added some stuff

well its wierd but a good idea, make it so the girl look like shes sitting normal. Make the plants look more distinct, it took awhile to figure it out, and the girl looks kinda funny adn whats the line on top of her nose?

i like wierd. The bottom line is a chin line. I know the tree and plants need more work. The girl looks funny? Her eyes perhaps?

Thank you for the comments and suggestions.

no theres that little black line above the nose like in the middle of her face. and ya maybe the eyes idk. maybe the boots a little bigger. But if you could show a little more normal of a bend(not completely normal) than more people would want it

ah right o.k.

last sub too bright

I really like this. I actually preferred version 1, I like your drawing style.

i like the brightness better..

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1111/1246365382_23dbeae957_b.jpg



larger version

its not really my style... i think it could use a little brightening up, its a bit dull.. im sure her body is suppose to be akward looking and not porportioned but its not working for me... i think its a cute idea though... people are hard to do, so i give you props. good luck

I worked a bit on the proportions

green dress? give up? ideas please.

This is a good concept - I see a few things that could change:

(only my opinion tho...what do I know?)

I think the colors kind of get lost on the shirt. Maybe give the trees more leaves & make them look less copy/pasted. Make the tree she's holding a little smaller, like a baby tree. Maybe make the green a little brighter.

But overall it's cute & a little melancholy...which I like :)

whew at least one person besides mee thinks its cute. :)

I will work on those suggestions. Thanks

color change

greener

greener

green

Better already! Maybe a different colored shirt too....Brown or sage or natural?

do you like it in the orange colors in version 10?

oops I mean version 8

ooo, I like the orange too, but still not on the blue shirt....

on natural

on brown

vesion 12 is the same but on natural

different placement

Added tears in left eye and moved the little plant over a bit so it looks like she cradling it.

This looks so much better, I love the brown & the subtle changes are very good :) Nice Job!

thank you.

should i do anything else to it?

small changes to face. I like this even if not many other people do. : )

ok cool im likin it now. maybe make the pots make a little more like pots

i'd suggest showing it off on a brown background without the shirt in the big illustration so we'd get a better look at the details, and then just showing the placement on the smaller shirts to the side. the design itself looks great, but you need to make the template presentation a bit more polished..the standard threadless tee template makes doesn't really do it any favours

Oli- Thank you and I will work on the presentation.



Musiclax- cool, I will work on the pots.

fancier presentation

nose and mouth need to be fixed

the plant she is cradling will be in a brown pot like the one she is holding in the other hand.

her lips will e brown as well

hey how do you make your designs like they run height wise, ar ethere different dimensions when setting it up?

i am not sure i understand the question.

her nose and mouth look really small compared to her eyes.

worked on eyes nose and mouth.



Good nite

submit? make the green pots grey? don't submit?

anyone now how to delete an image?

What a lovely presentation....submit!

: ) thanks nikolina.

pots are grey. improved presentation

I'm gonna submit this version soon. Any comments?

Musiclaxlife- itwas really late last night when I read your question. I open a new file in illustrator and set the size. This one started as a 5" x 5" I think.

i like the subtle color choices

My other design Deer mellows is up for voting! yay! please vote for it.

a little brighter

just submitted this. Thanks for all the helpful comments everyone.

excellent, the new template makes it look as good as it is!

aw thanks oli. :)

A great improvement from the first version! This is a sad concept, but I like it, it's very cool. I love the "vintage" look (that is so in right now). The dress and boots are great. The added trees looked etched in, and I really like that too. I guess my only shallow warning (that has nothing to do with your artistic skill) is that you put $5 in the display image, and that turns a lot of people off (myself included) and I've seen works score lower simply because they put "$5" in the display, so I would take that out if I were you...

it was taken out early, but thanks for the tip