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good illo , i donīt know how to improve it!!!
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It's cool...but I feel like it needs something more, it's hard as hell to get a good score on here and though this is pleasing to the eye, there's nothing that "clever" about it...nor is there enough in the design to just make you go WHOA...It's hard to say how to improve it...but I would say a few more colors and maybe work on the sky and have the sun silhouetting through some of the trees. This would require making the design longer and higher on the shirt. Just my honest opinion.
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I like it as it is :)
Adding the sun would be a good idea, though not sure what colour you could do it... |
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Sum sun, yea - and what about the back of the shirt? i would like to see a placement of that :)
My cookies has finally been submitted ! Can i get you to drop a awesome comment at my submission, if u got a minute? "Browse 4 cookies" It could sure need your support ;) |
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it's kind of boring, to be honest. it looks more like a background than a design. add some color, add some details, add something to make this unique and interesting.
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I think the precise reason I love this is that there's nothing in it to make me say whoa. It just looks good - something I'd be comfortable wearing. If you have time, please score my submission
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Please critique mine as well! http://www.threadless.com/critique/69944/Meh_nkey