Would it look too empty on a shirt?

yeah, a little plain, but great idea and execution

^agreed

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Needs colour, but I like the idea.

I think if you used another shade of blue for the deers and Santa it would improve

can you do a "mock-up" on a tee please?

if you want to add to it, maybe a little breathing fog on the window of the kid? i like this

also, the antlers seem to be going the wrong direction

yeah I would make the antlers go the other way

and maybe make the sleigh a bit longer

Maybe one less window to make it less complicated?

It's better since you removed all those lines

Maybe use another color and bring in some "light" on the inside of the plane.

All those people must be very thin and sitting up incredibly straight if you can only see the small amount of their face in the silhouette. Also the chairs must not have any backs.

But that's just me nitpicking the technicalities. The idea is cute, but it might be too plain. The sad thing is I don't want to see the inside of the plane, though. So I think one color is the only way to go on this one, even if it does make it sort of plain.

I love it just the way it is!