baby blue and baby pink for a girl. I'd buy this for my little cousin if it gets printed.

If you would like to, please check out mine:
In the beginning

...doggone...I think you've got it! :D

Definitely done, those changes have made all the difference, love the fur!
Submit

if you get a chance could you comment on mine? Darth Bear

I like how simple it is. T\You sould submit it!
I like the color of the one on the top better

If you have any spare time, Please rate my design :)

agreed with the color on the top is great submit!

VOTE FOR MINE PLEASEE! VOTA POR MI DISEŅO PORFAA!

http://www.threadless.com/submission/283409/CHIRULOS

Thanks.

Think I should submit?

Ha this is cute, I prefer the sandy colour tee with the artwork in blue. sub it


My first sub is up for scoring! Organised Confusion

I think you should submit :)

id sub it - i love the sandy coloured one too

good luck

if you have time please comment on mine:

Pac-Words

When pigs fly

id sub it - i love the sandy coloured one too

good luck

if you have time please comment on mine:

Pac-Words

When pigs fly

nice idea.. like it, but maybe more details in the face..

would be cool if you check mine http://www.threadless.com/critique/71528/nuts thx ;)