here is my first version. comments and suggestions are more than welcome!

ah okay, honey+bamboo, honboo.
well id start working on the panda, dont know why but he reminds me of some drug addict, fat dude begging for change.
The hind legs should be way shorter, you could put some white fur over them, try giving him a smile, and see if that would make the tongue sticking out look any better.
all the best. =)

OMG, you made me laugh! Thanks for the comment!

This is a cool idea! I like the concept a lot. I have to agree with Azmarayzan though, the panda especially is looking a little ragged. Maybe beef him/her up a bit and some eyes! Haha, it's bear fondu!

Please take a look at mine if you have time. It's in the running! Thanks!
http://www.threadless.com/submission/280484/Turtle_Time

Thanks for the feedback on mine.

I think they both look a little ragged actually and if you made the honey pot look a little more like a broken down garbage barrel they could look like "Bear Bums" getting their fix if you wanted to play up that look. Otherwise clean up both of their fur and perhaps give the panda some eyes, I think that's something that's giving him that drugged out look.

fix the mouth of the panda

Could you please give me some feedback on my design.
Im not trying to spam i just want some help
http://www.threadless.com/critique/70631/Tribute_to_3D

Thanks so much

Also this one is up for scoring
http://www.threadless.com/submission/280481/Egg_love_its_mom

the honey is looking quite jagged

no shadows, or else just draw them, no blur. (those ones look terrible but I know you can make great ones)

to the left of the pandas mouth it is all black, which looks weird and makes his mouth look giant.

i think you need a better name. Here are some:

Sharing Idea's
Bear Collab
Work Together
Trying New Things

finally, improve the edges, The bears arm that is holding out a honboo has very bad edges.

The bear looks pretty good (besides the edges) but the panda looks kinda unproportioned. Try making his head longer, but not wider (only a little bit.)

This is a great idea and has MUCHO potential!

critique mine? ^-^
http://www.threadless.com/critique/70610/Wild_Thing

Thanks for critiquing on mine but i have a question about what you said. Did you mean a pattern out of the glasses all over or add an additional pattern?

Thanks

What abou tthem sitting at a Japanese style table eating the Honboo. Also, refine their looks. Great concept too. ^^

Also, if you can help with mine, it would be awesome! ^^

the western bear and asian panda sharing their culture!!

what if you gave the bear a red shirt like winnie-the-pooh? it might help hint better at the concept.... but i still got it :D

and yeah... i think pandas are chubbier.

Octi said:
What abou tthem sitting at a Japanese style table eating the Honboo. Also, refine their looks. Great concept too. ^^

I was thinking the same thing only have them kneeling on a low Japanese table. Insane concept BTW. You must've been on a honey high when designing this no?

here is the same idea but a lot different style... please, leave comments, suggestions and thank you a lot!

it looks very ragged still. i like the idea but the bear on the right needs to look a bit more pro

Could you give me some feedback if its not too much to ask.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/70767/2_Peas_in_a_Pod

how about do the same way they are sitting and use the style from the first one

i like this second version much , feels whimsical :)

I loved the sketchy style of this one, I think if you could clean it up a tiny bit, it would be awesome!

if you have the time :) let me hear your mind :) http://www.threadless.com/critique/70807/BoomTree

this is defintly better then version 1!
i'd like to see more colors though
Killer B

A lot better than the first. I like the Winnie the Pooh style on the bear and honeypot. Perhaps you could clean up the lines of the fur a bit to make it more graphic.

Please comment on my latest design:
"Pick Me"

i like this version better. it works pretty well, like an old fashioned ink drawing. great work!

I changed colors a lil bit- I just put accent on bamboo and honey, let me know what do you think.

The red is way too bright. I liked it better when the bears had color. If the bears had color, I'd say the red would be fine. It's clever. I would also think about maybe a deeper green on the bamboo.

Critique mine? http://www.threadless.com/critique/70836/Woman_Tree

OMG THIS IS SO AMAZINGLY GOOD
AHH
THIS IS JUST.... SOOOOOOOOOOOOO IMPROVED!

agreed. red is not good. Try cream or a light blue! yes, also deeper green, but not too dark.

Thinking about any of my names? ;)

you don't need to change any of the linework or anything just coloring
this is already so amazing
once it is all good and you submit i will give you a $7.

I like black-white, but the tee color not to good, its too strong, maybe cream, arena, or babyblue

good luck


Please score my desing :)

Red is overpowering. The new style is way better, though.

Try a tan, brown, or (dark) grey shirt shirt

the thing is that I need a color that's in nice contrast with the green bamboo and the yellow honey.... red was perfect for that... but, yea, it looks revolutionary aggressive! I will upload new version soon! thank you guys!

Tone it down way much. try a nice blue

It would be great if you would give me some feedback

http://www.threadless.com/critique/70767/2_Peas_in_a_Pod

yep. color. just like everyone else has already said. haha

like the idea tho :)

hi!
please don't put links in other people's submissions up for scoring, it's disrespectful to their work.
here is a blog with some helpful tips on how to promote your design

please, let me know what do you think about this version!

These colors are much better. I like this version best.

Thanks for your comment on mine.

I really don't know what you could improve on this. I think it's great.

thank you.

aw this is cute! You've come a long way with this design! These are the best colors that you have chosen so far. The only tiny suggestion I can make is to add a bit more of the green and yellow to the design. Maybe make some of the honey be dripping out of the pot? And maybe make some more bamboo sticks or grass scattered around the bears (that will add more of the green to the image and provide more of a setting for the bears). Or what if there are bamboo stalks behind the bears with a couple of bees flying around? Just a couple of ideas. Good luck!
Thank you so much for your comment on my submitted design!

great suggestions! thank you!

Very cute!! I like it on the cream colored tee

haha I like it. I think it should be on a cream or white tee.

Check out my design. It's up for one more day! Thanks.

This version is great, really! I would submit :) Good luck!

looks good. submit it.

Would love to know what you think of these two...
http://www.threadless.com/profile/1293145/pencil_duck/critiques

much better than you 1st version. like the sketchy style. placement on the chest i presume?

i like! this is awesomeeeeee! i think you need to make the hon-boo look better with the purple, change it to a deeper green.

this is so sweet!
i'd buy this for a future girlfriend:)
Please help me out and rate my design: Killer B

cute:)

Good skill. More idea? Printed Designs

dear everyone,
here is my final version, please let me know if you have any suggestions.
I added extra bamboo on the ground and I place the design on t-shirt. I am planing to submit this today, so let me know ASAP if you thing I should change something.
thank you all for great help!
And please, score my Cannibal Sushi! thanks!

Love it!

is it better with the bamboos on the ground or not?

That is really cute!

this is great, submit it!

check out my critique
http://www.threadless.com/critique/71144/A_Fox_in_the_Hen_House

wow, A-MAZING! i think the bamboos provide some type of ground... so it doesn't seem like they are floating around. this would make such an awesome shirt! i love it!! SUBMIT SUBMIT SUBMIT!

if you still haven't submitted it... maybe you can make the honey dripping from the the bamboo stick a little more round? the tip of it. other than that itx perfect!

Nice work!

My Gosh this is cool.

funny !!!

can give me some comment ? thx
http://www.threadless.com/critique/70364/Vampire_HotDog

this is great stuff submit!!!

Yes for bamboos on the ground.
Can the honey drip more... round on the bamboo and onto the pot etc ?

this is really cool stuff. i would show more honey tho. a bit more dripping on the jar or off the bamboo stick? but i see that other peope suggested that already as well...

thanks for your help with Zen Got Them Cornered
going to rework the stones, sure will look better
&
ever seen a crocodile Riding Ralphs Horse?
it's up for voting ;-)

i think its ready! make sure you post us a link to vote on later!


if you have time

wow...wow!
this is ready and perfect! i'd buy this for my girlfriend in a jiffy:)

Please help me out and rate my design: Killer B

Great style, and I love the colors! I'll go check out your sushi design now :)

And if you've got a sec, my design is on its last day of scoring. I'm trying to get to 1000 votes, so if you stopped by and scored I'd really appreciate it. Thank you!!!

Head in the Clouds

I think it's funny and adding a panda bear would make it exceptional.

If you get the time... http://www.threadless.com/critique/70991/The_Other_Side

Nice one..like the illo. How did you go from cannibal sushi to this..alot of improvement in the illustration. I wouldnt change anything.

if you could
http://www.threadless.com/critique/71164/The_Surgeon

Very funny stuff. I'm liking it a lot!

Please crit mine!

dear everyone,
I did really good improvements on this design thanks to you. All I had it was basic idea and you helped me a lot with your suggestions!
I will drip some honey around the bears and I will post that here, so, please check the next version! I hope that will be the last version and I'm going to submit it!
Thank you a lot, all of you!
I will check all your links you posted here, I will give you feedbacks, score your sweet designs and I will go to sleep!

That is an amazing transformation from the 1st to the last version! Well done, and good luck!

If you get time to critique me :)
http://www.threadless.com/critique/71174/Mic_Up

This is really nice! I like your idea!
and ye I think it looks better with the bamboos on the ground.
Good luck!

OK, I added more honey drips around, as you told me to do, so, please, let me know is it better now? What do you think about extra honey around? Thank you!!!!

this is ready and perfect!

please critique
http://www.threadless.com/critique/71044/duaskull

this is perfect. sub it

Help me out and Please Score and Comment: Chalkboard Doodles

more then ready! sub it :)

Yep! its very Threadless :) good to go

Looks awesome! Submit it! :)

@dashalu-thank you so much for great help with ideas!!!

i might be OCD, but i keep looking at the tip of the bamboo (the one the panda is holding). idk... i picture honey a little more thick, which is why i'd like to see it more of a round tip, perhaps w/out much emphasis on that round circle that marks the tip of the bamboo.... and the the drip of it a little more round...

anyway, itx no big deal! i still love it and it would make an AWESOME shirt! sub!

I still think there should be a polar bear to add some diversity.

Submit This! :)

submit this..i'll vote for it..
i like panda.. :-)

please visit mine.. :-)

http://www.threadless.com/critique/70917/Adam_Luv_Eve

thx and good luck..

NEW silly design I made, please, check it!

CLICK HERE

I love it!

SUBMIT!!!!

Perfect!! submit!! :D

looks very good! my one problem now is that the panda's dripping bamboo stick, the drip seems a bit plastic to me...it's not really looking as if it's dripping in oppose to it being very hard and solid...like glass...i hope i managed to explain myself :/

Please help me out and rate my design: Killer B

This is ready I think. I can't thin of anything to suggest. Submit :)

Great! I like it just like it is. Submit it!! ;)

If you have some free time can you comment and score my design please? Thank you!

yeah, submit it

huge improvement compared to your first version. :]

yep, much better.. i like it!
show us the placement, and you're ready to sub i think

great work

lol @ ibeenthere. thatx what i've been pointing out...

I love it! Sub it for sure.

I would really appreciate a critique.

http://www.threadless.com/critique/70833/Walking_the_Plank
http://www.threadless.com/critique/71056/Shooting_Stars

Thanks!

OK, this is my final version that I'm going to submit, so please vote!!! thank you so much, all of you for great help.

congratulations, this definitely looks far better than what you started out with.
Though I kinda agree with some of the comments posted here, regarding the look of the honey...
It kinda looks more like plastic, i.e. the patch on the panda's bamboo. Would look better if you made it into a big drop, sticking to his stick. everything else looks great.

Lemme know when this goes up for scoring.

Best'a luck!

thank you!! I know, the drip is kinda weird, but I was lil bit lazy to fix it... thank you so much for you support!

This looks great. I love the texture. My only suggestion, and its not even needed, would be to try and make the honey pop off the shirt. Maybe by making it brighter and changing the color of the shirt. But then the illustration might not look as good. I love it as it is though. Good job!

Wow it's come very far! Ready to sub imo!

please vote for it!!! it's gonna be approved in few days!

I'm waiting for approval

cool, submit

http://www.threadless.com/critique/70836/Woman_Tree

I got rid of the roots. Wanted to get your feedback.

please, score my design! honey panda and bamboo bear :)))

HON-BOO

This is really cute, already rated it

Please rate my submission :) :Alone On a Bicycle For Two

thank you, I rated your as well!!! good luck!

please SCORE THIS DESIGN!!! (this one from above) !!!!

please, score and comment my design, if you have time;
tryingNEWthings

I will give you a 5 ^-^

this was very good!
too bad it didn't get a higher score! :/

Please score my design: Bearminator