Need some input,. How can I make this better??
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Great drawing. Don't have it as a circle on a tee. Use the tee as the background and re position the design on the tee to get the most out of the space

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Love the concept and illustration style u got !
Two thinks pop in my mind:
1. Make some contrast to get more focus to the design.
2. The seabed differs from the cool anchor - try and make it the same type of illustration.

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Made some changes...

Good improvements. Maybe try making the anchor a blueish grey or a sepia tone.

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I'm thinking sailor mode. Blue and white....

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interesting concept

i'm kinda having trouble reading the bottom text correctly...it makes me want to read it as "which hope an anchor we have as of the soul"....which i can't make any sense out of.

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Good skill. More idea?

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I agree with rebelous - I like the ring of the text but the layout makes it a little confusing. Just one line perhaps?

Love the linework!

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Nice illustration but maybe the joke has sailed past me?? sorry if im being dumb please crit my design Tis But A Scratch

The copy reads better on your last version because the anchor was cutting it in half, here it's just separated by white (or blue!) space so it reads funny. Also, it feels a bit big on the shirt, maybe scale it down a bit?

I love how the choice of typeface works so well with the illustration. It feels like a woodcut.

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Nice. I dont get the joke either but i like the illo. :)


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nice, maybe it could be a bit smaller on the T?


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I agree with YaaH, nice use of texture and line work. Not much of a concept. The graphic really is nice though. I also find the text hard to read broken up like that, it makes it confusing on how to read what next after the initial "which hope". At first I read Hope first and then I went to "an anchor" which makes no sense of course.

Is this a famous quote? It's confusing to me read either way. I agree with the above comments that maybe the text should be put together for ease of reading. I don't think that it should be smaller, though, because I think the font that you've chosen needs this size for the sake of readability.

On the dark blue, that anchor is really looking white. I think I would find it more pleasing if there was more shading added, or if you took the opacity down a bit.

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nice changes from v1. the spacing of the words is throwing me off though. the split worked in v1, but now it looks strange. can you link them up better?
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